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Run (5)
Some ambiguous noise reminded us that the couch was not the most appropriate place to be climbing onto one another, and we pulled ourselves up. I smirked as I wiped my lips, realizing she had removed my shirt again. I picked it up from the floor and held it up to my chest.
“I really want you to come to my room.”
Well, some people are more straightforward than others, that’s for sure. I looked shyly to the ground, as if I had any right to feign a timid nature after instigating our make out session. When I looked back up at her, she had her answer, and we walked carefully down to her room.
I had to pull my shirt back on to check on Angelica, but once I was in Bette’s room, it was discarded again. As were my pants.
We both lay on her bed together, and I let her get on top of me. I held her face in my hands. “I feel like I should know more …”
“You think we’re going too quickly?” Bette asked cautiously, taking my fingers into her mouth with a passion. She was so lost.
I chuckled quietly, and then whimpered with the way her tongue felt on me. I’d never felt anyone’s tongue so intimately. “No … I mean … about … touching you.”
“You want to know what to do?” It took her a moment to pull her lips away from my fingers. “Do whatever you want to me. Whatever excites you, Tina … I’ll like it. Show me what you want.”
The invitation gave me a high like never before. Here was this absolutely beautiful woman, claiming that I could have her however I wanted. I knew this was any lesbian’s dream, but I still didn’t consider myself a lesbian. I’ve always hated labels. And regardless of that, this was my dream come true.
I still remember the distinct smell of her hair, which smelled of mangos. Her neck was the softest thing, and I could have kissed it all night if I weren’t so excited for every other part of her. Her body was hot and her words were fumbled, because of her own excitement. Because of mine.
When I had kissed my way to her chest, I pulled the neck of her shirt down past her bra, and kissed with an open mouth along her cleavage. Only as I was doing it did I realize how badly I had wanted to do it all along. It felt like my thirst was quenched, and yet I had been so oblivious. It was all working me up.
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(43 votes, average: 3.88 out of 5)
Amazing… you can really feel Bette’s turmoil; so hard to protect yourself from something you want so badly. Looking forward to your next post!
The whole story unfolded so beautifully.
I hope they are not to be star crossed lovers. That was one of the most beautiful love scenes. Your descriptions of their thoughts, emotions and their words was handled so tenderly. Just amazing.
So amazing this story, love the pace and love the 9 page long chapter:)Looking forward to more, PPS and thanks for sharing of course.
And you have me GR. You had from your very first post :) Thank you
I’m so glad to see an update! Thank you for taking my mind off things for a little while :) I love the different vibe there is to your story, it’s very intense. I’m looking forward to your next update. Thanks!
Finally!Thanks God Tina isn`t leaving Bette but I thinks its trouble ahead.Thank you,grat story.
aaww that was such a sweet love scene. thanks!
This story is so good! Thanks for posting.
Oh my goodness! That was so good! I love the part where Tina asks Bette to tell her to stay. I really love this story and it is becoming my number one favorite out of all my other favorites that you have written.
That was so intense! I love the way you describe what each of them were feeling. It makes their connection so powerful.
That was awesome and glad Tina didn’t leave and they are so sweet and hot, love the love scene and can’t wait to see more of them. Please post more, thanks!
That was just a wonderful update. Thank you.
Hi GR, That was totally awesome. Suddenly TIna took the initiative and asked Bette to ask her and Angie to stay. Once Bette admitted the deepth of her feelings Tina was free to finally allowed her own emotions and desires to wash over her. The tenderest of love making ensued. You made me hope my breath throughout as these souls consumated their connection. Angelica was adorabel but even better was Bette’s reaction. I was cheering as Bette let Tina find her own way and her voice. Maybe Kit can take Angie for the night and let the gals vocalize their attraction. Thank you GR for pushing the boundaries and crafting such a truly beautiful tale. My hero. Your Loyal Fan and Friend.
That was amazing GR. The love scene was so beautiful and spell binding