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Scorpio Rising
It felt like someone stabbed me with a knife. She knew something was up with me. I didn’t want to tell her this way so I did what always worked, what I loved to do.
“No baby, no. I would never leave that way. never.”
I kiss her soft, her eyes open. Her legs open me standing in between. I kiss her neck, my tongue tasting the salt of her skin, I kiss her breasts, kiss her nipples take one in my mouth, nibble, hearing her moan, those sounds coming from her I felt them in me. They spur me on mapping that route I knew by heart either way.
I kiss her hips feeling that bone, I kiss her stomach those muscles my muscles this woman is mine and I am hers. It’s what I think when I breathe her in, that salty smokey scent that makes me numb. I kiss her lips till she opens herself to me more. I only wish I could see her face when she comes. Licking her clit, sucking on it really, with two fingers inside her, those moans getting drowned out by the water. She has one leg over my shoulder for more of me. I could do this forever. I could stay down here and pay to play her, that Peaches song in my head, she is not so brittle. Having her all warm and ready. She was gonna pull me anyway…..
“Stopstopstopstop…letmeletme touch you….pleaseplease….”
“Touch me whenever you want…fuck me…”
She smiles that dark smile. And I feel her fingers deep inside me. I feel that soft crush of her breasts against mine. Her mouth biting my shoulder, my neck. Her height perfect for her words in my ear…
‘You can’t leave me, no one will ever love me the way you do. No one will ever fuck me the way you. No one will eat my pussy the way you do. No one will kiss me till my lungs give up on me. No one will ever love you more than me. You can’t leave Shane, you can’t. I will do anything, but don’t leave. Don’tdon’tdon’t…..”
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(19 votes, average: 3.79 out of 5)
“I know I said I wouldn’t write this story anymore, that, that it was the last time and I meant it.” Oh, sweet, sweet lies, and we absolutely love you for them. And sure as shit, the saga continues and I’m once again slave to your words. I like that Shane hasn’t taken to the slow life. She was born and raised into danger and adventure; there’s no way they’ll stop being a part of her. And poor Carmen, she must’ve been terrified at the thought Shane leaving her and Marco (well at the thought of Shane leaving them for good, anyway). I hope John’s big plans are remedy to Shane’s affliction. Awesome, awesome, awesome.
i love you i love you i love you!!!!! youre the fucking bestttttttttttttttttttttttttt this is “THE” story men i love it and i haven’t red it. lol. ok im going to read it know i just was so fucking exited i had to leave a comments first … but seriously men stop saying that it ends here or there or what ever i get my hart broken everytime that sais THE END
i feel bad for carmen i mean she must be borde too. so give them a job or something (nothing that would kill them) but something exiting no just for shane but for carmen too she needs something els in her life than shane and marco…. but love ittt ADICT***
Totally understandable that Shane is feeling cabin fever. Domestic bliss is kinda like the twilight zone for her, but I was so happy to have them reunited w/ Marco & to know how much he loves them both. Have a feeling John’s news is going to shake things up. Great to have a continuation to this fab’ story.
I am so glad you continued this story I hated to see it end. Love the fact that Shane is so restless but don’t want it to tear them apart! I look forward to reading more of this continuing saga!
you can have as many sequels as possible with this story, i have grown to love them as if they were family! In fact… i nearly cried when Carmen said “about why you can’t sleep in the same bed as me anymore…”. You write so well… I feel for both Shane and Carmen! But I hope John dont come up shit for my fave couple… they have been through so much, i dont want them to go thru hell again!