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Reflection
I had set it up perfectly; candles and rose petals and a chilled bottle of wine. It was going to be a surprise. I had invited her over for a movie night, quickly becoming one of our favorite nights because it usually ended in us making out for hours. I answered the door in a black lace night gown that earned a stunned, but visibly aroused look from Bette. She stood there with two movies in her hand clearly confused as to what was happening.
“Um…T…”
“Hi babe, come on in.”
“What’s going on?”
“Well, I thought that maybe tonight could be, you know, the night.” I didn’t know what else to say, hoping she would understand.
“Are you sure? I don’t want you to do something..”
I cut her off because I knew what she was going to say. “I’m not doing something I’m not ready for, I’m doing something that we are both so ready for.”
The smile that crossed her face melted my heart. She threw the movies on the couch and attacked me with such ferocity I was thrown off balance. She crushed her mouth to mine and her hands roamed freely over my back before landing squarely on my *****. A shiver ran up my spine sending electric jolts to every part of my body. I slipped my hands under her shirt and let myself worship the expanse of her back. Her skin felt like silk beneath my hands and I wanted to touch every part of her. She moaned deep in my mouth and started walking me backwards toward my bedroom never breaking our kiss. When we reached the edge of my bed, she pulled back and gazed into my eyes. She traced the contours of my face and her eyes darted around drinking me in.
“Babe?”
“Just trying to commit every single second to memory T.”
I pushed through her hands then, needing to feel her mouth on mine. She pulled me to her and lowered me softly to the bed, our bodies pressed together the whole time. Her weight felt comforting on top of me and I spread my legs so we could be even closer. She cupped my breast over the nightie and traced her thumb around my nipple. I inhaled sharply. She trailed her lips down to my neck and sucked lightly on my pulse point. This just increased the throbbing in my groin. I tangled my hands into her hair, scrapping my nails over her scalp on the way. She moved her mouth down to my breast and bit it through the thin material. I felt her hand run lightly over my inner thing making it’s ascent up my leg. When her fingertips reached the edge of my underwear was the moment I felt myself tense up and she had felt it too. I hated myself in that moment. I wanted this, I wanted it so bad and I got her all worked up and what do I do, I freeze. She pulled back to look at my face, but I couldn’t make eye contact with her, I felt so ashamed. I looked to the side as tears slid down my face.
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(45 votes, average: 3.69 out of 5)
Simplicity is best when it comes to showing the one you love just how much they mean to you. This was a beautiful beginning and I do hope you post again very soon.
This was an entoxicating buildup to what I hope is a very loving first time for them both. Tina’s fist time w/ a woman, Bette’s first time giving herself to her partner, her lover, her T.
That was perfect. Loved it.
There is a bonus for those that wait. That was beautiful.. thanks
That was great. Thanks and please more.
wow…they are ready then …bring it on..lol..great chapter post real soon please
That was truly amazing I think, that is one of the best chapters I have read
Very moving, your writing is excellent and I’m so glad I took the time to read this! Now I have to go back and read your other work. Thank you!
OMG! That was possibly the most romantic thing I’ve encountered in quite some time! I loved that insight into Tina’s thoughts on Bette and the emotions leading up to their first time…WOW! I loved it! Thank you for sharing!
Great job! Thanks for writing.
I’m a new reader of yours but already a die-hard fan. Absolutely gorgeous prose. Thanks for sharing.
Damn that was so fucking beautiful story and so amazing about these 2, love them. What a lovely story, love it. Can’t wait to see the next one, post soon please. Thanks!
What a gift this is. I so love your story.
Great job! I love I just love the way you are able to capture the characters. I have not seen a storyline like this one in awhile. Please continue…I want to see what happens. Two thumbs up for you!
holy hot dayum. wow . i mean shit. that was just excellent. now i can go to bed and think on that piece of heaven. thanks.
Very sweet, as well as hot. Thanks for sharing this.
beautiful… please post soon.
hot digity dayum, your words are simply breathtaking….
wow..you’re great! felt so real. :) post soon!
now that was beautiful… loved every word… and i can’t wait for the next chapter
OMG..this is beautiful. thank you. please post soon
this is truly a beautiful story. please come back soon. thanks.
OMFG BEAUTIFUL.
Post soon!!! I’m loving this.
WHOA! Wonderful story I LOve it Please continue post soon Thanks!
Simply beautiful…
That was truly one of the much touching Bette & Tina’s first time I ever read in this site and I’m feeling pretty moved – especially reading your wonderful last lines. That’s so right indeed : true love is more luminous than hundred candles and sweetest than rose petals ! When there’s such a tenderness surrounding a first time, poetry is everywhere…
And candlelights shine in eyes and hearts.
Thank you for this marvellous piece of pure beauty. I simply adored it !
… and cannot wait for the next update, of course…