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Round n Round We Go (Ch.11)
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Tina was quickly distracted from her pain and the pleasure was multiplied. “Wha…Bette… what you’re doing to me…” She moaned more and moved her hips to meet the brunette’s tongue and fingers.
Hearing the watery voice getting louder, the moaning getting incoherent, Bette pushed and pulled faster, determined to bring the blonde girl to the heavenly abandonment. “That’s it, baby, cum, cum for me…”
The blonde didn’t last long under the sweet persuasion and intense maneuver, she screamed her first orgasm. The waves of electricity shot through her whole being and shook her core. She let herself lost in the spasms and laid there panting, trembling, and hearing the molecules in her body harmony.
Michael Bolton’s love songs collection came up. “What you’re doing to me” was the exact words the blonde had blurred out.
“Everyday that passed me by
Would never wait for questions why
So I carried on…”
Tina listened to the words and tried to restore her energy, gulping in large amount of air.
Bette, however, sucked lightly on the wetness and moved her fingers again. Her finger tip found the little area that felt a little rougher than the rest of the inner walls, and started her rhythmic drawing again.
“Bette!” Surprised, Tina cried out her name.
With a wicked smirk, the brunette planted on last kiss on the highly sensitive flower bud and climbed up the length of the slim torso, her hand still working. “I’m not done with you yet.” Then she found those rosy lips and imprinted on them with her own.
The blonde tasted herself on Bette’s lips. It was a strangely exciting feeling. She took a fistful of the brown hair, and wrapped her legs around one strong leg.
The friction brought her an unexpected high. Bette buried her face in the blonde threads and immediately lowered her own body to meet with the supple limb. She couldn’t resist the opportunity, sighed and moaned, moving her hands and her hips in sync.
Not long was when the blonde felt another approaching climax, shaking and moving, she prepared herself for it although she kinda knew that it was something she could not prepare for.
Bette was fairly familiar with the female anatomy, as she had claimed to be an expert in this area. She was in near oblivion as her own orgasm built but was fully aware how close to edge her girl was becoming. Slowing down her hand a little, she intended to try something with the blonde.
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Yes, I fantasized about a perfect room with candle lights and love songs. My love scene writing experience is still limited. I hope you enjoyed it and I welcome suggestions.
Thanks for reading!
woo!got me all hot, great writing.looking for the next.
Thanks! Hope it was better depicted than the original one. I tried my best. Truth be told, I barely review the Chinese version these days and forget some plot.
So I’m working off script right now. Don’t be too surprised if it comes out not exactly what you expect ;p
Yeah,that’s exactly what I am waiting for. Follow your imagination,I want to be surprised.while waiting for your post,I am reading this novel named The Groves,a ghost story.
Isnt that a BenMac story? God I looooove BenMac. That author’s work always gives me chills. I’m actually catching up with her “the eternal rocks beneath…”
I thought ” “the eternal rocks beneath…”haven’t end yet,is that so?
No, it hasn’t yet. But BenMac said that it’ll be finished in a number of chapters.
Ahh that was great..literally!!!!!!lol…well worth the wait let me just say. Oh and this line..” Bette in her underwear and high heels, that was a picture, one hell of a sexy picture, itself.” My first reaction was Whoa!!you are wrong to put this kind of imagination in our heads, a person can loose focus for days thinking about Bette with heels and lingerie. I hate that Tina still havent told Bette the truth I know its must be hard on her but when she does I know there’s going to be some drama, hopefully bette get upset and leaves tina and then tina have to work hard to win her heart and trust back…ok im rambling lol im just excited…update soon
Yeah, thanks! The truth will be revealed in about another two chapters or so. And hell is definitely going to break loose. But of course, I will find a way to fix it for them. After all, I still believe in true love between Tibette!
Hot,thank you.PPS
Thanks for reviewing. You’ve been very supportive!
Tina’s dad is a real jerk to have wanted to do that. Loved the connection the two girls share. Thanks
Well he’s a mean little guy alright. He’ll learn his lesson. Let’s just hope a despicable person like him could eventually change.
Thanks for reviewing!
It was worth the wait. You put so much into your characters n you develop easily what you want us to feel w/ your stories. Their feelings for each other were captivated flawlessly. Our imagination runs wild! Thx for your EROTIC posts. I’m sure all hell s gonna break loose if/when Tina tells Bette about Sam s revenge. Bring it on! Don’t stay away too long……
You’re very kind. I will continue to work on my plotting. Well, who knows, maybe Tina would not be given the chance to tell Bette. Maybe things will take a even worse turn so there must be a greater effort to mend their love.
Thanks for commenting. I’ll try to post soon.
Nothing wrong with your love scènes, it was beautiful written.
Sam is a asshole and i am sure as hell is gonna break lose when Tina tells Bette.
Thanks for the update.
Don’t Let us wait for long.
Thanks for supporting!
Actually, I feel like letting things kept hidden to the most critical point. That way, it will take more effort in repairing their relationship.
Who knows, I let my imagination guide me. ;)
So hot and sexy! Thank you!
Thank you for the comment. I try my best.
RT,
That was freakin’ HOT! Just hope Tina will open up now to B.
Nice chapter indeed. Will be waiting impatiently for your next post :)
Well then I better work on it harder now!
I think given the condition, it will be harder and harder for Tina to reveal the truth now. I wonder what will happen if Bette finds out by accident. That’ll demand greater attempts for me and Tina to save the relationship. (I’d like the challenge actually ;))
Thanks for commenting!
I do not often let a comment to this story, but I read since the beginning, and I really liked it.
it is very well worth the wait, not only erotic but very nice. It was the typical “first night” is what every virgin girl dreams (lesbian virgin girls) :P Bette was very romantic.
first love all earth-shattering experience, I hope the two girls love will survives, Tina’s father desire for revenge, and the fact that Tina keep secret this from Bette. and that in the beginning, Tina approached Bette because of the plan.
you told come to the drama but I hope it will not be too bad. everyone write drama lately :) my little heart desires a milder version of the drama: D
I’m looking forward to the next chapter.
Well thank you very much for commenting and telling me your feelings. I am truly flattered, blown away by the generosity of my readers.
I don’t know about EVERY lesbian virgin but I definitely created this first night in the way I wished for mine. ;p
Drama is good, my friend! Haha, I think it gives me space to develop more in the characters. And believe me, when they are finally able to fix things, it’s going to be sweet!
So beautiful and hot