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Riders Ch.5
After a few minutes her eyes fluttered open and she seemed to shake her head as if trying to focus.
“Hey Porter, you know where you are?”
“Of course I do Alice. Oh holy Christ I feel like a truck hit me in the head wait am I bleeding? What in the name of god happened? And how the fuck did you get in I hadn’t opened the door yet. Wait how am I back in bed I definitely got up. Really someone tell me what is going on.”
Thankfully we were saved from answering any questions by the arrival of the doctor who ushered us all out of the room.
As we all looked at each other and struggled not to laugh as loud bursts of four-letter word floated out to us as Bette’s wounds were treated. Once he was finished the doctor came and called us back into the room. We had managed to get rid of the hotel manager and warned him not to mention this to anyone so that just left Alice, Justin and myself.
We listened as the doctor instructed us that the nine stitches above Bette’s head must be kept clean and dry and someone must remove them in 8-10 days. Her nose was broken but not displaced so he had just put a strap on it and it should heal itself in four week. He told us in a rather offended manner that the patient seemed lucid but could still have a head trauma, but as she refused to go to hospital we should just keep an eye on her. He sighed in defeat as he told us she really shouldn’t ride for three weeks after being unconscious, knowing that she would ignore him. Lastly he gave us some painkillers and told us she should only take them before bed and make sure just to use Tylenol during the day.
We closed the door behind him and almost before we could turn around she started.
“If you think I am not riding for three weeks you have another think coming. Just keep me away from Grant for a few days so the bruising goes down and we can tell him I walked into a door or whatever. Now come on we all need to get our stuff downstairs we need to load the horses in like ten minutes.”
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I was so glad to see this chapter!! I love this story! You definitely should continue!!
OMG that was hilarious! Ellie – I love this story. It is very entertaining and your writing is exceptional! Can’t wait for more!
OMG I started cracking up from the moment Alice was singing “9 to 5” (which is on right now by the way lol) up to the cat scream and didn’t stop till the end. Actually, I could go for a fag myself right now.
By the way, did anyone else catch Tina calling Bette “babe?” ;)
bette on drugs is funny, this chapter was realy hilarious, i wonder if bette will remember her little confession later
I agree you humor in this story is brillant and witty, and I was funny from start to finish. I just love. Keep Tina strong, and that is my last comment about the FILTHY and NASTY HABIT OF SMOKING!!!! Don’t mean to offend, it is just so unbecoming in a woman.
Haha, Bette might want to bite her tongue off if she wakes and remembers everything.
that was fucking funny! thank you for the wonderful update!
I was definitely entertained by your chapter. How will everyone react once Bette’s feet touch down again? I hope you won’t keep us waiting too long. Thanks for writing!
That was so funny,Guess Bette is the type that can’t that painkillers. Love this just keep on writing. Hope Bette doesn’t remember telling Tina she was falling in love with her. Love it thanks
Yes, Lamentamini, I caught it that Tina was calling Bette “babe.” I love this story, watching this is going to be so much fun.
OMG what a hilarious post – I love it like I do your writing. Please post more often, because I’m addicted :o)) And Tina called Bette “babe”, I hope Bette can remember that later LOL.
Oh god I REALLY LOVE this story! i love the way they all interact… I love the last sentence… I just love the whole thing… AND YEAH!!!! Bette is falling for Tina! :) LOL Thanks!
LOL. I don’t think Bette’s going to remember anything and she probably hasn’t even admitted to herself that she’s falling for Tina. It’s going to be so fun for everyone to be around T & B for the next couple months NOT!
This is so funny and cool!