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    Scorpio Rising 2

    Story written on November 5, 2006 by New Dawn Fades.
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    Committed still I turn to go.


     

     

      My eyes get heavy. My sobs they turn silent. Her warm hands lull me to sleep. I feel her lips on my forehead. The last thought I had before I fell in a dreamless sleep was; of course I would feel this way, Marco’s birthday was also the day Carmen died.

     

     

     

     

     

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    I sleep. I sleep past the tone of the noon bell. Past the school buses dropping of the kids. Past Carmen and her bizarre fixation with General Hospital. Past Oprah and her fake acknowledgment of understanding. I sleep till the sun went down. Sleep I didn’t have for weeks.

     

     

    When I wake up Marco is staring at me smiling. Sneaky. He giggles when I try to grab him and he runs out of the room. That was his way of saying he was bored and wants to play with me. My bond with Marco is a strange one. We talk about things that other people don’t get. We have a connection that I am just now realizing. He loves his mother. I love his mother, yet there is something else. That bond with who she was. Does he know it? No way, not on a conscious level, not on any level that you can find, but somewhere in him I think him he knows.

     

     

     

    So we’d talk, his baby talk, my grown up talk. We would go shopping and I’d teach him how to keep his head up. How you look people in the eye. How to be kind. I teach him respect; I talk to him about honor about love. And he listens in his own 2 year old way. 2 going on 3….we had plans to take him to Disney. But the closer it got the less and less I wanted to do it. He won’t remember Disney and then we will have to go back when he is older.

     

     

    So fully awake and stretched I go get dressed and play Marco hunt. If he wasn’t at his toy box or coloring books or playing around with Carmen he was hiding waiting for someone to come look for him.

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    4. everyone needs closure… i hope shane finds it, because i don’t think you can start loving another person unless you find closure with the first. i think. and everyone needs joy division….at least shanes has that. thanks for the update.the drunken anguish at her grave felt really raw. great job.

    6. I am so freakin happy there is a continuation to this saga!! (I know I’m a little late) The restlessness that Shane feels is understandable given her former lifestyle. The conflict of her feelings is so realistic. Great Job!!

    7. I hope that Shane finds the closure that she needs to move on! I love that you are continuing this story and that you have a whole new angle with the PI possiblity. Looking forward to more!

    9. ok now you have me crying.. the hardest thing to do is say goodbye to the love of your life….. wonderful update.. i hope they can work out their problems.. like the idea of an IP buisness… please update soon thanks

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