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    Reflection: Epilogue

    Story written on October 17, 2005 by ayns.
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    Bette reflecting on their first time together Chapter 5

    When she was nervously relieving me from the rest of my clothes I couldn’t take my eyes off her face. It was captivating watching the expressions dance across her features. Her concentration was unparalleled, like she was trying to take in every part of me with all her senses, staring at me, touching me, breathing deeply trying inhaling my scent. When the last of my clothing dropped to the floor she was silently drinking me in, a look of awe on her face. I let her have that moment, remembering just what it felt like. I had never wanted her more than I did in that instant.

    When she finally reached out and touched me I thought I might die. Her exploration was making me melt and when her fingers brushed my *****, I couldn’t help but moan. For a woman with so much experience, I felt like I was being touched for the first time. When she pulled away, my eyes shot open, feeling the painful loss of contact; but the look on her face as she examined my wetness on her finger was so intensely erotic I almost came at the sight. As she placed those fingers in her mouth, her eyes rolling back with obvious delight, I lost what little control I had left.

    I pushed her on the bed, needing that full body embrace, needing to lick the taste from her mouth. She was stunned I know, but responded immediately, matching me grind for grind, moan for moan. Every inch of us connected pushing hard and fast, needing to relieve that initial ache so we could continue our journey. I spread us both apart hearing her gasp at the contact, all the breath leaving my body as well. I tasted her skin, her sweat, savoring the moment as best I could. When I sunk my teeth into her, I felt her let go, feeling myself follow soon after. It felt incredible to be so in sync, to be able to please each other through a simple embrace.

    As we lay together after, trying to regulate our breathing, she clung to me as I did to her. We shared our warmth and our breath and every last ounce of strength holding each other close. When our eyes finally met, I knew I was home. I had found that person to spend the rest of my life with.

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    2. wow………one of the most touching stories i’ve ever read
      you should do this with every pair !!!

      but on the serious notes that was truly touching, we don’t see enough of that emotion anymore… :)

    3. That was just absolutely amazing. I really loved the way you wrote Tina’s experience it made my heart float away. And now the way you wrote Bette was like reading art. The way she gave herself completely to Tina that is true love. Thank you for this story.

    4. YaaaY im so glad that you couldnt resist writting Bettes POV and that was so amazeing,and so romantic! so now we can all relive it again and again whenever we want to. may just go back and re read all your chapters thanks so much.

    12. **looking around for a cigarette** That’s right, you know I don’t smoke but I need something. That was….**breathless**….so good. Guess a celery stick will have to do.
      Outstanding writing. You aren’t still in school are you? (smile)

    13. Ayns, thank you for sharing such erotic romance with us. A new job and a new puppy have taken so much of my time these past 2 months; but I am so glad that the time was available for me to finish reading your story tonight……You are truly gifted in every sense of the word. I can only borrow what others have said or implied; you transcend the act of sex into a form of art. Your writing is what “making love” is all about and I love how you made love to us!!!!!!! Once again…..Thank You!!

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