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Run (5)
If she was worried because it was my first time with a woman, it didn’t show. Maybe she was distracted, but she seemed totally at ease. She was opened to me, and she made that obvious with her physical surrender – like she couldn’t fight her own desires any longer.
Looking back, it may have been a little soon to be making love to one another, but it was so damn perfect. Just remembering the tears in my eyes as I gently undressed her then, I’m breathless again. Her clothes were pretty, but she was absolutely beautiful in a way I’d never understood the concept before. She was so tender, laying underneath me, and breathing softly into my ear. I smiled as I was teasing her, thinking with shock at my own initiation of our intimacy – what on earth was I doing, and how did I know where to start? Although so much of it was confusing to me, my adoration and love for her drew me close. No fear or doubt could shake the comfort we sought in one another, and I found my own desires floating up into my mind, urging me to try what was tempting. I was exploring her, and she enjoyed my touch – I could tell by the way she trembled and squirmed. Learning through touch eliminated my inevitable over-thinking of the situation, and let me simply enjoy her body as she enjoyed mine.
As she stared at me, I teasingly unhooked my bra, and threw it off the bed. When she reached up, I laid down over her – my breasts pressed into her hands – and I kissed her.
It was such a natural experience for me, making love to a woman. There was nothing ‘alternative’ about the way she made me feel. It was so beautiful.
She didn’t even seem surprised when I slid my hand down her naked body, and cupped her sex like it had always been mine to have. She just trembled and pulled me down on top of her. I was never been so happy as when I was slowly working my fingers into her, seeing a part of this woman that I knew no one else had seen. It was even more than love. I still don’t know what to call it.
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(43 votes, average: 3.88 out of 5)
Amazing… you can really feel Bette’s turmoil; so hard to protect yourself from something you want so badly. Looking forward to your next post!
The whole story unfolded so beautifully.
I hope they are not to be star crossed lovers. That was one of the most beautiful love scenes. Your descriptions of their thoughts, emotions and their words was handled so tenderly. Just amazing.
So amazing this story, love the pace and love the 9 page long chapter:)Looking forward to more, PPS and thanks for sharing of course.
And you have me GR. You had from your very first post :) Thank you
I’m so glad to see an update! Thank you for taking my mind off things for a little while :) I love the different vibe there is to your story, it’s very intense. I’m looking forward to your next update. Thanks!
Finally!Thanks God Tina isn`t leaving Bette but I thinks its trouble ahead.Thank you,grat story.
aaww that was such a sweet love scene. thanks!
This story is so good! Thanks for posting.
Oh my goodness! That was so good! I love the part where Tina asks Bette to tell her to stay. I really love this story and it is becoming my number one favorite out of all my other favorites that you have written.
That was so intense! I love the way you describe what each of them were feeling. It makes their connection so powerful.
That was awesome and glad Tina didn’t leave and they are so sweet and hot, love the love scene and can’t wait to see more of them. Please post more, thanks!
That was just a wonderful update. Thank you.
Hi GR, That was totally awesome. Suddenly TIna took the initiative and asked Bette to ask her and Angie to stay. Once Bette admitted the deepth of her feelings Tina was free to finally allowed her own emotions and desires to wash over her. The tenderest of love making ensued. You made me hope my breath throughout as these souls consumated their connection. Angelica was adorabel but even better was Bette’s reaction. I was cheering as Bette let Tina find her own way and her voice. Maybe Kit can take Angie for the night and let the gals vocalize their attraction. Thank you GR for pushing the boundaries and crafting such a truly beautiful tale. My hero. Your Loyal Fan and Friend.
That was amazing GR. The love scene was so beautiful and spell binding