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    Riders Ch.5

     

    When we all met down in the stables ten minutes later she did not look quite so sure of herself, in fact she was almost green and every time she moved her head to fast it caused her eyes to water.

     

    I left her with Dane and went off to load her horses.

     

     

    —————————Tina————————-

      

    God I need a fag, god I need a fag, god I need a fag.

     

    That sentence had been running through my head on loop since I woke up but there was no way I was giving in. just when I thought I was going to have a break down all thoughts of my nicotine cravings were pushed out of my head as I saw the state of Bette’s beautiful face. She looked like she been on the losing side of a bar brawl.

     

    When I walked over I could tell she was in pain but I could still swear she smiled when she saw me approaching, not that I cared.

     

    “Hey Tina how’s the bet coming.”

     

    “Fine thanks. Bette what happened? Does it hurt? Did someone hurt you?”

    “No, no. I am just a klutz but yeah it hurts like hell. Dana give me a couple of those painkillers would you.”

    “Bette I don’t know, the doctor said…”

    “I KNOW WHAT THE DOCTOR SAID BUT IT’S NOT HIM WHO FEELS LIKE HIS FACE IS CAUGHT IN A VICE.”

     

    I saw the uncertain look in Dana’s eyes as Bette dry swallowed the two white pills. I looked at her and shrugged my shoulders as we stood and watched all the horses being lead into boxes by our assorted grooms.

     

    Once everything was packed and secure we made our way to the trucks we were planning on travelling in when out of nowhere I heard Bette start to giggle. I turned to look at her and was just in time to stop her falling flat on her face again as she tripped over a broom.

     

    She seemed to find this hilarious. I grabbed Dana and we took one side each as we headed to my box. We were a few feet away when Al came running over.

     

    Comments

    1. OMG I started cracking up from the moment Alice was singing “9 to 5” (which is on right now by the way lol) up to the cat scream and didn’t stop till the end. Actually, I could go for a fag myself right now.

    2. I agree you humor in this story is brillant and witty, and I was funny from start to finish. I just love. Keep Tina strong, and that is my last comment about the FILTHY and NASTY HABIT OF SMOKING!!!! Don’t mean to offend, it is just so unbecoming in a woman.

    3. I was definitely entertained by your chapter. How will everyone react once Bette’s feet touch down again? I hope you won’t keep us waiting too long. Thanks for writing!

    4. That was so funny,Guess Bette is the type that can’t that painkillers. Love this just keep on writing. Hope Bette doesn’t remember telling Tina she was falling in love with her. Love it thanks

    5. OMG what a hilarious post – I love it like I do your writing. Please post more often, because I’m addicted :o)) And Tina called Bette “babe”, I hope Bette can remember that later LOL.

    6. Oh god I REALLY LOVE this story! i love the way they all interact… I love the last sentence… I just love the whole thing… AND YEAH!!!! Bette is falling for Tina! :) LOL Thanks!

    7. LOL. I don’t think Bette’s going to remember anything and she probably hasn’t even admitted to herself that she’s falling for Tina. It’s going to be so fun for everyone to be around T & B for the next couple months NOT!

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