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Round n Round We Go (Ch.23)
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So the boy was happy all over again.
The next day was the day to go home. A black limo pulled to the car park of the hospital. Bette never trusted autopilot cars, so the family decided to give their old Lincoln a run. The driver, Sam, was looking a little nervous to pick up the woman and send her home. Everybody beside his daughter and his grandson was at the Porter’s villa, preparing for a welcome party. It took a lot of nerve to volunteer for the driving.
Bette finally met Jillian, a very pale and very quiet ten year old girl. She watched as her son whispered to the girl and they both giggled their childish laugh. It was a rather easy goodbye because he promised to visit every now and then.
To show her appreciation, Grandma Porter sent an electronic check to the hospital, and after a short negotiation, the chief of surgery agreed to treat Jillian pro-bono later on, as well as for some other kids in this hospital. But Michelangelo decided not to let Jillian’s family know that it was because of his family. He really took Bette’s words by heart and was responsible to act accordingly, which made the brunette so very proud of him.
Tina packed their things and went to wait in the car. She sat behind the driver’s seat, and she could see her father from the rear mirror. It reminded her the first day to Marymount High, the nerve, the excitement, the worry. But now, she was only excited, for what she had planned to give her lover an enjoyable surprise.
Sam coughed when he saw the brunette and the boy walk over hand in hand. He quickly pushed the button and the side door shot open. “He-hello, miss Porter.”
“Thank you, Sam.” Bette greeted him very calmly, and she sat next to the other woman, roaming her hand slightly on the blonde’s lap. “Let’s go home.”
“Yeah, fancy a homemade meal?” Tina caught the traveling hand and locked fingers with Bette.
“I am kinda hungry… but I’d love to have something sweet, wouldn’t you?” The brunette whispered, blowing hot air to Tina’s ear and teasing the sensitive woman. “Stay over the night?”
“I was counting on the invitation.” Stealing a scorching kiss, Tina melted in those strong arms.
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So, more fun and happiness, here they are.
I think it’s so very nice of you to ask about my last story, the Lucky One. I started this one and thought that it’ll be a short sideway story, wouldn’t take much time. But it proved that I was wrong. The readers liked it and requested me to explore further into it. I got too distracted by this story.
I will go back to the Lucky One as I end this one. It’s still in the plotting progress.
But I think I’d take a breather too. College starts this fall and I’m traveling over 7000 miles to study in a different country. Soon my life would get pretty busy. I’ll try to write on holidays.
Now please be patient with me.
I hope you like this chapter, and there’s gonna be another if you’d want that.
Peace
Another chapter!great work,although I stopped leaving message,but I admit I check your update everyday.ha.
Another chapter!great work,although I stopped leaving message,but I admit I check your update everyday.ha.
easy on the college part,i’m sure you’ll do great,believe me ,it’ll be so much fun.but keep posting while having fun.
Amazing amazing ….. I love the nurse ! Great interaction, please continue the love portion.. Can’t wait for the wedding celebrations.
Btw, where are you studying… All the best in whatever you are in… Good luck !
Thanks for this another one just the same for the wedding would be great!!
Prrrrrfect!!!
Good luck with your study in the fall.
Where are going for your study?
Loved the update, it was beautiful written and it was time they got to the loving time.
I hope you will update before you move away for your study.
Thanks for the update. Good luck with school.
That was sweet and hot, love it. Thanks for the update my friend
This was a amazing chapter and I love every word of it…Awe Michaelanglo is in love so cute and adorable, but also so sad because most time little kids get their little hearts broken at that age and many more times growing up, hopefully LIllian be ok so he will spared…I dont think I can deal with you taking breathers from writing lol as these stories fill me up but real life is more important…and can I just say yayyy your going to finish The Lucky One, you’re just awesome!
RT,
I can’t believe that I missed to comment on your chapter 22.. tsk! tsk! tsk!
Anyway, your previous chapters and this latest chapter are all the same. They are the same in AWESOMEness and EPICness. Hi hi!
Btw, i’m with your other readers with the ff. Issues:
1) I do like more chapters for this book
2) I want the continuation of The Lucky One
3) I wish u all the best in your studies
4) I am willing to wait for your stories even if you will not be posting it as often as you could.
Again, thanks for droppin by in my comment box. It means so much to me to know that one of my fave ff writer is also reading my ff.
Love love love,
Scribe
I loved it!
I loved the banter between them, and it was a sweet scene between Bette and her son, when talking about his love. I’m so glad that Bette gave good advice to her son, who will follow it.
I loved the sex scene between Bette and Tina nurse :P
It was a wonderful picture, as looked clean and seemed to love in each other’s eyes.
Thank you.
Please, please, please finish The Lucky One !!!!
Our Roby! Incredible chapter, loved!
You as always writing superbly.
Made me want to eat pudding, and that sweet is not my
favorite.
I know that college will occupy much of your time, but
please! not abandon us.
I’ll wait for a new chapter with the patience of Buddha.
Study and writing form with louvor.E contunue great story
B & T.
Great to see them being loving and playful again. It would be great to see more chapters of this story – and also to see the Lucky One finished! Thank you for posting and good luck with your studies!