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S. O. (Esss Ohhh)
The tiniest details of Jay’s face consumed her, from the delightful way the well-groomed eyebrows framed those eyes, and the way the aristocratic nose arched over that face, to the contrast those high cheekbones gave to her cheeks, everything coming together in a way that must be close to the Golden Mean. There were actresses that would kill for the way Jay’s face naturally came together, from hairline to eyes to nose, to soft, pouty reddish lips, to pert chin – you’d have to pay a doctor a lot of money to achieve the balance Jay’s face came by naturally. Tina’s artistic eye traced a line that skated from the edges of that face to the well-shaped shoulders, down the toned arms, and skimmed inward to a cinched waist, before it flared slightly out again to hips that were narrower than hers, before continuing lazily down slim legs that seemed to go on forever. Her gaze travelled upward until she stopped again at those eyes, that now looked bemusedly back at her.
Tina knew she’d been caught staring, but didn’t mind that Jay had caught her doing so. After all, these were surreal circumstances she’d wandered into this serene Montana morning – her marriage was unravelling but the shock of it still hadn’t registered. Instead, she couldn’t help but lock eyes with this beguiling woman who’d stood silently by her side as her world crumbled.
She found herself agreeing with Henry to have the kids flown to Montana, together with Christie, their nanny, as he prepared for his business trip to Stockholm. He could ask his friend, George, Henry suggested, who owned a business jet service, whether the kids and Christie could join a flight from New York to any place near Montana. Tiler and Jia could join them, Tina added, suddenly cooperative, to Henry’s surprise.
“Tiler’s friends with George also, and adores the kids, so I’m sure she won’t mind coming out here with them. Besides, they’ll have to rent a van or SUV or something, and Tiler can do the driving so that Christie can focus on the kids. She’ll probably ask about whether Jia can come along, too, since they’re so early into their relationship and won’t be able to bear being apart.”
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Thanks for the chapter!
Great to see new part of the story.
And Tina – this is Bette! You just need to jump on her and Oh wait, you just almost did it:)
Tina says (innocently): “almost did what?”
????
Hm, maybe we’ll find out in next chapter?:)
So happy to see the update. Thanks
Just had to say that I was so happy to see a new chapter to this story! Love your attention to detail and YES to more teasing from those two.
Thanks for posting!
I personally luv the early, teasing phase when you just know you’ve clicked with someone
the fighting phase, um, not so much.
Would love to see this story continued by the way! I think about that ending often. That chemistry!! Hope you’ll consider x
Hi JBLH,
Yes, will continue this. Taking a while, but getting there! Hope you’ve had a good holiday. Happy New Year!
-S
Thank you for the reply and I’m so happy to hear this news!!! Happy New Year and I can’t wait to see where this story goes.
Happy writing!
So great to have a new chapter, thanks ever so much. Always wonderful to read about their love blossoming, and right now it is on a rampage. Yay!!!!! Tina will get all her stuff together, take care of her children and tell henry to go straight to hades and beyond. He is too much of a d–k to tell her he wants out, just not much of a man, his mother had already told her so. Tina should have listened to her and run like hell. I think he has already found someone to keep him warm at night, whether it is Stockholm or New York. Good riddance to him, he’s not worth piss. She needs Bette in her life for a love that is total and complete and when the children are there they will look like a truly complete family. Can hardly wait for all this to unfold. Thanks again for posting.
Speaking of Stockholm, for some reason, I thought you’d appreciate the following one liner from Ken Dodd (RIP):
“Just read a book about Stockholm Syndrome. It started off badly, but by the end I really liked it…”
Side-splitting ????
Not picking on Swedish friends and readers out there, of course.
Thanks for commenting. Now let me get a pot for H to p*ss in, bec that’s all he deserves, right?
Welcome back skydancer!
I missed you and your story!
They met and bonded immediatley, there was a instant connection.
Henry is a asshole and it wouldn’t surprise me if he is cheating around Tina’s back. Dump him and start a family with Bette.
It is clear that Lena is history as possible lover, but i do hope she will continue to be a friend for Bette.
Fantastic update, please don’t let us wait too long for the next chapter!
So does anyone here have an ex-SO whose fine with being just a friend, after things went south between you two? For real, I mean.
I hadn’t and i doubt about possibility of this.
That’s why i always be sceptical about IC version friendship between Bette and Alice in TLW and that Alice truly cared about B&T relationship.
Hi, it’s been a long time since your last post, are you consider to continue this very interesting story?
Hi Z, yes, it has been a long time. I’ve had the next few chapters in draft, but haven’t had time to finish them. Meanwhile, a few things happened IRL, so life sucked for a while, and I wasn’t writing anything. Then a new story wormed its way into my head, in a way I couldn’t ignore so I’ve been writing that one out. May post that sooner than the next chapter for this one, and I hope you’ll like it.
Take good care, in the meantime!
S
Ok, thanks for the explanation. Then i’ll be waiting for your new story or update for this one!
Oh no, it’s been 3 1/2 years since the last entry. Please don’t tell me that COVID-19 impacted your writing.
I love this new/different story line!! When TJ arrives the intersection with Bette (Jay) will just add more and more to the story.
And, don’t forget the LA airport lounge conversation that Bette heard period to her departure. Another line of this great story!
Please write/publish more, PLEASE!