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“So, TKP, there is a lot of buzz about your new movie!” Alice declared, “I heard they are using words like “groundbreaking” and “never before seen visual effects” … tell us, is it true?”
“Well…yes, it is generating some buzz…” Tina started, her brain foggy as she looked for help from Bette.
Bette interjected, sensing Tina still needed time to land. “Tell me about the metal work, Elena. I hear it is exquisite and I would love to see it” she said quickly, diverting attention away from Tina to Elena. She rubbed her thumb over the back of Tina’s hand and squeezed it. Tina dropped her head to rest on Bette’s shoulder, moving her foot on top of Bette’s in the sand.
“The pivotal scene takes place in the metal jungle, where the two characters have to find each other through what initially appears to be a maze…” Elena started when Alice interrupted her.
“Ok, ok… blah blah… cut through the bullshit, who did the work?” she asked, looking from Elena to Lara and back again.
Elena shifted uncomfortably and glanced at Tina. Getting no help from that direction she shrugged.
Lara spoke up “she won’t say it because she is worried she will get in trouble, but Elena did all the detail work and came up with the idea for the secret door…”
Elena frowned at her and Tina sat up, leaning in and engaged now.
“What do you mean?” she asked quietly as Shane gave a low whistle. When Elena hesitated, Tina spoke again. “You won’t get in trouble Elena, I promise… this is very important. Tell me what Lara means, about you coming up with the idea for the door…”
Elena took a long swallow of her beer and glanced at Shane who nodded.
“Lara…shared some of the script with me…” Elena said, “I read the last part where they have to hide from the invaders and realized that the jungle we designed wasn’t big enough to give the audience a full appreciation of the desperation of the situation. I have always loved secret doors, so … so I added one”, she finished succinctly. The group was silent, Tina sitting back in her chair with a look of surprise and Shane shook her head.
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What a marvelous surorise : a new chapter of your so delightful, deeply endearing story I love so much !!
Oh, I was there, savouring all your last chapters with the same joy – simply, I wasn’t there enough, emotionally, to be able to comment….
Let just say I’m suffering of a relapse of this strange invisible illness called depression – c’est la vie, n’est-ce pas ?
But nothing will keep me far of your so precious story, my dear talented author,,,
Thank you SO much for this medication :-)
A,
So very glad you liked it! And glad you feel strong enough today to comment. I struggle with Depression as well as it’s good friend Anxiety. They often come hand in hand to disrupt my day. So I hear you. Message me if you need to talk. This story helps me cope with the strange tidbits being offered in the trailers where it appears Bette is without her other half…
Your Bette and Tina are so wonderful. This is love and the bonding of a maturing couple who have had their troubles but have found the secret to happiness – communication, and sharing of their lives, their fears, their emotions and their bodies. I just want to see that with every revelation of Bette’s history, Bette does not question even to herself that Tina will leave her. So unless Bette does something to break the trust they have in each other, Tina will remain by her side. At this point, its hard for me to see Bette or Tina doing anything which they know would hurt the other. At least anything like cheating or lying or being deceptive. I think they would sooner die first. The cost would be to great. Bette and Tina forever…
Thank you Martha. I have decided to write this Bette as the couple I always hoped they became, deeply flawed and needing to work together but committed to the relationship. Challenges will come their way but they will deal with them together. Thank you for commenting and reading…
Excellent! Beautiful! Thanks
Hi BK,
What a way to escape in the past with our favourite couple!!!
I mentioned it before, but i am really in love with your story!!! This version of Tibette warms my heart, you show us clearly their love for each other! They have matured and it is great to see Bette open up about her past with Tina without being scared anymore that Tina will leave her!
It was a fun, sexy and relaxing day for them at the beach, together with their friends.
Looking forward to the next chapter!!!
Thank you for reading and for consistently commenting. I thought they needed some fun after the break through with Bette’s story last chapter. :)
Your story is making me forget about the horrible trailers. It is wonderful seeing Bette and Tina communicate at all levels. They have matured so much and know what their weaknesses are and are determined to work together to fix them. The lovemaking in the ocean was passionate and intimate and convey the deep love they have for each other.
Yes, JS. I have watched the trailers many times and I am not sure I can watch a Bette where Tina is gone. Is she dead? Moved on? Out of the country? In prison? None of these are acceptable. Horrible is a good word to describe it. I dont read forums to see what other fans are saying but it seems like this will cause some backlash?? Glad you like the story…
Loving this!
Please post soon this Bette and Tina I love!
SG
They’re so sweet and in love !
Love your story.