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    Scorpio Rising

     

     

    “Hey did you get any sleep last night?”

     

     

    “Yeah a little, hey listen Carmen is kinda pissed at me can you get him changed for school…I kinda need to smooth it over with her…”

     

     

    “Sure honey…we are gonna get ready for school right sport?”

     

     

    “Yea….bye Nay……” He blows a kiss at me and I catch it and tuck it in my pj’s

     

     

    I walk back to our room past a more awakened John.

     

     

    “Hey Shane….when you got a minute I have something I wanna talk to you and Carmen about….”

     

     

    “Sure John maybe later….”

     

     

    “Hey no problem…listen kiddo you been sleeping ok….?”

     

     

    “Why do you ask…?”

     

     

    “Just……… I hear you wander around just wanted to make sure you are ok.”

     

     

    “Yeah I just have a lot on my mind now….”

     

     

    “Ok lunch later got big things, big things I wanna talk to you about.”

     

     

     

    So I walk back in the bedroom and head for the bathroom. I knock and Carmen says come in. and there she is again naked and a little drier. She looks so fucking hot to me. I can’t concentrate, I just stare at her breasts, her legs that slope of her hips, her knees, her ankles, god I want it all. Carm is talking.

     

     

    “……up with you lately…..?”

     

     

    “…huh………?”

     

     

    “What’s up with you….?”

     

     

    “I don’t know what you mean….”

     

     

    “You don’t know what I mean….ok where do you go at night, I wake up I feel around for you and you are gone…”

     

     

    “I can’t sleep so I take a walk.”

     

     

    “Sure I see you from the window…but where do you go…..you stare out there into nothing….I talk to you and you don’t respond till minutes later….I asked you to bring me a towel….”

     

     

    “Shit Carm I am sorry…I’ll got get it…..”

     

     

     

    “Hey talk to me tell me what’s going on with you….”

     

     

    Should I tell her?

     

     

    “Nothing baby, nothing. I just can’t sleep….it’s always been a thing with me….when I couldn’t sleep I would cruise around and look for a fight or a fuck or a race….”

    Comments

    1. “I know I said I wouldn’t write this story anymore, that, that it was the last time and I meant it.” Oh, sweet, sweet lies, and we absolutely love you for them. And sure as shit, the saga continues and I’m once again slave to your words. I like that Shane hasn’t taken to the slow life. She was born and raised into danger and adventure; there’s no way they’ll stop being a part of her. And poor Carmen, she must’ve been terrified at the thought Shane leaving her and Marco (well at the thought of Shane leaving them for good, anyway). I hope John’s big plans are remedy to Shane’s affliction. Awesome, awesome, awesome.

    2. i love you i love you i love you!!!!! youre the fucking bestttttttttttttttttttttttttt this is “THE” story men i love it and i haven’t red it. lol. ok im going to read it know i just was so fucking exited i had to leave a comments first … but seriously men stop saying that it ends here or there or what ever i get my hart broken everytime that sais THE END

    3. i feel bad for carmen i mean she must be borde too. so give them a job or something (nothing that would kill them) but something exiting no just for shane but for carmen too she needs something els in her life than shane and marco…. but love ittt ADICT***

    4. Totally understandable that Shane is feeling cabin fever. Domestic bliss is kinda like the twilight zone for her, but I was so happy to have them reunited w/ Marco & to know how much he loves them both. Have a feeling John’s news is going to shake things up. Great to have a continuation to this fab’ story.

    5. I am so glad you continued this story I hated to see it end. Love the fact that Shane is so restless but don’t want it to tear them apart! I look forward to reading more of this continuing saga!

    6. you can have as many sequels as possible with this story, i have grown to love them as if they were family! In fact… i nearly cried when Carmen said “about why you can’t sleep in the same bed as me anymore…”. You write so well… I feel for both Shane and Carmen! But I hope John dont come up shit for my fave couple… they have been through so much, i dont want them to go thru hell again!

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