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    Pyromance 4

    Story written on July 5, 2007 by New Dawn Fades.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=66132
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    Twisted secret lives, the way you bat your eyes…..

     

     

    Bruce knew there was something going on with Carmen. He had that look that Humphrey Bogart had in that movie……..god what was the movie?

     

     

    Carmen reached for my last bag….at the same time I did. Hot fingers brushing against mine. Dangerous moment. Closeness….that feeling of sleeping and getting no rest, that feeling of fighting her threat with mine. Something about being that close to each other….like maybe it ran its course.

     

     

    She thought faster than I did and just pulled me closer to her. My heart racing, my breath short. Just enough time to breathe out before she took my face in her hands and kissed me. Where kisses considered brutal acts of violence? It was in a bad way they way we kissed each other. She was everywhere, that feeling again that maybe I had never kissed someone and meant it. What did I expect? Her back was against the door. When I felt her hands trying to get at me I knew we had to stop.

     

     

     

    “Stop…stopstopstop……Carmen……”

     

     

    “You are….so right…ohgodIamsosorry…….”

     

     

    Composure……

     

     

    Resistance…hesitance…

     

     

    No….stupidity…..

     

     

     

    “Its cool…..we just have to stop….Bruce….he is waiting in the car for…us…..yeah…Bruce….”

     

     

     

    “Shane….I….”

     

     

     

    “Don’t say anything….lets just go….and yeah…..lets go….”

     

     

     

    “Shane…..I really really….wanna be with you….like closeness….”

     

     

     

    “No you don’t Carmen…..you don’t know what you want…..you probably just want to understand your part a little better….”

     

     

    “Wow…..I never ever thought of that…thanks Shane…for making it so crystal clear for me….I want to understand my part better……….…..I’ll see you in the car……”

     

     

     

    Completely loss of hesitant resistance that lead to stupidity…..I was standing right in the middle of it.

     

     

     

    I kept my sunglasses on the entire ride back to civilization. I felt like the coyote clocking out at the end of day in that old cartoon. Carmen and Bruce talked up a storm and I feigned some remote interest. My cell phone finally worked the closer we got to the city. And I had messages. Mostly from my folks. They wanted to have dinner once I got back. The other was from Mark telling me that there had been a change and they hired a new director…some uber militant lesbian music video director named Alice Pieszecki….Shecter was out…..

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    6. Ah, man pleaz come on and update like now!!! You’re leaving us hangin’ jus a lil bit toooooooooo long, lol. Whelp, you already know I’m in love with thiz chicka so . . . Yeah, like alwayz from me, Baby-gurl, LYLAS ;-p . . . Stank . . . Da’ one and only chicka =D

    7. So happy to see some Shane/Carmen fic. I like Bette and Tina but I’m ODing on all the BT fic at the mo, I welcome the change. Plus, Shane is my fav character by far and I like to see her play starring roles in fic, with or without Carmen, but with is better. Thanks for writing!

    9. ***** Oh, look at me. I’m a rebel, because I gave this story a rating anyway! Bwa-ha-ha! Anyway, I thought it was cool how Shane told Carmen that she asked a lot of personal questions, then Carmen apologized only to ask the same question again. I know it sounds lame, but I just love all the little gems in the story. From the things the characters say, to simply mentioning random things like Kevin Arnold or the “time to make the donuts.” It’s the details that really give all your stories a certain personality. I fricken love it. You know what? I’m gonna go nutty here and give it SIX fricken stars. ****** (Yeah, that’s right, I did that.) ;) Keep up the awesome work and don’t let the haters who hide behind ratings get your goat. Not worth it.

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