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Savannah
Story written on January 12, 2012 by kins40.
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It slowed as it moved purposefully upwards, circling one of Tina’s breast and then the other and then finally cupping one then the other, lightly brushing over hardening nipples.
Tina watched Bette as her hands lingered over her with reverence and unmistakable sensuality. A little whimper escaped her lips not only at the feel of the gentle massage but at the tears which now ran freely along Bette’s face.
The brunette’s hand stopped just above Tina’s left breast and she spoke, looking at her hand as it rose gently up and down with every breath the accountant took. But what was truly unmistakable was, what she could feel under the pads of her fingers, the constant and strong drumming of her heart.
"The doctors call it a toxic injection. It caused your body to go
into respiratory failure and your heart…… stopped…"
The memory of the second Bette thought she had lost Tina forever came crashing down hard and fast.
Images of the emergency room where doctors were hurrying, ordering, shouting appeared as clear as day in her mind. Tina’s body jolted by the electric current of the defibrillator paddles would, it seemed, be engrained in her head forever.
Bette’s body shook with unrestrained sobs as she finally let go of her emotions.
"Oh Bette…" came Tina’s horrified cry. She was as equally distressed by what had happened to her as she was by the anguish she had caused the beautiful brunette with her foolish behaviour. Even more so about the latter, it became evident to her.
"Bette….. I am so sorry…." Tina implored trying as best she could to cup the vet’s face between her good and her injured hand, " please….. believe me, I …. I never meant for any of this to hap…"
The accountant was stopped mid-sentence, when Bette collided their mouths together in a silencing kiss. She pressed her mouth against the soft pink lips, hard at first, momentarily forgetting the little injury, instead cradling the blonde head in her trembling hands.
Lips parted and the kiss deepened allowing tears from both women and water droplets from the shower to mix in their renewed connection.
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So 27 was the antipenultimate, huh? Still, wish there were many more….
This chapter is really well written, could feel the intensity and nervousness of it all. Especially the interaction between those two, and the reliving of the nightmare. Only one more chapter…boo
As Jackiet said, “only 1 more chapter, BOO,” I agree totally. Felt the pain and anguish both of them were feeling during that shower. Really hate to see this story end, maybe you can give us more on their budding relationship and see if Bette goes to US with Tina if she decides to leave earlier than she had planned or even if she decides to live in Africa with Bette. Give us more about their relationship and budding love. Just reaching because I hate to see it end. Thanks so much for sharing this wonderful story.
… Late… But couldn’t resist… So sad… So intense… So beautiful… God, so tired… Me, I mean… Not the chapter… Cause that wouldn’t make any sense, right?… Definitely not… *sigh* Anyway… (God, brain asleep already)… Loved this as always… So well written… And so glad last chapter was only the antepinul… antipin… antepult… Oh whatever!!! But so glad there is one more. Thank you for posting!! xxx Kw
Wow, that was really intense, Lovely writing, fascinating story.
WOW! gobsmacked,,,,,,,,,please kins whatever you have for us in the final chapter,don`t let this be the end of this,,,,hopefully the prequel of a wonderful story of how they met,,,,,,x
Simply amazing. Your writing and descriptions are exquisite.
*Happy dance* there is one more after this!… The scene in the shower… It breaks my heart … [tsk tsk how can i say this?] And ….kinda excites me?… hehehe …And the tenderness of the scene was…unbelievable! thank you kins40.
Hey I don’t care if it takes u five more chapters to finish this I love this story
Exquisite – Thank you
Thanks for the chapter. Glad that Tina is really going to recover and Bette is making sure that she knows that even with the bruises and scars-that she is still beautiful, sexy and wanted.
I’m so glad Tina has Bette there so support her through her healing process. It isn’t easy for either of them. I could feel the anguish Bette was feeling as she explained to Tina what happened to her. Even though she hasn’t used the word yet I think it’s apparent that she feels a deep love for Tina.
I’m so going to be sad when this ends but so wonderful writing. Thank you for this story.
Poor Tina
Excellent chapter,thank you.
Excellent chapter,thank you.
Just a quick message to say you should be proud of yourself considering you would never before I think dared to go go past chapter 20. So this is an accomplishment in itself. And you have done a wonderful job just to let you know. Can’t wait for the next story already. C x
Kins! Kins! Kins!… you just made me do some happy dance … :D LOL… somehow knowing that this is NOT the last chapter is so exciting, THOUGH after that when realized that means only one more chapter to go makes me kinda in blue :-( Anyway… this chapter is so beautifully painful … or painfully beautiful eh?? .. :-p the way you play with words always amazed me! even simple scene as showering (pure showering! ;-p) also become some great scene in your hand. Amazing! … ^_^ I do hope the next chapter will be covering the future for them too.. if not, well.. maybe you can do that in the prologue?! :-p LOL.. with all due respect Kins, it’s your call as it’s your privilege as the writer! ;-) I’ll stick around for any update for you for sure. BTW one year older not always wiser as wise person with young heart is not an easy one to find! ;-)
Hi Kins40, Thank you for creating another wonderful and intense chapter. Every moment was fleshed out to perfection as Bette and Tina struggled with the reality of this attack and aftermath. What also came through was their love for each other. Just awesome. Many thanks from Your Loyal (if absent recently) Fan.
Beautiful update!
So happy to see this – Thanks for writing – Love the story!
Bette is so tender and loving with T. Her experience was horrifying, but Bette will love her back to health. Excellent chapter and Happy Birthday (whenever it was). PPS!!
I am enjoying this story immensely. Thank you for your time and effort.
Beautiful K, absolutely beautiful. I am so sad that the end is near, but I am happy to know that you have more stories for us. Thank you.
I love, love, love this story, and will be so sad to see it end, but I’ve loved the ride. Your writing is exquisite, the emotion you manage to convey is so real and moving.I am not sure whether it is because you have captured the real essence of my motherland, or your beautiful portrayal of these characters, but this is one of my favorite stories. Brava.
Wonderful follow up Kins – sorry I’m so late in catching up to this one. Are you _sure_ this isn’t the antepenultimate chapter (hahaha)??? I want to 2nd Tibetter24 – It feels like there might be a wee bit more before their/your journey comes to a close. Not that I want everything wrapped up in a neat little package but I’m so curious about the fallout back at the foundation (not to mention what became of Shane, Augustine, Ellie…). Recounting the extent of Tina’s injuries was hard to read but I loved how sweet and caring Bette is for her here. Echoing the sentiments of your fans, kudos for another incredibly well written chapter! This is and has been a most enjoyable story. Eagerly awaiting more :) xx – iHH.