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Round n Round We Go (Ch.12)
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Tina had never seen a house like the Porter’s. It was more of a castle than a villa. She thought about how to describe the two-floored, two-winged estate and not really came up with anything close. There was this Spanish show, Gran Hotel, she had seen, and the 19th century, extravagant resort with filthy loaded upper class and royals coming in and out. But that even seemed remote because of the different color tune. Gran Hotel had the Gothic darkness with its oil lamp, cold marble pillars, and was shrouded by the mystery of murders, whereas the Porter’s villa was bright to every corner, modern facility blended naturally with the vintage designs and decorations, the stairs wide and the carpet soft, the heavy drapes on each window tied neatly and slid to the sides of the frames, liquors stored by brand as well as year, the mahogany furniture had the rich warm color of reddish brown.
None of that mattered, not the expensive carpets, not the classy collection of wine, not the designs or decorations. Tina was in shock of the scale of this building, but she only cared about one person in it. Without that person, this place was just like another resort in television, but not a home. This was where Bette lived, she smiled at the notion, and instantly felt safe.
At the east wing, Maryanne, William, and Mr. Douglass greeted them with courtesy. The old lady seemed less frightening than yesterday, even smiled a little at the timid girl. But she kept a watchful, piercing eye on Tina.
Bette showed her the way to her room and study, the west wing in the building. “I’m afraid the east side can’t withhold my loud music and gatherings. Granma allowed me to keep a room at the west. Otherwise this side has no occupation.” She walked in her room and opened the window. Through the very luxurious and exotic plants in the garden below, they could see several hundred yards away there was another villa, and another, and then mountains and roads and clubs and restaurants. Although very far away, she knew that during night, the lights would all light up and the dim stars just got lost in the mist of dazzling neon. “Come to the study, baby. If we get to finish our work before afternoon, maybe Planet is still on the table.” She winked and set her clipboard full of paper.
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I figure there’d be one more chapter before hell breaks loose. And sorry, to those of you who wanted the minimum of damage, I let the drama build up.
As usual, I look forward to your reviews, and appreciate your patience.
Peace.
Oh right, I promise to fix things up for them! The way has to be paved nicely.
woo！so much for this chapter, your story is very rational and organized， but please let them be happy for one more chapter, untill the hell break loose, let us savour in the young love a little bit longer.Waiting for your version of dramatic turning.
I did another chapter of tranquility. That’s the calm before the storm you got, haha!
i am reading this fan fiction named out of closet(time travel story),and literally they travelled through a closet,funny.
Hmmm… time traveling. I think that’s bold and interesting. Do you mind telling me who the author is? Coz I seemed to have failed searching by key word. Still don’t know how the search engine works on this site… so typical techno-phobic little me!
Author ID is Bette And Tina Forever,not end yet.
i haven’t heard the songs you listed above, you see, i am more a british pop fan.but i will hear them later,so i can feel the tune that you are trying to set.
Another try to comment.
I love the slow built up, but please promise a happy ending.
This will be a mess.
They love each other and starten on the wrong foot, Tina should have told it right away after she fel in love with Bette. But then there wouldnt be drama.
Still despise Sam, what a creep.
Ah, don’t worry, my friend. There’ll be a nice ending for these two. I love them too much after all!
And Sam, ugh, sometimes I just want to create a car accident and cross him out of the picture. But then I think, there’s gotta be some good left in him.
And I really appreciate your comment. I see there’s a new math question form to fill out before people can post a comment. That’s cute…lol
RT,
Sam is Selfish Bastard. I hope that Tina will be able to protect Bette from Sam’s exploitation.
Grandma was really a fair lady coz she still gave Tina the chance to be with Bette despite Tina’s association with Sam Kennard.
For Tina.. I know that she will regret her decision but I trust you that you will make our Bette more understanding once she finds out the truth.
Bette was really romantic here. She is truly one lovely lady.
Great update. You are consistently consistent in giving us a wonderful update for this story.
Keep it coming.
Thanks.
Scribe
Yes, I agree. Sam is a total jerk. But you’ll find out how he will turn out.
And Tina has really created a hard situation for herself. Yet I don’t think she had much of an option here. It’s risking her relationship or burying the secret forever. But she’s too naive to understand that nothing can stay forever.
Bette has a romantic soul. But once her heart is broken, maybe she won’t be so understanding after all. Only time can heal such sensitivity. I intend to let time do the job, too.
Tina has created a real situation for herself. Let the drama begin!! Thank you for this story – I have enjoyed reading!
Thank you for the comment! I’ll continue to try my best. Hope you’ll enjoy the next chapter.
Really dont like Sam. What a jerk. They are a sweet couple, hope they weather the storm with only minor damage. Thanks
He is a total jackass. And you’ll find out how the storm hit the couple. I believe things can get ugly at one point. But let time do its job and heal their broken hearts.
Thanks for reviewing!
Please don’t let them get married without Tina saying anything it was just be disastrous she can’t be this clueless let her tell her and then move away cause she don’t need to be with her dad
I don’t think it’s that easy at this point for Tina to tell anything. She’s made her mind, even though it’s a wrong decision. And she’ll realize that she’d been wrong this whole time.
And Sam, he is a jackass. But he’ll probably stick around some more. Maybe, eventually, he could see the damage that he had made and really go for a change. Who knows.
Thanks for the review. Please continue reading!
Yea I was waiting for drama but this was better and so lovely, ahh poor Tina what are you to do? But now it dont matter because the hell is about to start, im clearing my mind until so I can read with pure focus lol omg so ready but I gotta feeling hearts are about to be broken with the foreshadowing you readin between the story..I do believe marriage is to early for these teenagers but lets be honest here Tina and Bette have a love like no other that if they got married at the age 5 we will still be seeing true love between those two. And for some reason I like the grandmother, I didnt find her harsh at all, and Sam is just a sad case for a father but Tina is playing her part also
Oh you’re so right! It’s just such a difficult position Tina finds herself in. And it’s all gonna fall out when the truth gets revealed.
One more chapter of loveliness and I’ll start the ugly going.
I love grandma Porter! She’s the keeper of the family. And she will continue to play an important part in keeping the family together through darkness and through hell.
Sam, old little Sam, having all his mind on money and profit. He has no idea how his actions will infect his daughter. Let’s see if he’ll have an epiphany and go for a change.
Thanks for reviewing!
Don’t like Sam, grandma scare me but like her, happy for them and hope everything will be ok