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Reflection
One night over the phone as we both lay in separate beds she confessed to me that she’d never truly been in a relationship before, not like the one she had with me she said. Her words were so quiet and broken, I had to strain to hear them. She had said she usually only slept with woman and sent them on their way. She had said that she had never met anyone before that she wanted to settle down with until now. And she said she was ashamed of her past and of her behavior because she didn’t think that someone who acted like that was worthy enough to be with me. That was the moment I fell in love with her.
After this conversation was the first time that I thought I was ready to make love to her. I couldn’t control my body when I was around her. We made out like teenagers, on my couch, in the back of movie theaters, pressed up against the door of her house before we even made it out. Our first dance had made me wetter than I ever thought possible. Her hands on my lower back pulling me close, the swell of her ***** pressing down on mine, the smell of her skin as I nuzzled her neck making her sigh out her arousal. But each time ended with Bette pulling away, telling me she wanted to make sure that I was ready, that she wasn’t pressuring me into doing something that I wasn’t ready for. And as frustrated as I had been every time, I was also relieved as I was still so unsure of what to do.
It wasn’t the thought of Bette touching me that made me nervous, I couldn’t wait for that to be honest. It was the thought of me touching Bette that left me perplexed. Sure I knew how to pleasure myself and what made me feel good, but would that make Bette feel good, could I pleasure her the was she deserved to be pleasured? She’d been with many women, I didn’t think I would ever compare, but her admission that night coupled with my overwhelming hormones made me think that that night would be the night.
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(45 votes, average: 3.69 out of 5)
Simplicity is best when it comes to showing the one you love just how much they mean to you. This was a beautiful beginning and I do hope you post again very soon.
This was an entoxicating buildup to what I hope is a very loving first time for them both. Tina’s fist time w/ a woman, Bette’s first time giving herself to her partner, her lover, her T.
That was perfect. Loved it.
There is a bonus for those that wait. That was beautiful.. thanks
That was great. Thanks and please more.
wow…they are ready then …bring it on..lol..great chapter post real soon please
That was truly amazing I think, that is one of the best chapters I have read
Very moving, your writing is excellent and I’m so glad I took the time to read this! Now I have to go back and read your other work. Thank you!
OMG! That was possibly the most romantic thing I’ve encountered in quite some time! I loved that insight into Tina’s thoughts on Bette and the emotions leading up to their first time…WOW! I loved it! Thank you for sharing!
Great job! Thanks for writing.
I’m a new reader of yours but already a die-hard fan. Absolutely gorgeous prose. Thanks for sharing.
Damn that was so fucking beautiful story and so amazing about these 2, love them. What a lovely story, love it. Can’t wait to see the next one, post soon please. Thanks!
What a gift this is. I so love your story.
Great job! I love I just love the way you are able to capture the characters. I have not seen a storyline like this one in awhile. Please continue…I want to see what happens. Two thumbs up for you!
holy hot dayum. wow . i mean shit. that was just excellent. now i can go to bed and think on that piece of heaven. thanks.
Very sweet, as well as hot. Thanks for sharing this.
beautiful… please post soon.
hot digity dayum, your words are simply breathtaking….
wow..you’re great! felt so real. :) post soon!
now that was beautiful… loved every word… and i can’t wait for the next chapter
OMG..this is beautiful. thank you. please post soon
this is truly a beautiful story. please come back soon. thanks.
OMFG BEAUTIFUL.
Post soon!!! I’m loving this.
WHOA! Wonderful story I LOve it Please continue post soon Thanks!
Simply beautiful…
That was truly one of the much touching Bette & Tina’s first time I ever read in this site and I’m feeling pretty moved – especially reading your wonderful last lines. That’s so right indeed : true love is more luminous than hundred candles and sweetest than rose petals ! When there’s such a tenderness surrounding a first time, poetry is everywhere…
And candlelights shine in eyes and hearts.
Thank you for this marvellous piece of pure beauty. I simply adored it !
… and cannot wait for the next update, of course…