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Scorpio Rising
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I make a move to leave and Carmen grabs my hand to ask me where I was going.
“Hey….we need to talk….”
Shit.
That is never a good thing.
“About what?”
“About why you can’t sleep in the same room as me anymore…”
“Carm….”
“No… ………not in front of Marco….we are going to take a shower and have some breakfast…right honey….”
“Yea…..arrrraw righhhh”
Carmen glares at me as she takes Marco to the bathroom for their bath. I lay in her spot still warm from her body. I lean over and smell her pillow. That scent of her. I stare at the ceiling for such a long period of time I don’t notice her yelling for me to bring her a towel. I get up and head for the linen closet in the hall. John walks by grumpy. He gives me a nod as I hand him a towel. I could feel Carmen silently cursing me so I haul ass to give her the towel.
I walk back in the room to see Marco running around all slippery and wet. I scoop him up and dry him off as I walk back into the bathroom. I see Carmen standing in the shower wet, hair sticking to her, water drops sliding down her body. I stare at her while Marco tries to tell me in baby talk to dry him off. She gives me this look, her eyes welling up her jaw clenched she is mad as hell at me. I hand her the towel I was using to dry of Marco and she gives me this look like idiot the towel is wet.
“Hey buddy why don’t we go to Nana Miri and get you changed….”
“And bring me back a dry towel if you can…..” She yells at me as we walk out of the bathroom.
“You know something buddy…?”
“”Wha…..”
“I think your mama is pissed at me….”
He just laughs. I walk over to the kitchen and see Miriam warming some more tea. She looks at me and smiles.
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“I know I said I wouldn’t write this story anymore, that, that it was the last time and I meant it.” Oh, sweet, sweet lies, and we absolutely love you for them. And sure as shit, the saga continues and I’m once again slave to your words. I like that Shane hasn’t taken to the slow life. She was born and raised into danger and adventure; there’s no way they’ll stop being a part of her. And poor Carmen, she must’ve been terrified at the thought Shane leaving her and Marco (well at the thought of Shane leaving them for good, anyway). I hope John’s big plans are remedy to Shane’s affliction. Awesome, awesome, awesome.
i love you i love you i love you!!!!! youre the fucking bestttttttttttttttttttttttttt this is “THE” story men i love it and i haven’t red it. lol. ok im going to read it know i just was so fucking exited i had to leave a comments first … but seriously men stop saying that it ends here or there or what ever i get my hart broken everytime that sais THE END
i feel bad for carmen i mean she must be borde too. so give them a job or something (nothing that would kill them) but something exiting no just for shane but for carmen too she needs something els in her life than shane and marco…. but love ittt ADICT***
Totally understandable that Shane is feeling cabin fever. Domestic bliss is kinda like the twilight zone for her, but I was so happy to have them reunited w/ Marco & to know how much he loves them both. Have a feeling John’s news is going to shake things up. Great to have a continuation to this fab’ story.
I am so glad you continued this story I hated to see it end. Love the fact that Shane is so restless but don’t want it to tear them apart! I look forward to reading more of this continuing saga!
you can have as many sequels as possible with this story, i have grown to love them as if they were family! In fact… i nearly cried when Carmen said “about why you can’t sleep in the same bed as me anymore…”. You write so well… I feel for both Shane and Carmen! But I hope John dont come up shit for my fave couple… they have been through so much, i dont want them to go thru hell again!