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Riders Ch.5
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I woke to the sound of Alice singing in the shower. Even though I loved her to no end there was no denying the girl could shatter glass with her terrible voice. Still listening to her rendition of Dolly Parton’s working nine to five bought a grin to my face that I could not seem to shake.
She emerged from the bathroom in only her underwear and I watched as she pulled on jeans and a t-shirt before pulling on her boots and fastening chaps over her jeans.
“Later I want you in my room in just the chaps Piezecki.”
“Oh my god Dana I thought you were still asleep I wanted you to lye in while I went and got the horses ready to travel.”
I couldn’t help the chuckle that passed my lips. Only my Alice could think that she was being quiet when she was singing at the top of her voice and stomping round the room like a heard of elephants. I felt my heart swell with love.
“Well I need to get up babe I should go check on Tina. Have you heard from Bette yet?”
“No I thought I would get the horses done so she can sleep in. we have to travel with her and I would like for her to not have the hangover she deserves if at all possible.”
“Ok babe, I will go see Tina then check on Bette and have them both up and about before it is time to load the horses and head out, we are all driving right no one is flying.”
“No it is only eight hours so everyone is travelling with the horses. I have to shoot, I have four horses to wrap up in cotton wool to keep Bette off my back so I will see you down at the stables.”
With that she scampered out of the room leaving me to my own devices. Now I just had to go and see how Bette and Tina were fairing after last night and see if I could get this ridiculous bet declared null and void. Seriously it was like being in high school all over again.
Once I was showered and dressed I made my way to Tina’s room I knocked and received a grunt, which I took as my cue to enter. If She hadn’t looked so haggard then I would have let out the laughter the sight of my best friend caused to bubble in my throat.
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I was so glad to see this chapter!! I love this story! You definitely should continue!!
OMG that was hilarious! Ellie – I love this story. It is very entertaining and your writing is exceptional! Can’t wait for more!
OMG I started cracking up from the moment Alice was singing “9 to 5” (which is on right now by the way lol) up to the cat scream and didn’t stop till the end. Actually, I could go for a fag myself right now.
By the way, did anyone else catch Tina calling Bette “babe?” ;)
bette on drugs is funny, this chapter was realy hilarious, i wonder if bette will remember her little confession later
I agree you humor in this story is brillant and witty, and I was funny from start to finish. I just love. Keep Tina strong, and that is my last comment about the FILTHY and NASTY HABIT OF SMOKING!!!! Don’t mean to offend, it is just so unbecoming in a woman.
Haha, Bette might want to bite her tongue off if she wakes and remembers everything.
that was fucking funny! thank you for the wonderful update!
I was definitely entertained by your chapter. How will everyone react once Bette’s feet touch down again? I hope you won’t keep us waiting too long. Thanks for writing!
That was so funny,Guess Bette is the type that can’t that painkillers. Love this just keep on writing. Hope Bette doesn’t remember telling Tina she was falling in love with her. Love it thanks
Yes, Lamentamini, I caught it that Tina was calling Bette “babe.” I love this story, watching this is going to be so much fun.
OMG what a hilarious post – I love it like I do your writing. Please post more often, because I’m addicted :o)) And Tina called Bette “babe”, I hope Bette can remember that later LOL.
Oh god I REALLY LOVE this story! i love the way they all interact… I love the last sentence… I just love the whole thing… AND YEAH!!!! Bette is falling for Tina! :) LOL Thanks!
LOL. I don’t think Bette’s going to remember anything and she probably hasn’t even admitted to herself that she’s falling for Tina. It’s going to be so fun for everyone to be around T & B for the next couple months NOT!
This is so funny and cool!