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Round n Round We Go (Ch.11)
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Chuckling, the brunette resumed her mild kisses and mumbled. “That won’t be taking a shower ‘first’.” Being a gentle-lady, she pointed to the half-transparent bathroom. “After you, M’lady.”
Tina again balanced herself again on the brunette’s arm to take off her stilettos.
Bette used her advantage of height and peeped to the cleavage. “Delicious…” She thought, but chastised herself and told herself to just wait for another fifteen minutes, thirty, tops. She looked down at the neat cute toes. “Here, let’s find you some flip flops.”
As she stood there barefoot, the blonde could see the blurry frame of her girlfriend preparing her flip flops and bathrobe from outside and suddenly became self-conscious. Bette was considerate, though, she adjusted the electronic panel, so the glass wall gradually lost its pellucidity.
The water ran hot in less than thirty seconds. The brunette returned to the room and went sit on the large bed. She coyly smiled up to Tina and kept staring until the slim figure disappeared into the bathroom. “Oh, that cute little butt.” Dropping into the soft pillows, she listened to the water while regretting blocking the splendid view. Every minute passed by excruciatingly slow for her, she nearly jumped from her lying position as the hair dryer stopped, and she locked her sight to the door that would slide open any time soon.
The most provocative scene unfolded, the brunette fantasized every second in slow motion, the door cracked and the foggy vapor broke through, a creamy white slim leg stepped out, and the other, she looked up along to find the thin figure in the white bath robe which showed just the right amount of cleavage, the blonde hair that gained a darker color due to the dampness, finally, the shy smile on Tina’s reddened face that reached deeply into her hazel eyes.
“You’re beautiful.” She naturally let out a sigh. And then she stood up, a bit much taller in her stilettos, quickly unzipping her own gown.
Tina wanted to say something back but as soon as she saw the brunette in her dark purple lingerie, she let whatever in her mind slip away. Bette in her underwear and high heels, that was a picture, one hell of a sexy picture, itself.
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Yes, I fantasized about a perfect room with candle lights and love songs. My love scene writing experience is still limited. I hope you enjoyed it and I welcome suggestions.
Thanks for reading!
woo!got me all hot, great writing.looking for the next.
Thanks! Hope it was better depicted than the original one. I tried my best. Truth be told, I barely review the Chinese version these days and forget some plot.
So I’m working off script right now. Don’t be too surprised if it comes out not exactly what you expect ;p
Yeah,that’s exactly what I am waiting for. Follow your imagination,I want to be surprised.while waiting for your post,I am reading this novel named The Groves,a ghost story.
Isnt that a BenMac story? God I looooove BenMac. That author’s work always gives me chills. I’m actually catching up with her “the eternal rocks beneath…”
I thought ” “the eternal rocks beneath…”haven’t end yet,is that so?
No, it hasn’t yet. But BenMac said that it’ll be finished in a number of chapters.
Ahh that was great..literally!!!!!!lol…well worth the wait let me just say. Oh and this line..” Bette in her underwear and high heels, that was a picture, one hell of a sexy picture, itself.” My first reaction was Whoa!!you are wrong to put this kind of imagination in our heads, a person can loose focus for days thinking about Bette with heels and lingerie. I hate that Tina still havent told Bette the truth I know its must be hard on her but when she does I know there’s going to be some drama, hopefully bette get upset and leaves tina and then tina have to work hard to win her heart and trust back…ok im rambling lol im just excited…update soon
Yeah, thanks! The truth will be revealed in about another two chapters or so. And hell is definitely going to break loose. But of course, I will find a way to fix it for them. After all, I still believe in true love between Tibette!
Hot,thank you.PPS
Thanks for reviewing. You’ve been very supportive!
Tina’s dad is a real jerk to have wanted to do that. Loved the connection the two girls share. Thanks
Well he’s a mean little guy alright. He’ll learn his lesson. Let’s just hope a despicable person like him could eventually change.
Thanks for reviewing!
It was worth the wait. You put so much into your characters n you develop easily what you want us to feel w/ your stories. Their feelings for each other were captivated flawlessly. Our imagination runs wild! Thx for your EROTIC posts. I’m sure all hell s gonna break loose if/when Tina tells Bette about Sam s revenge. Bring it on! Don’t stay away too long……
You’re very kind. I will continue to work on my plotting. Well, who knows, maybe Tina would not be given the chance to tell Bette. Maybe things will take a even worse turn so there must be a greater effort to mend their love.
Thanks for commenting. I’ll try to post soon.
Nothing wrong with your love scènes, it was beautiful written.
Sam is a asshole and i am sure as hell is gonna break lose when Tina tells Bette.
Thanks for the update.
Don’t Let us wait for long.
Thanks for supporting!
Actually, I feel like letting things kept hidden to the most critical point. That way, it will take more effort in repairing their relationship.
Who knows, I let my imagination guide me. ;)
So hot and sexy! Thank you!
Thank you for the comment. I try my best.
RT,
That was freakin’ HOT! Just hope Tina will open up now to B.
Nice chapter indeed. Will be waiting impatiently for your next post :)
Well then I better work on it harder now!
I think given the condition, it will be harder and harder for Tina to reveal the truth now. I wonder what will happen if Bette finds out by accident. That’ll demand greater attempts for me and Tina to save the relationship. (I’d like the challenge actually ;))
Thanks for commenting!
I do not often let a comment to this story, but I read since the beginning, and I really liked it.
it is very well worth the wait, not only erotic but very nice. It was the typical “first night” is what every virgin girl dreams (lesbian virgin girls) :P Bette was very romantic.
first love all earth-shattering experience, I hope the two girls love will survives, Tina’s father desire for revenge, and the fact that Tina keep secret this from Bette. and that in the beginning, Tina approached Bette because of the plan.
you told come to the drama but I hope it will not be too bad. everyone write drama lately :) my little heart desires a milder version of the drama: D
I’m looking forward to the next chapter.
Well thank you very much for commenting and telling me your feelings. I am truly flattered, blown away by the generosity of my readers.
I don’t know about EVERY lesbian virgin but I definitely created this first night in the way I wished for mine. ;p
Drama is good, my friend! Haha, I think it gives me space to develop more in the characters. And believe me, when they are finally able to fix things, it’s going to be sweet!
So beautiful and hot