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Round n Round We Go (Ch.23)
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The request was too strange for a boy who loved his hair. “Michelangelo, has anybody been teasing you or bullying you?” She became concerned.
He shook quickly.
“Then why do you want to shave? You love your hair.”
“Because I think… I think that… I’m in love with Jill.” He murmured, putting his face in his hands.
She widened her eyes at the declaration. “Wow, uh, okay… so, Jill doesn’t like your hair?” She regretted to have said that being in love meant doing everything the other person wanted. If Jill liked him too, she’d not ask him to change who he was. She’d hate to see her son hurt by his first love.
“She likes my hair. I just… you see, she’s going to start her chemo again and last time she had to lose all her hair. I don’t want her to be upset when she does this time.”
“Oh god that is so sweet.” The boy’s explanation was really moving that she was having tears in her eyes. “Oh, kid… look at you, all grown up and in love. I’m so proud of you.” She hugged him to her chest and squeezed his shoulders. Love of a nine year old, she’d find it ridiculous in the past, but she had a different perspective about it now. He would give up his hair for this girl. It was such a big sacrifice. She swallowed the lump in her throat, thinking that maybe it was how it feels for a mother to see her son become a man. “You can do what you think it’s right. I’ll stand by your side, kid, promise.”
“Thank you, ma. And when you go home, can I come visit her? I can take the bus by myself.”
“Well you have my permission. We can come up with a schedule to see her, even after school starts again.” Bette let him lie down back next to her and looked at the ceiling. She prayed that this girl could get better and have a normal life. It was a serious commitment he just made, and she knew he would stick to it no matter how hard it was going to be. If she could control it, she’d not let her son fall for a girl whose life was threatened by such a terrible condition. But she couldn’t control his feelings. And she was risking it now, to let him experience love for the first time, even it might break his heart. It was his life, and his choice.“Now wipe that frown from your face, mister, go get bald and fall in love.”
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So, more fun and happiness, here they are.
I think it’s so very nice of you to ask about my last story, the Lucky One. I started this one and thought that it’ll be a short sideway story, wouldn’t take much time. But it proved that I was wrong. The readers liked it and requested me to explore further into it. I got too distracted by this story.
I will go back to the Lucky One as I end this one. It’s still in the plotting progress.
But I think I’d take a breather too. College starts this fall and I’m traveling over 7000 miles to study in a different country. Soon my life would get pretty busy. I’ll try to write on holidays.
Now please be patient with me.
I hope you like this chapter, and there’s gonna be another if you’d want that.
Peace
Another chapter!great work,although I stopped leaving message,but I admit I check your update everyday.ha.
Another chapter!great work,although I stopped leaving message,but I admit I check your update everyday.ha.
easy on the college part,i’m sure you’ll do great,believe me ,it’ll be so much fun.but keep posting while having fun.
Amazing amazing ….. I love the nurse ! Great interaction, please continue the love portion.. Can’t wait for the wedding celebrations.
Btw, where are you studying… All the best in whatever you are in… Good luck !
Thanks for this another one just the same for the wedding would be great!!
Prrrrrfect!!!
Good luck with your study in the fall.
Where are going for your study?
Loved the update, it was beautiful written and it was time they got to the loving time.
I hope you will update before you move away for your study.
Thanks for the update. Good luck with school.
That was sweet and hot, love it. Thanks for the update my friend
This was a amazing chapter and I love every word of it…Awe Michaelanglo is in love so cute and adorable, but also so sad because most time little kids get their little hearts broken at that age and many more times growing up, hopefully LIllian be ok so he will spared…I dont think I can deal with you taking breathers from writing lol as these stories fill me up but real life is more important…and can I just say yayyy your going to finish The Lucky One, you’re just awesome!
RT,
I can’t believe that I missed to comment on your chapter 22.. tsk! tsk! tsk!
Anyway, your previous chapters and this latest chapter are all the same. They are the same in AWESOMEness and EPICness. Hi hi!
Btw, i’m with your other readers with the ff. Issues:
1) I do like more chapters for this book
2) I want the continuation of The Lucky One
3) I wish u all the best in your studies
4) I am willing to wait for your stories even if you will not be posting it as often as you could.
Again, thanks for droppin by in my comment box. It means so much to me to know that one of my fave ff writer is also reading my ff.
Love love love,
Scribe
I loved it!
I loved the banter between them, and it was a sweet scene between Bette and her son, when talking about his love. I’m so glad that Bette gave good advice to her son, who will follow it.
I loved the sex scene between Bette and Tina nurse :P
It was a wonderful picture, as looked clean and seemed to love in each other’s eyes.
Thank you.
Please, please, please finish The Lucky One !!!!
Our Roby! Incredible chapter, loved!
You as always writing superbly.
Made me want to eat pudding, and that sweet is not my
favorite.
I know that college will occupy much of your time, but
please! not abandon us.
I’ll wait for a new chapter with the patience of Buddha.
Study and writing form with louvor.E contunue great story
B & T.
Great to see them being loving and playful again. It would be great to see more chapters of this story – and also to see the Lucky One finished! Thank you for posting and good luck with your studies!