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Pyromance 4
“Mom….jeez one question a time…..”
“Hey kiddo…..man you look great…..” Dad said giving me a big hug.
“Hey dad….how’s Shay doing?”
“Well you know your brother….He is with a girl and he’s riding motorcycles…..The scouts think he will get taken first overall. You’re gonna be there right? I mean its his big day….even though he might go to the Rangers…but its close right….Philly’s just 4 years away……”
“Dad maybe Philly will trade up for him…..wait…..Shay’s gonna go first overall? When did this happen?”
“Goodness a famous movie star already….Shane your baby brother had a monster season with Ottawa….79 goals…123 assists. And he led the league in Pims…..” Dad said handing me his junior all star card.
“Wow….umm…yeah I’ll be there…..what day is it?”
“The 19th…..”
“Shit I might be filming then….I don’t know…”
“Shane…don’t worry about it…your brother should come first…I am sure they will let you go for a day.” Carmen says full of concern.
“Oh shit…Carmen…these are my folks…..Gabriel and….Carla…..mom…dad…this is Carmen Morales…she is my co-star…you might remember her from the show….”
“Nice to meet you.”
“Oh my god…Gabe honey…we just saw a movie of yours on the flight over……you where wonderful…..”
“Thank you….might I ask which movie?”
“The one with that slimy monster….you see Gabe I told you. How in gods name can you confuse her with Sigourney Weaver?”
“No….Mrs. McCutcheon…that was the remake I was in….Sigourney Weaver was in the original…..thank you though…”
Surreal. I needed a smoke and fast.
“Shane honey…I didn’t know you where going to have company…we can go….”
“No mom please stay here…I have room…An extra bedroom for you guys…..Please make yourselves at home. I need to make a few calls then we can go out for dinner….I’ll take you to Sugerfoots…..”
“That’s my baby girl….sure….Miss Carmen will you join us?” Mom asks.
“Oh I don’t know….”
“Oh please it will be so nice to talk with both of you about this new movie…Shane is being so hush, hush about it…maybe you can tell us………”
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Wow! Good that they got to talk. Finally! I love your fic so PPS.
aww you left us hanging! damn i love it! :)
Adore the way you showed Carmen’s carefulness, curiosity for Shane by Shane’s POV. think that it’s harder than by Carmen’s POV.
Completely honest w/ how they are feeling, that was sweet. Carmen’s pouty behavior in the car was too funny – so her.
Its been 5 days! I miss it…. i need it. Love it thanks!
Ah, man pleaz come on and update like now!!! You’re leaving us hangin’ jus a lil bit toooooooooo long, lol. Whelp, you already know I’m in love with thiz chicka so . . . Yeah, like alwayz from me, Baby-gurl, LYLAS ;-p . . . Stank . . . Da’ one and only chicka =D
So happy to see some Shane/Carmen fic. I like Bette and Tina but I’m ODing on all the BT fic at the mo, I welcome the change. Plus, Shane is my fav character by far and I like to see her play starring roles in fic, with or without Carmen, but with is better. Thanks for writing!
I just found and caught up with this story. Good stuff! Please continue soon.
***** Oh, look at me. I’m a rebel, because I gave this story a rating anyway! Bwa-ha-ha! Anyway, I thought it was cool how Shane told Carmen that she asked a lot of personal questions, then Carmen apologized only to ask the same question again. I know it sounds lame, but I just love all the little gems in the story. From the things the characters say, to simply mentioning random things like Kevin Arnold or the “time to make the donuts.” It’s the details that really give all your stories a certain personality. I fricken love it. You know what? I’m gonna go nutty here and give it SIX fricken stars. ****** (Yeah, that’s right, I did that.) ;) Keep up the awesome work and don’t let the haters who hide behind ratings get your goat. Not worth it.
aah i love the fact that carmen always wanted shane !! thanks for posting, this story is awesome.
This is the perfect fic for this time of year…”the feel good hit of the summer”. Two thumbs up and five stars.
not that cliffhanger is waayyy too cruel!! i love this story
great as always! I was suprised about the parents but they were really cool!!!
I really love this. You’re doing a great job as usual!Thanks