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    Scorpio Rising 2

    Story written on November 5, 2006 by New Dawn Fades.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=63123
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    Committed still I turn to go.


     

     

     

    “Where did you go?” She asks, low breathless.

     

     

     

    “…………….Somewhere I wasn’t supposed to…”

     

     

     

    “You miss her?” Kisses on my throat, thumbs circling ever so slightly on my nipples.

     

     

    “….How…………..I ……?”

     

     

    Why are we whispering?

     

     

    “I don’t know…the look on your face like you saw a ghost……you have been doing that a lot lately….it doesn’t bother me………….So do you miss her?”

     

     

     

    “No….I don’t know……..it’s just…we had a morning just like this once…..”

     

     

    “Baby….you are the most amazing woman on this face of the earth…” More kisses. She is trying to make me feel better. When it should be me. I blanked out and thought about who she use to be in the most intimate of moments.

     

     

    “How do you figure?”

     

     

    “You lost the love of your life. I am not taking anything away from the relationship that we have….. Ok. Look at me. I mean it. ….”

     

     

    “Carm….”

     

     

    “No hear me out on this ok. Once I woke up. And I realized that I had no memory…nothing but fragments with you as the guest star, once I realized that I was going to have to start over, I was so scared. I felt like I was in a metal box. And there you where the whole time trying to make me feel better, trying to make me believe in us…”

     

     

    When she says us she puts her hand right where my heart is.

     

     

    “You never got to say goodbye to her. You never got the happy ever after with her. None of us will ever know what life with her would have been like….”

     

     

    “…Carmen …..Please…”

     

     

    “All I am saying is that you loved her very much. If it was even as close to me, than it was a lot. It has to be hard for you looking at me. Touching me, kissing me. It has to be hard to not think of her and the way this use to be….”

     

     

    “…..I……I ………….I don’t think about her….”

     

     

    “I think you do. I think you miss the life you use to have and that means her because she was a part of it.”

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    4. everyone needs closure… i hope shane finds it, because i don’t think you can start loving another person unless you find closure with the first. i think. and everyone needs joy division….at least shanes has that. thanks for the update.the drunken anguish at her grave felt really raw. great job.

    6. I am so freakin happy there is a continuation to this saga!! (I know I’m a little late) The restlessness that Shane feels is understandable given her former lifestyle. The conflict of her feelings is so realistic. Great Job!!

    7. I hope that Shane finds the closure that she needs to move on! I love that you are continuing this story and that you have a whole new angle with the PI possiblity. Looking forward to more!

    9. ok now you have me crying.. the hardest thing to do is say goodbye to the love of your life….. wonderful update.. i hope they can work out their problems.. like the idea of an IP buisness… please update soon thanks

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