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Round n Round We Go (Ch.12)
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They stayed in and worked on History paper, sometimes shared a kiss or some lighthearted banter, and managed to finish their homework. The maid interrupted them for lunch around noon. The meal was not as awkward as the blonde had imagined. In fact, everybody seemed to be cordial to her. Bette reported her new progress on the gallery and her school work, she described how her girlfriend helped her with both, and seemed utterly proud to be with her. William listened with interest and sometimes asked questions. Mr. Douglass was quite impressed with the newly improvement on Bette’s mathematics. He joked that the only person seemed to make math learnable was an attractive young lady like Tina, especially instead of his old grey self.
Maryanne said not much, yet she was playing close attention to the blonde girl and her granddaughter. At moments, Tina seemed intimidated, nervous, unsure, but when she received a smile or a comforting gesture from the brunette, either a squeeze on the hand or a pat on the lap, she’d look at Elizabeth with so much devotion, admiration, appreciation and what Maryanne concluded: love.
The old woman didn’t show, but she liked what she saw. Seated next to the blonde girl, her granddaughter seemed to have grown into a considerate, gentle woman, not that arrogant, immature, self-involved little girl she had once been, and more and more like Maxine. Elizabeth had mellowed down, under the influence of this one Tina Kennard.
In recent years, Maryanne had been worried that without a motherly figure as a role model, somehow her granddaughter started to show traits in character that resembled Melvin. Yes the man had sharp mind and incomparable business intuitive, but he was distant, ambitious, and self-centered. Once in a year, he came home from New York or HongKong or London to monitor the company in LA for three months, his postures rubbed some off on his daughter, and by the end of the three months, he took off again and left the young girl mimicking him in school or her own business. And there was her obligation to control the girl. She, Elizabeth’s only legal guardian, could not leave her running around bossing people, nor could she go soft on her and spoil her, hence the strict house management. And now, now that the girl found herself a pretty little woman, she learned about caring and loving, if not overnight, fairly quickly.
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I figure there’d be one more chapter before hell breaks loose. And sorry, to those of you who wanted the minimum of damage, I let the drama build up.
As usual, I look forward to your reviews, and appreciate your patience.
Peace.
Oh right, I promise to fix things up for them! The way has to be paved nicely.
woo！so much for this chapter, your story is very rational and organized， but please let them be happy for one more chapter, untill the hell break loose, let us savour in the young love a little bit longer.Waiting for your version of dramatic turning.
I did another chapter of tranquility. That’s the calm before the storm you got, haha!
i am reading this fan fiction named out of closet(time travel story),and literally they travelled through a closet,funny.
Hmmm… time traveling. I think that’s bold and interesting. Do you mind telling me who the author is? Coz I seemed to have failed searching by key word. Still don’t know how the search engine works on this site… so typical techno-phobic little me!
Author ID is Bette And Tina Forever,not end yet.
i haven’t heard the songs you listed above, you see, i am more a british pop fan.but i will hear them later,so i can feel the tune that you are trying to set.
Another try to comment.
I love the slow built up, but please promise a happy ending.
This will be a mess.
They love each other and starten on the wrong foot, Tina should have told it right away after she fel in love with Bette. But then there wouldnt be drama.
Still despise Sam, what a creep.
Ah, don’t worry, my friend. There’ll be a nice ending for these two. I love them too much after all!
And Sam, ugh, sometimes I just want to create a car accident and cross him out of the picture. But then I think, there’s gotta be some good left in him.
And I really appreciate your comment. I see there’s a new math question form to fill out before people can post a comment. That’s cute…lol
RT,
Sam is Selfish Bastard. I hope that Tina will be able to protect Bette from Sam’s exploitation.
Grandma was really a fair lady coz she still gave Tina the chance to be with Bette despite Tina’s association with Sam Kennard.
For Tina.. I know that she will regret her decision but I trust you that you will make our Bette more understanding once she finds out the truth.
Bette was really romantic here. She is truly one lovely lady.
Great update. You are consistently consistent in giving us a wonderful update for this story.
Keep it coming.
Thanks.
Scribe
Yes, I agree. Sam is a total jerk. But you’ll find out how he will turn out.
And Tina has really created a hard situation for herself. Yet I don’t think she had much of an option here. It’s risking her relationship or burying the secret forever. But she’s too naive to understand that nothing can stay forever.
Bette has a romantic soul. But once her heart is broken, maybe she won’t be so understanding after all. Only time can heal such sensitivity. I intend to let time do the job, too.
Tina has created a real situation for herself. Let the drama begin!! Thank you for this story – I have enjoyed reading!
Thank you for the comment! I’ll continue to try my best. Hope you’ll enjoy the next chapter.
Really dont like Sam. What a jerk. They are a sweet couple, hope they weather the storm with only minor damage. Thanks
He is a total jackass. And you’ll find out how the storm hit the couple. I believe things can get ugly at one point. But let time do its job and heal their broken hearts.
Thanks for reviewing!
Please don’t let them get married without Tina saying anything it was just be disastrous she can’t be this clueless let her tell her and then move away cause she don’t need to be with her dad
I don’t think it’s that easy at this point for Tina to tell anything. She’s made her mind, even though it’s a wrong decision. And she’ll realize that she’d been wrong this whole time.
And Sam, he is a jackass. But he’ll probably stick around some more. Maybe, eventually, he could see the damage that he had made and really go for a change. Who knows.
Thanks for the review. Please continue reading!
Yea I was waiting for drama but this was better and so lovely, ahh poor Tina what are you to do? But now it dont matter because the hell is about to start, im clearing my mind until so I can read with pure focus lol omg so ready but I gotta feeling hearts are about to be broken with the foreshadowing you readin between the story..I do believe marriage is to early for these teenagers but lets be honest here Tina and Bette have a love like no other that if they got married at the age 5 we will still be seeing true love between those two. And for some reason I like the grandmother, I didnt find her harsh at all, and Sam is just a sad case for a father but Tina is playing her part also
Oh you’re so right! It’s just such a difficult position Tina finds herself in. And it’s all gonna fall out when the truth gets revealed.
One more chapter of loveliness and I’ll start the ugly going.
I love grandma Porter! She’s the keeper of the family. And she will continue to play an important part in keeping the family together through darkness and through hell.
Sam, old little Sam, having all his mind on money and profit. He has no idea how his actions will infect his daughter. Let’s see if he’ll have an epiphany and go for a change.
Thanks for reviewing!
Don’t like Sam, grandma scare me but like her, happy for them and hope everything will be ok