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Round n Round We Go (Ch.11)
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It gave the brunette the utmost pleasure to hear her name uttered so softly and helplessly by the innocent girl. She breathed in the sweetness of her body wash and Tina’s natural scent as she teased the pebbled little precious nub and used her free hand to add some pressure to the other. She made a bit of a pop sound letting go her mouth, then licked the valley in between, and finally traced down slowly, inch by inch. It left a damp trail as if a snail crawled by. She arrived at the apex of those snowy legs and settled herself at the position, feeling the legs tense. “It’s okay… relax baby.” She chanted in a soft voice, looking up and smiling at the blonde girl, promising her that she’d be just fine.
Without anyone of them noticing, the audio changed the disk and came up a Spanish song. “Apareces Tu” by La Oreja de Van Gough, a song celebrating the person that finally appeared in the singer’s life after she made promises to herself to fear not.
“Me he prometido pedirme perdón. (I promised to apologize to myself)
Me he confesado con mi corazón. (I’ve confessed to my heart)
Me he enamorado de todo mi amor. (I’ve fallen in love with all my love)
Me permití decirle al medio adios. (I allowed myself to say goodbye to fear)
Y de relente apareces tú. (And suddenly you appear)”
Tina ran her hand again through the dense dark threads, feeling vulnerable being pinned down and exposed like that. But once she locked her eyes with Bette’s loving ones, and heard the sincere words in the lyrics that praised one’s lover, she was put at ease. Those deep brown eyes assured her, told her that everything was fine, and she would be safe.
“Tú
Entiendes mis silencios. (Only you understand my silence)
Sólo tú
Conoces mis secretos. (Only you know my secrets)
Sólo tú
Comprendes cada gesto. (Only you comprehend every gesture)
Sólo tú (Only you)”
Bette patiently waited for the blonde to brace herself and open up to her, both mentally and physically. She could feel the muscle in her creamy legs relax and smoothed her hands over that creaminess. “That’s it… that’s good…” She considered the divine garden of secrecy, twirled a finger in the neatly trimmed fair hair, and she nudged her nose closer, taking in the distinct scent of arousal.
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Yes, I fantasized about a perfect room with candle lights and love songs. My love scene writing experience is still limited. I hope you enjoyed it and I welcome suggestions.
Thanks for reading!
woo!got me all hot, great writing.looking for the next.
Thanks! Hope it was better depicted than the original one. I tried my best. Truth be told, I barely review the Chinese version these days and forget some plot.
So I’m working off script right now. Don’t be too surprised if it comes out not exactly what you expect ;p
Yeah,that’s exactly what I am waiting for. Follow your imagination,I want to be surprised.while waiting for your post,I am reading this novel named The Groves,a ghost story.
Isnt that a BenMac story? God I looooove BenMac. That author’s work always gives me chills. I’m actually catching up with her “the eternal rocks beneath…”
I thought ” “the eternal rocks beneath…”haven’t end yet,is that so?
No, it hasn’t yet. But BenMac said that it’ll be finished in a number of chapters.
Ahh that was great..literally!!!!!!lol…well worth the wait let me just say. Oh and this line..” Bette in her underwear and high heels, that was a picture, one hell of a sexy picture, itself.” My first reaction was Whoa!!you are wrong to put this kind of imagination in our heads, a person can loose focus for days thinking about Bette with heels and lingerie. I hate that Tina still havent told Bette the truth I know its must be hard on her but when she does I know there’s going to be some drama, hopefully bette get upset and leaves tina and then tina have to work hard to win her heart and trust back…ok im rambling lol im just excited…update soon
Yeah, thanks! The truth will be revealed in about another two chapters or so. And hell is definitely going to break loose. But of course, I will find a way to fix it for them. After all, I still believe in true love between Tibette!
Hot,thank you.PPS
Thanks for reviewing. You’ve been very supportive!
Tina’s dad is a real jerk to have wanted to do that. Loved the connection the two girls share. Thanks
Well he’s a mean little guy alright. He’ll learn his lesson. Let’s just hope a despicable person like him could eventually change.
Thanks for reviewing!
It was worth the wait. You put so much into your characters n you develop easily what you want us to feel w/ your stories. Their feelings for each other were captivated flawlessly. Our imagination runs wild! Thx for your EROTIC posts. I’m sure all hell s gonna break loose if/when Tina tells Bette about Sam s revenge. Bring it on! Don’t stay away too long……
You’re very kind. I will continue to work on my plotting. Well, who knows, maybe Tina would not be given the chance to tell Bette. Maybe things will take a even worse turn so there must be a greater effort to mend their love.
Thanks for commenting. I’ll try to post soon.
Nothing wrong with your love scènes, it was beautiful written.
Sam is a asshole and i am sure as hell is gonna break lose when Tina tells Bette.
Thanks for the update.
Don’t Let us wait for long.
Thanks for supporting!
Actually, I feel like letting things kept hidden to the most critical point. That way, it will take more effort in repairing their relationship.
Who knows, I let my imagination guide me. ;)
So hot and sexy! Thank you!
Thank you for the comment. I try my best.
RT,
That was freakin’ HOT! Just hope Tina will open up now to B.
Nice chapter indeed. Will be waiting impatiently for your next post :)
Well then I better work on it harder now!
I think given the condition, it will be harder and harder for Tina to reveal the truth now. I wonder what will happen if Bette finds out by accident. That’ll demand greater attempts for me and Tina to save the relationship. (I’d like the challenge actually ;))
Thanks for commenting!
I do not often let a comment to this story, but I read since the beginning, and I really liked it.
it is very well worth the wait, not only erotic but very nice. It was the typical “first night” is what every virgin girl dreams (lesbian virgin girls) :P Bette was very romantic.
first love all earth-shattering experience, I hope the two girls love will survives, Tina’s father desire for revenge, and the fact that Tina keep secret this from Bette. and that in the beginning, Tina approached Bette because of the plan.
you told come to the drama but I hope it will not be too bad. everyone write drama lately :) my little heart desires a milder version of the drama: D
I’m looking forward to the next chapter.
Well thank you very much for commenting and telling me your feelings. I am truly flattered, blown away by the generosity of my readers.
I don’t know about EVERY lesbian virgin but I definitely created this first night in the way I wished for mine. ;p
Drama is good, my friend! Haha, I think it gives me space to develop more in the characters. And believe me, when they are finally able to fix things, it’s going to be sweet!
So beautiful and hot