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Riders Ch.5
She was up and half dressed in jeans and chaps similar to Al’s but seemed to have gotten distracted before managing to pull a top over her bra. Her hair was sticking out all over the place and her eyes had a wild gleam to them. I had never seen Tina Kennard look so close to loosing her cool.
She didn’t look at me as I entered the bedroom. She just sat on the edge of the bed all of her focus on the small bedside table a few feet away from her. As I moved to sit next to her I could see that her focus was not on the table itself but on the object s that lay on the table.
“I could just have one, she would never know. You wouldn’t tell on me would you Dane?”
See high school.
“T.K how long have you been sat here?”
“What well uhm I got up at seven and I showered and then I wanted a cigarette so I went and threw my pack of the balcony so I couldn’t. Then I got dressed then I was about to leave to make sure the grooms were doing the horses when I noticed that.”
I watched amused as she raised her arm and pointed, with a shaky hand, towards what lay on the table. Sitting there taunting my blonde friend was a single cigarette and her trusty Zippo lighter with a horse’s head engraved on both sides.
“Tina come on it was just a silly bet while you were drunk I am sure if we speak to Bette we can just call the whole thing off.”
I swear if looks could kill I would have died in that instant.
“WHAT, DANA DON’T BE SO FUCKING STUPID. I WILL NOT BACK DOWN FROM THAT WOMAN. SHE THINKS SHE IS SO GOOD WELL I WILL SHOW HER. NO ONE MESSES WITH ME. I AM GOING TO WIN THIS BET AND THEN I AM GOING TO WIN HER. SHE WON’T KNOW WHAT HIT HER.”
With that she stormed out of the room before I could stop her. I lay back on the bed a little shell shocked at her out burst and wondered when she would calm down enough to realise her mistake.
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I was so glad to see this chapter!! I love this story! You definitely should continue!!
OMG that was hilarious! Ellie – I love this story. It is very entertaining and your writing is exceptional! Can’t wait for more!
OMG I started cracking up from the moment Alice was singing “9 to 5” (which is on right now by the way lol) up to the cat scream and didn’t stop till the end. Actually, I could go for a fag myself right now.
By the way, did anyone else catch Tina calling Bette “babe?” ;)
bette on drugs is funny, this chapter was realy hilarious, i wonder if bette will remember her little confession later
I agree you humor in this story is brillant and witty, and I was funny from start to finish. I just love. Keep Tina strong, and that is my last comment about the FILTHY and NASTY HABIT OF SMOKING!!!! Don’t mean to offend, it is just so unbecoming in a woman.
Haha, Bette might want to bite her tongue off if she wakes and remembers everything.
that was fucking funny! thank you for the wonderful update!
I was definitely entertained by your chapter. How will everyone react once Bette’s feet touch down again? I hope you won’t keep us waiting too long. Thanks for writing!
That was so funny,Guess Bette is the type that can’t that painkillers. Love this just keep on writing. Hope Bette doesn’t remember telling Tina she was falling in love with her. Love it thanks
Yes, Lamentamini, I caught it that Tina was calling Bette “babe.” I love this story, watching this is going to be so much fun.
OMG what a hilarious post – I love it like I do your writing. Please post more often, because I’m addicted :o)) And Tina called Bette “babe”, I hope Bette can remember that later LOL.
Oh god I REALLY LOVE this story! i love the way they all interact… I love the last sentence… I just love the whole thing… AND YEAH!!!! Bette is falling for Tina! :) LOL Thanks!
LOL. I don’t think Bette’s going to remember anything and she probably hasn’t even admitted to herself that she’s falling for Tina. It’s going to be so fun for everyone to be around T & B for the next couple months NOT!
This is so funny and cool!