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“Do I? I’m sorry, my mind’s just been on other things, I..” Alice stopped and started staring over her shoulder. Helena followed her gaze and turned around. There in a booth was Dana and Tara eating what appeared to be a painfully romantic dinner and holding hands.
“I see. This is where you’re mind has been,” Helena said curtly and stood up. She slammed her napkin down on the table and walked out of the restaurant. Alice only just realised and came after her.
“Helena wait,” she called.
Helena got into her town car and placed the key into the ignition just as Alice climbed in the other side of the car. “I don’t appreciate being led about so you can spy on your ex-girlfriend and her lover,” Helena said trying to turn the key in the ignition but having a hard time.
Alice became enraged and yelled, “Well I don’t appreciate being compared day in and day out to one of YOUR ex-girlfriend’s. It might come as a surprise to you Helena Peabody, but not everyone can be hard up and pregnat just to meet your standards.” Alice frumped, face red, in the passenger seat.
“At least I don’t go stalking them every chance I get. Face it Alice, she left you. She left you because unh” she tried the ignition again “you’re obssessive and you’re a nag.” Helena retaliated.
“A nag?! A nag?! Biiiiiig talk coming from someone who’s only joy in life is keeping Bette Porter, your ex-girlfriend’s lover, from becoming a bigger sucess than you and you’re family will ever be,” Alice echoed through the car.
Helena froze, “I don’t want to live in the shadow of your obssession.” She glared at the steering wheel willing the ignition to start.
“Well, I do’t want to be in the shadow of you’re ego,” Alice started “and you have to press in before you turn the key. Here.” Alice leaned over and started the car for Helena. As the engine roared to life Helena reflected.
“It seems we both have much to overcome.” Helena turned off the car and both of them sat their in silence for what seemed like hours. Slowly Helena emerged from the car and walked toward the restaurant beckoning Alice as she did. When they arrived at their table the puzzled waiter asked them if everything was ok.
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fabulous story, you’re a really good author!You seem to know the characters very well! I must say I was suprised Carmen doesn’t want to be with Shane anymore ,please don’t let it be that way , they are perfect for one another ,pretty please:)
This is a really impressive story and one that i will definitely be checking for updates. I love how detailed it is and how much thought that has obviously been put into making the story what it is. I thought it was hilarious when Blaine, a Shane look-alike was introduced as Carmen’s new girlfiend.I mean even the name is similar, classic! Anyhow, I hope that Carmen changes her mind, cause she’s Shane’s girl not Blaine’s.
i like the style of writing…cool! keep posting..!!
This is BRILLIANT! Totally fresh, original and witty . I loved that Carmen’s new g/f looks like Shane , it totally cracked me up .I hope you update soon because it’s a really great fic and let Carmen and Shane make up , they are soul mates . Carmen can date Blaine but still desire to be with Shane. AWESOME JOB!!5 STARS. update soon,please…..
*juicy* dare I request more???? This was good…:-)
Im enjoying this. I really like Will and how she helped Shane at the end. Hope you keep going with this.
This is a great story:) I hope that this isn’t the end for Shane&Carmen, please , let Carmen give her another chance. She’s dating a Shane lookalike , she obviously wants her!
This was great! You have obviously spent a lot of time developing this story, and is definitely worth it!!
I told u i was going to comment and here i am LOL. It’s a really good story and i really like it. I cant wait for ur next post so hurry up with that editing!! POST SOON!! :)