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“Yeah and the best thing is that Mr. Carvington wants to do it at CAC,” Tina chimed in. The girls started laughing.
“How does Franklin feel about it all,” Kit asked her, looking concerned. Bette smiled.
“He hates it. All that effort to break my contract and kick me out and he still has me working there. My only question is how did he get Helena to go through with it?” Bette inquired. The girls looked over at Alice and she practically dropped her coffee cup.
“How would I know?” Alice asked innocently. She met with a continued skeptical gaze. “Well, fine. She um really didn’t have a choice. Her mother well.. She said she was very convincing,” Alice explained hastingly filling her mouth with coffee. “Oh look, all out, darn. Better get some more.” and with that she sprinted toward the bar.
“So when is all this happening,” Carmen asked getting the subject back on to the light hearted side.
“Well, he said if everything goes as planned, next Monday,” Bette answered. A little gasp went through the clique.
“Wow, that soon? Hmm. Just be careful baby sis,” Kit said and patted Bette’s leg. “You’re working in a lion’s den of trouble.”
Alice recieved her ordered coffe and reached for a sugar packet. As she started stirring she looked over at another section of the counter and saw Lara leaning over the bench laughing with someone just out of Alice’s view. Her stirring became more vigurous as she watched the chef lean backwards just enough so Alice could see Dana holding Lara’ s hand across the bar. Alice heard something break and she quickly realised her coffe mug had shattered in her hands.
“Alice, are you ok?” Kit asked walking up behind her. “Honey you have coffee all over you?” she continued.
Alice looked at her clothing and realised that she did have coffee staining her green blouse. “I’m sorry, Kit. I’ll pay for the cup,” she began. Kit shook it off.
“Don’t worry about it baby, important thing is that you’re not hurt,” Kit began.
“I’ll be fine,” Alice said as she turned around and walked out of the Planet.
“I think it’s great that Bette might be getting a job soon. Especially in the art field, she’ll be elated,” Carmen started. She walked through their bedroom door and down the hall to the communal bathroom.
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fabulous story, you’re a really good author!You seem to know the characters very well! I must say I was suprised Carmen doesn’t want to be with Shane anymore ,please don’t let it be that way , they are perfect for one another ,pretty please:)
This is a really impressive story and one that i will definitely be checking for updates. I love how detailed it is and how much thought that has obviously been put into making the story what it is. I thought it was hilarious when Blaine, a Shane look-alike was introduced as Carmen’s new girlfiend.I mean even the name is similar, classic! Anyhow, I hope that Carmen changes her mind, cause she’s Shane’s girl not Blaine’s.
i like the style of writing…cool! keep posting..!!
This is BRILLIANT! Totally fresh, original and witty . I loved that Carmen’s new g/f looks like Shane , it totally cracked me up .I hope you update soon because it’s a really great fic and let Carmen and Shane make up , they are soul mates . Carmen can date Blaine but still desire to be with Shane. AWESOME JOB!!5 STARS. update soon,please…..
*juicy* dare I request more???? This was good…:-)
Im enjoying this. I really like Will and how she helped Shane at the end. Hope you keep going with this.
This is a great story:) I hope that this isn’t the end for Shane&Carmen, please , let Carmen give her another chance. She’s dating a Shane lookalike , she obviously wants her!
This was great! You have obviously spent a lot of time developing this story, and is definitely worth it!!
I told u i was going to comment and here i am LOL. It’s a really good story and i really like it. I cant wait for ur next post so hurry up with that editing!! POST SOON!! :)