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Reflection: Epilogue
I told her it was only the beginning which earned me an immediate look of surprise followed by a lusty giggle. We spent the rest of the night learning each others bodies. What made us gasp and moan, what made us buck. The first time I licked her she nearly threw us both off the bed. I had to hold her down as I worked her ***** with my tongue. She had spread her legs wider, gripping my hair and pushing me against her. She was wild and passionate and kept begging for more, more fingers, more tongue, it didn’t seem to matter as long as it was more. My tongue inside her sent her over the edge the first time, my nose grinding her ***** into her public bone. I was surrounded by her, her taste and her smell, she firm ***** in my hands. When she flooded my tongue, I couldn’t seem to get enough, drinking in every last drop. She was intoxicating, like nothing I’d ever tasted before. I didn’t let up, pushing my fingers into her quickly, wanting to watch this time as I sent her over the edge. I shared her tasted with her, feeling her groan out her approval. Her face was pained with excruciating pleasure as I increased my thrusting, adding my leg for strength. I asked her to open her eyes, wanting to see what she was feeling. I could always read her through her soft, expressive brown eyes. The look on her face was like nothing I’d ever seen before. Surprise and desire and pleasure and love all rolled into one. I knew she loved me I could see it in her eyes and hope she saw that in mine too. It was as if we were silently declaring the perfection of the moment. It was then that I curled my fingers, brushing her G spot. Her eyes snapped shut, unable to control herself any longer. Her mouth opened, but no sound came out, just her warm breath washing over my face. She tensed and shuddered, pulling me against her, squeezing my fingers tight inside her. I never wanted that moment to end.
As we lay together, glowing in the aftermath, we tried to tell each other verbally what we had said earlier with our eyes, failing to articulate just how wonderful it felt. We settled with I love you’s, which said it all. Not two seconds later she attacked me. And what a glorious attack it was.
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(57 votes, average: 3.95 out of 5)
Noo not the end, this story is just wonderful
wow………one of the most touching stories i’ve ever read
you should do this with every pair !!!
but on the serious notes that was truly touching, we don’t see enough of that emotion anymore… :)
That was just absolutely amazing. I really loved the way you wrote Tina’s experience it made my heart float away. And now the way you wrote Bette was like reading art. The way she gave herself completely to Tina that is true love. Thank you for this story.
YaaaY im so glad that you couldnt resist writting Bettes POV and that was so amazeing,and so romantic! so now we can all relive it again and again whenever we want to. may just go back and re read all your chapters thanks so much.
Absolutely fabulous! LOVED IT!!!!!!! Thanks.
As Dino would say, “Ain’t love a kick in the head”
WOW!!!!! What a great story, and SOOOO hot!!! Thank you for sharing it with us…post soon.
that was fucking beautiful…thank you. I hope you give us more of our girls.
Loved your story and your writing, so much detail and emotion. I look forward to your next posting- hope it’s soon!
no ime for comments gotta go and read this great chapter again == good job, post soon!
Excellent writing. Excellent story – will there be another?
**looking around for a cigarette** That’s right, you know I don’t smoke but I need something. That was….**breathless**….so good. Guess a celery stick will have to do.
Outstanding writing. You aren’t still in school are you? (smile)
Ayns, thank you for sharing such erotic romance with us. A new job and a new puppy have taken so much of my time these past 2 months; but I am so glad that the time was available for me to finish reading your story tonight……You are truly gifted in every sense of the word. I can only borrow what others have said or implied; you transcend the act of sex into a form of art. Your writing is what “making love” is all about and I love how you made love to us!!!!!!! Once again…..Thank You!!
oh god honey. that is definately something to send me off to bed with. you are so descriptive its almost unbearable. dayum that was good. thanks.
Evefyone is off to bed,witha ahappy smile. On to take a showfer and rest my weary heasd,, thanks for a wonderful story for me to dream on.
haha i have to agree with al…goin to bed after reading this is excellent
Amazing Thank you!
BEAUTIFUL…THNK U..
Thank you.
awwww..what an awesome ending..! :)
Am speachless… Thanks for the wonderful story!
wow now that was the best thing to wake up to… it was beautiful…thank you
Definate award winner!
Wow! Amazing! Beautiful and so much more… Please post again soon.
very,very good, really enjoyed the points of view!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you…those chapters were great, that’s why I love B/T beginnings…tks
How can anyone not love these two. You captured a perfect 1st time for them. Nicely done…very nice.
Yowza. That was sweet and hot and lovely and just wonderful. Thanks!
Damn that is so beautiful and amazing, so happey for them. Thank you for the story and hope you have another one coming. Thanks!