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The rain streaked down Helena’s town car. Alice had implored her to act more normal so she began driving instead of being driven. “Where did you want to go?” she asked Alice glancing at her as she drove. Alice wore a rather expensive looking yellow garment that she obviously didn’t buy herself.
“Oh I was thinking, maybe the Resturante Forte,” Alice said passively as they drove.
“The Forte it is then,” Helena smirked. She had been waiting for this opportunity for a while, to take her out to a nice place. Alice had always seemed distracted before and relented not to go out. She had wondered what had changed her mind for this evening but she dare not ask let she fear she knew the answer.
The lamp light startled Shane. She wasn’t usually so easy to wake up but being in a strange place she began to stir quite easily. She opened her eyes and found that her new roomate had snuck back into the room. She fumbled over her clothes on the bed pushing them into a neat lump on the floor next to the bed. She picked out a pair of sweatpants and a t-shirt and placed them into one corner of the bed. It was only then Shane realised that her roomate was drenched from head to foot.
The girl started taking off her shirt and tossed it into another slowly forming heap on the floor. As the pile of clothes ascended with her pants and undergarments she placed the sweatpants and shirt on before folding herself into the bed. Shane couldn’t get a good look at her with it being to dark. She would see her in the morning, she resigned as her new room mate turned off the lamp into pitch darkness once again.
“This is nice,” Helena stated looking rather impressed with the decour. She had expected Alice to pick somewhere more, well, Alice. Less expensive and posh to more light hearted and paper hated. Alice looked anxiously around the room. The waiter brought Helena the wine list as requested and placed a menu infront of Alice.
“Miss,” the waiter interrupted.
“Yeah thanks,” Alice said. Helena watched her intently.
“You seem distracted,” she said. Alice snapped her attention back to Helena.
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fabulous story, you’re a really good author!You seem to know the characters very well! I must say I was suprised Carmen doesn’t want to be with Shane anymore ,please don’t let it be that way , they are perfect for one another ,pretty please:)
This is a really impressive story and one that i will definitely be checking for updates. I love how detailed it is and how much thought that has obviously been put into making the story what it is. I thought it was hilarious when Blaine, a Shane look-alike was introduced as Carmen’s new girlfiend.I mean even the name is similar, classic! Anyhow, I hope that Carmen changes her mind, cause she’s Shane’s girl not Blaine’s.
i like the style of writing…cool! keep posting..!!
This is BRILLIANT! Totally fresh, original and witty . I loved that Carmen’s new g/f looks like Shane , it totally cracked me up .I hope you update soon because it’s a really great fic and let Carmen and Shane make up , they are soul mates . Carmen can date Blaine but still desire to be with Shane. AWESOME JOB!!5 STARS. update soon,please…..
*juicy* dare I request more???? This was good…:-)
Im enjoying this. I really like Will and how she helped Shane at the end. Hope you keep going with this.
This is a great story:) I hope that this isn’t the end for Shane&Carmen, please , let Carmen give her another chance. She’s dating a Shane lookalike , she obviously wants her!
This was great! You have obviously spent a lot of time developing this story, and is definitely worth it!!
I told u i was going to comment and here i am LOL. It’s a really good story and i really like it. I cant wait for ur next post so hurry up with that editing!! POST SOON!! :)