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    Reflection: Epilogue

    Story written on October 17, 2005 by ayns.
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    Bette reflecting on their first time together Chapter 5

    She told me it was her turn to please me, but the look in her eyes told me she was nervous. She assured me she was ready, she was just unsure she could please me the way I had her. I told her she pleased me everyday, that the pleasure I got from simply being in her presence far surpassed anything I had ever felt before. That seemed to calm her nerves and she went straight to work. She explored every inch of my body with her hands and her mouth, including the nail marks she’d left on my shoulder blade. I plan on wearing a tank top tomorrow so I can wear my trophy with pride! She was relentless in her survey of my body. Finding where I was ticklish, where I would moan if she licked me, where she would moan if she licked me. She worked from head to toe and back again. When she left a chaste kiss on the instep of my foot, I couldn’t help the giggle that escaped my mouth. I was a little ticklish after all. I told her she was the first person to ever kiss me there and she told me she was glad to be my first. I had to hold back a happy tear, thinking to myself she was the first person I had ever been in love with. She continued her journey, skimming over the spot where I needed her the most, paying me back for my earlier teasing. But when she got to my *****, she was completely captivated again.

    I had to suppress my giggle with her seemingly endless fascination. She sucked and nibbled every inch of my chest. Cupping my breast, palming my nipple, licking light circles around my areolas. She nuzzled the tender skin at the bottom of each breast, ran her tongue along my sternum, back and forth and back again. Even employing some of my own tricks, making me delirious with pleasure. She is definitely a quick learner. When her teasing began to be too much, I pulled her face to mind capturing her in a desperate kiss. I begged her to touch me, to be inside me, something I rarely did with anyone I was with. I was always in control, always governing the pleasure. But I was at her mercy now, she could do with me what she wanted and I had never felt more alive.

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    2. wow………one of the most touching stories i’ve ever read
      you should do this with every pair !!!

      but on the serious notes that was truly touching, we don’t see enough of that emotion anymore… :)

    3. That was just absolutely amazing. I really loved the way you wrote Tina’s experience it made my heart float away. And now the way you wrote Bette was like reading art. The way she gave herself completely to Tina that is true love. Thank you for this story.

    4. YaaaY im so glad that you couldnt resist writting Bettes POV and that was so amazeing,and so romantic! so now we can all relive it again and again whenever we want to. may just go back and re read all your chapters thanks so much.

    12. **looking around for a cigarette** That’s right, you know I don’t smoke but I need something. That was….**breathless**….so good. Guess a celery stick will have to do.
      Outstanding writing. You aren’t still in school are you? (smile)

    13. Ayns, thank you for sharing such erotic romance with us. A new job and a new puppy have taken so much of my time these past 2 months; but I am so glad that the time was available for me to finish reading your story tonight……You are truly gifted in every sense of the word. I can only borrow what others have said or implied; you transcend the act of sex into a form of art. Your writing is what “making love” is all about and I love how you made love to us!!!!!!! Once again…..Thank You!!

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