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Round n Round We Go (Ch.23)
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“SURPRISE!!!”
Bette was not foreseeing that when she opened the door and went in to the main living room. It was decorated with banners that said “Welcome Home” and “We love you Bette”. What even more surprising, was her grandmother wearing a yellow paper crown, sitting beside a cake. “Wow, someone knows how to throw a party.” She smiled and stepped inside to hug her friends and family.
The dish was wonderful, except when everyone sat down in exactly the same order as Thanksgiving, or Christmas dinner, and there was an empty seat beside Maryanne. They looked among themselves and somehow fell silent.
“To Sue,” Bette held up her glass of grape juice, and held her son’s hand with the other hand, “and to everybody living a healthy life.”
The rest of the table followed. They took some minutes to recover from the sadness, but gradually started the small talks on dinner table.
But Tina’s mind was not entirely on the dinner. She was anticipating the alone time with her lover, and having the woman’s figure just a seat to her right, she could hardly sit sill. She took a discreet glance at Bette, found whose control and restrain impressive. Then she smirked to herself, “let’s see if you can really take it easy when I get you alone.”
Not showing her true feelings was her strong suit. Bette was actually biting the inner side of her cheek and scolding inwardly as everyone seemed to linger longer than other times. She practically squirmed in her seat when Tina “carelessly” served her the blueberry pie, and “carelessly” brushed over her forearm. If they were still teenagers, she’d already excuse herself and kidnap the blonde to their room, leaving a room of people grinning knowingly. But they were adults, and mothers, her stunt was out of question.
Grandma Porter and Victoria were tired. They each went back to rest. The younger people were still talking and drinking the night away.
“Ahem,” Bette cleared her throat and shot a look at Alice, who was ready to give another detailed story about some celebrity’s scandal. “Al, don’t you think it’s a little late?”
“No, it’s still ear—” Alice glanced to her friend and saw the arch of a brow, soon changed her tone. “Ohhhh, yeah, it’s quite late, guys. I think I’m gonna head home, com’on, guys, give me a lift.” She randomly tapped Steven on the shoulder. Tina smiled appreciatively, she returned an exaggerated wink.
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So, more fun and happiness, here they are.
I think it’s so very nice of you to ask about my last story, the Lucky One. I started this one and thought that it’ll be a short sideway story, wouldn’t take much time. But it proved that I was wrong. The readers liked it and requested me to explore further into it. I got too distracted by this story.
I will go back to the Lucky One as I end this one. It’s still in the plotting progress.
But I think I’d take a breather too. College starts this fall and I’m traveling over 7000 miles to study in a different country. Soon my life would get pretty busy. I’ll try to write on holidays.
Now please be patient with me.
I hope you like this chapter, and there’s gonna be another if you’d want that.
Peace
Another chapter!great work,although I stopped leaving message,but I admit I check your update everyday.ha.
Another chapter!great work,although I stopped leaving message,but I admit I check your update everyday.ha.
easy on the college part,i’m sure you’ll do great,believe me ,it’ll be so much fun.but keep posting while having fun.
Amazing amazing ….. I love the nurse ! Great interaction, please continue the love portion.. Can’t wait for the wedding celebrations.
Btw, where are you studying… All the best in whatever you are in… Good luck !
Thanks for this another one just the same for the wedding would be great!!
Prrrrrfect!!!
Good luck with your study in the fall.
Where are going for your study?
Loved the update, it was beautiful written and it was time they got to the loving time.
I hope you will update before you move away for your study.
Thanks for the update. Good luck with school.
That was sweet and hot, love it. Thanks for the update my friend
This was a amazing chapter and I love every word of it…Awe Michaelanglo is in love so cute and adorable, but also so sad because most time little kids get their little hearts broken at that age and many more times growing up, hopefully LIllian be ok so he will spared…I dont think I can deal with you taking breathers from writing lol as these stories fill me up but real life is more important…and can I just say yayyy your going to finish The Lucky One, you’re just awesome!
RT,
I can’t believe that I missed to comment on your chapter 22.. tsk! tsk! tsk!
Anyway, your previous chapters and this latest chapter are all the same. They are the same in AWESOMEness and EPICness. Hi hi!
Btw, i’m with your other readers with the ff. Issues:
1) I do like more chapters for this book
2) I want the continuation of The Lucky One
3) I wish u all the best in your studies
4) I am willing to wait for your stories even if you will not be posting it as often as you could.
Again, thanks for droppin by in my comment box. It means so much to me to know that one of my fave ff writer is also reading my ff.
Love love love,
Scribe
I loved it!
I loved the banter between them, and it was a sweet scene between Bette and her son, when talking about his love. I’m so glad that Bette gave good advice to her son, who will follow it.
I loved the sex scene between Bette and Tina nurse :P
It was a wonderful picture, as looked clean and seemed to love in each other’s eyes.
Thank you.
Please, please, please finish The Lucky One !!!!
Our Roby! Incredible chapter, loved!
You as always writing superbly.
Made me want to eat pudding, and that sweet is not my
favorite.
I know that college will occupy much of your time, but
please! not abandon us.
I’ll wait for a new chapter with the patience of Buddha.
Study and writing form with louvor.E contunue great story
B & T.
Great to see them being loving and playful again. It would be great to see more chapters of this story – and also to see the Lucky One finished! Thank you for posting and good luck with your studies!