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Riders Ch.5
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“Quick Bette grant is on his way over you need to hide. Oh my god Bette this is not funny what is wrong with you. If he sees you and finds out you are not meant to be riding you could loose your placed on the team.”
“Alice get in you can drive my box I will send my grooms in Bette’s. Dana help me get her in here before Grant spots us.”
With that we hoist Bette in through the jockey door I dump her on the bed as Al jumps into the driver’s seat and starts the engine. Dana opens the divide to the horses and sends my groom’s of to travel in Bette’s box and I open the door to the knocking we hear.
“Hi Grant what can I do for you?”
“Tina, is everything ok? Why have you switched travel arrangements?”
“Well we thought that Bette and I could discuss team tactics on the way, I have been to the venue before so I can prep her. Dana always travels with me on tour and Bette feels more comfortable with Alice so she swapped with my grooms. Anyway everyone is pulling out Grant so you had better go find your ride. See you in France.”
With that I slammed the door in his face and yelled at Alice to floor it. I crossed the small space to the bed as Dana moved to sit in the co-pilot seat next to AL.
Bette was still chuckling to herself but she seemed to be drifting of, and if I was not mistaken she was mumbling her own little version of why do fool fall in love. I sat next to her and she turned her head to look at me.
“Hey Bette, good drugs huh?”
“I have a secret.”
“You do huh? Well maybe you should keep it.”
“Nooooooooooooo I want the world to know.”
“You think that now honey but you might change your mind when you come back down to earth.”
She sat up suddenly and grabbed my and stopped laughing. She made eye contact and took a deep breath.
“I am falling for an angel. And the angel is a girl.”
“Okay babe that’s enough you should go to sleep.”
“She is lovely but I tell her I don’t like her coz she has a big head. But ever since I kissed her I haven’t stopped thinking about her and her lovely blonde hair, and her voice that makes me shudder.”
With that she fell back on the bed and continued to laugh and hum. I sighed I mean I could still get out of this I was sure but no she wasn’t done yet.
“I am falling for Tina Kennard, but don’t tell ok? It’s a secret.”
I dropped my head and held my breath before turning to face Al and Dana. It took two seconds before the both shouted in unison.
“SHE KISSED YOU?”
As Bette passed out all I could think was,
Oh my god I need a fag.
TBC
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I was so glad to see this chapter!! I love this story! You definitely should continue!!
OMG that was hilarious! Ellie – I love this story. It is very entertaining and your writing is exceptional! Can’t wait for more!
OMG I started cracking up from the moment Alice was singing “9 to 5” (which is on right now by the way lol) up to the cat scream and didn’t stop till the end. Actually, I could go for a fag myself right now.
By the way, did anyone else catch Tina calling Bette “babe?” ;)
bette on drugs is funny, this chapter was realy hilarious, i wonder if bette will remember her little confession later
I agree you humor in this story is brillant and witty, and I was funny from start to finish. I just love. Keep Tina strong, and that is my last comment about the FILTHY and NASTY HABIT OF SMOKING!!!! Don’t mean to offend, it is just so unbecoming in a woman.
Haha, Bette might want to bite her tongue off if she wakes and remembers everything.
that was fucking funny! thank you for the wonderful update!
I was definitely entertained by your chapter. How will everyone react once Bette’s feet touch down again? I hope you won’t keep us waiting too long. Thanks for writing!
That was so funny,Guess Bette is the type that can’t that painkillers. Love this just keep on writing. Hope Bette doesn’t remember telling Tina she was falling in love with her. Love it thanks
Yes, Lamentamini, I caught it that Tina was calling Bette “babe.” I love this story, watching this is going to be so much fun.
OMG what a hilarious post – I love it like I do your writing. Please post more often, because I’m addicted :o)) And Tina called Bette “babe”, I hope Bette can remember that later LOL.
Oh god I REALLY LOVE this story! i love the way they all interact… I love the last sentence… I just love the whole thing… AND YEAH!!!! Bette is falling for Tina! :) LOL Thanks!
LOL. I don’t think Bette’s going to remember anything and she probably hasn’t even admitted to herself that she’s falling for Tina. It’s going to be so fun for everyone to be around T & B for the next couple months NOT!
This is so funny and cool!