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Second Chance
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All throughout the party Tina couldn’t take her eyes off the brunette and when Elizabeth caught the young blonde looking at her Tina would immediately blush causing an automatic smile on the brunette’s face. After a few minutes of mingling with her other guests she noticed that Elizabeth was gone, her hazel eyes roamed the entire house but she couldn’t find the caramel skinned beauty so she just decided to go out to the porch and sit to get some fresh air.
She took a deep breath but was startled when she heard a voice
“That’s some great party you have there” Tina’s heartbeat increased even without looking she knew who owned that soft yet distinct voice. She turned to the woman sitting at the corner and replied
“Yes…”
“Shouldn’t you be dancing inside?”
It might sound odd but to Tina the way the words would slide out of Bette’s lips then travel to her ears was something sensual and … sexy
“I don’t want to dance inside…” the blonde answered shyly
Silence enveloped the air then after a moment the brunette broke the silence
“So it’s alright for you to dance in here?”
With her heart drumming against her chest Tina met the brunette’s intense gaze and said “Yes…”
The caramel skinned beauty stood up and held her hand out to the blonde
“Then may I have this dance?” Elizabeth’s voice was so calm which was a big contrast to the feeling that the blonde was having at the moment.
Even in her young age she knew that for her to dance with a woman was something not usual especially in a small town like Marion but despite the apprehension that she felt the desire that she was feeling at that time overpowered the negativity that’s clouding her mind. As her heart was pounding so hard she placed her trembling hand on the brunette’s and stood up. They danced to the music that was coming from the house and when their eyes locked Tina thought that she was looking at the most beautiful pair of dark brown eyes that she had ever seen. They didn’t talk instead they just stared at each other’s eyes as their body swayed to the music as one.
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Hi ladies! I know this is late but still I want to greet you all Belated Merry Christmas! I know some of you are waiting for a new chapter of Lover in the Dark, but forgive me I’ve been busy due to the holidays and can’t bring myself to write a new chapter. Please don’t think that I’ve forgotten you all so Instead I would like to repost an old Christmas story that I wrote 3 years ago and I guess not everyone was able to read it the first time so I want to post it again if that’s alright(; I was also inspired by my awesome fellow TiBette fan fiction writers and friends tibettenation1, Pie_Fair and robynTibetter so I thought why not add entertainment to all of you amazing ladies who haven’t read this (; BTW This is a 3- part short story and I also did little revisions and corrections as you know English is not my native language so I hope you enjoy even for the second time around and if you still see some mistakes just kindly disregard it (;
By the way just want to say the amazing and talented Pie_Fair has made me a sexy and i mean a sexy cover for Lover in the Dark and will show that once the new chapter is complete so please watch out for that.
Of course I remember this story, as the song says, it is unforgettable!
I loved it the first time I read it. Why wouldn’t I? A magical story of a 70 year old Tina with a beautiful young Bette and intertwined with the wonderful ‘Unforgettable’ song that I remember so well from my late teenage years. I loved reading it even more this Second Time Around, Thank You.
A belated Happy Christmas, phacey and a wish for a Healthy and Peaceful New year. I look forward to the next Chapter of Lover in the Dark not only for your storytelling but, now, for Pie’s sexy cover art!
Aww yeess this story that had me crying for days…i was so happy when they found each other after so long…and a grandma Tina you had to love it. How come this story has been posted a second and yet it just as beautiful, fantastic, amazing, awesome as before
Enjoyed it, thanks
oh, dear. :-)
thank you for the wonderful Christmas gift. I loved it. but I know it’s not surprising you. I love everything that you write. Thank you for sharing with us your wonderful talent. I’m looking forward to the sequel.
Merry Christmas, dear friend.
I do remember this story – but the ending was a little different – no? ! Hmmmm still great after all these years! ty
Hey hey! Thanks for the shoutout!
Really like the reminisce!
I totally understand, we all have other things to do in life so it’s difficult to keep posting on a regular basis. But don’t worry my friend, we’re patient…although we might not seem to be but we are.
Have a happy holiday and keep up the amazing work!
That was awesome and a little change there and is good to read this story again, love it, thanks my friend and Merry Christmas to you!
Beautiful story the second time reading it! I went back and read all your work this summer. When you have the time and energy to finish Lover in the Dark – we will be waiting patiently…well maybe not too patient! Thank you, my friend!
Ditto with mamadoc this story is truly amazing and totally captures my imagination. Thanks for sharing this again sweetie and will be anxiously waiting for new chapter of Lover. Happy holidays my dearest friend!
I’ve read it before but is as good if not better now. Thank you, you are a wonderful writer. Keep up the great work.
Thank you for this gift.
Merry Christmas !!
You are fantastic.
10 Stars.
Phacey it was really a good idea reposting this story. I enjoyed rereading it as much as I enjoyed reading it for the first time. But I like this better… with a quite different ending.
It’s a wonderful magical story. It makes me think that if I have a funny Fairy God Mother like Alice and if she would ask me, “If you will be given a chance to change something in your past will you do it?” then maybe I will consider it… changing something in my past.
By the way, Bette’s bestfriend Michelle, I like her name… it reminds me of a very good friend… someone sooooo dear to me.
Thanks a lot and please keep writing!
Great Story!!!!!!!!