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Run (5)
Seeing her orgasm in front of me for the first time was something I’ll never forget. A woman during climax seems to hold such grace, and absolute bliss – like they’ve seen something heavenly, in awe of their own pleasure. I was in awe of Bette that night, watching her arch and moan so tenderly that it made me smile.
Perhaps the most surprising of all was the rush I felt when Bette flipped me over and started whispering to me while she teased me.
“You’re so good,” she moaned into my ear, breathing more heavily than I would have expected – she was so fit. “Do you have … any idea how hard it is to keep quiet … when you touch me like that?”
“Hard?” I remember whispering back teasingly, the palms of my hands enjoying the warmth of her back as she pressed her hips between my legs. Everything was so soft. That was something I just couldn’t get enough of. I wanted all of her to touch all of me.
“I think I know what else is … a little hard,” she smirked, her hand shifting to rest just over my panties, and pressing onto me. It gave me tingles, and I realized she meant my clit. I nearly jumped at the sensations taking over me. This need was becoming animalistic.
“Underneath,” I pleaded quietly, her hair tickling my breasts as she watched while she finally undressed me – the final garment. I wanted to kick it off, but allowed her all of the grace she enjoyed. It was so hard to just lay beneath her while she looked at me with affection. I wanted to do something, to feel something, but I was slowly realizing just how sensual it felt to really take time with each kiss or touch. I tried to catch my breath and appreciate the moment as she did.
And just as I was relaxing and watching the way she looked at me, she touched me again. I thought my eyes had rolled back in my head, but then I realized I had tilted my face back into her pillow. I was in my own euphoria.
Her fingers were better than I had ever imagined, and suddenly there were so many thoughts racing through my mind. Fantasies I had even denied to myself before were upfront and center. All of it was becoming clear, and I couldn’t hide anything from myself. There I was, underneath her – giving myself to her – and I was unguarded. I hid nothing, would have admitted anything. My whole body was at peace.
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(43 votes, average: 3.88 out of 5)
Amazing… you can really feel Bette’s turmoil; so hard to protect yourself from something you want so badly. Looking forward to your next post!
The whole story unfolded so beautifully.
I hope they are not to be star crossed lovers. That was one of the most beautiful love scenes. Your descriptions of their thoughts, emotions and their words was handled so tenderly. Just amazing.
So amazing this story, love the pace and love the 9 page long chapter:)Looking forward to more, PPS and thanks for sharing of course.
And you have me GR. You had from your very first post :) Thank you
I’m so glad to see an update! Thank you for taking my mind off things for a little while :) I love the different vibe there is to your story, it’s very intense. I’m looking forward to your next update. Thanks!
Finally!Thanks God Tina isn`t leaving Bette but I thinks its trouble ahead.Thank you,grat story.
aaww that was such a sweet love scene. thanks!
This story is so good! Thanks for posting.
Oh my goodness! That was so good! I love the part where Tina asks Bette to tell her to stay. I really love this story and it is becoming my number one favorite out of all my other favorites that you have written.
That was so intense! I love the way you describe what each of them were feeling. It makes their connection so powerful.
That was awesome and glad Tina didn’t leave and they are so sweet and hot, love the love scene and can’t wait to see more of them. Please post more, thanks!
That was just a wonderful update. Thank you.
Hi GR, That was totally awesome. Suddenly TIna took the initiative and asked Bette to ask her and Angie to stay. Once Bette admitted the deepth of her feelings Tina was free to finally allowed her own emotions and desires to wash over her. The tenderest of love making ensued. You made me hope my breath throughout as these souls consumated their connection. Angelica was adorabel but even better was Bette’s reaction. I was cheering as Bette let Tina find her own way and her voice. Maybe Kit can take Angie for the night and let the gals vocalize their attraction. Thank you GR for pushing the boundaries and crafting such a truly beautiful tale. My hero. Your Loyal Fan and Friend.
That was amazing GR. The love scene was so beautiful and spell binding