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Second Chance
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The blonde was beginning to drown in those brown orbs and she found herself leaning closer then she heard the brunette whispered
“You’re so beautiful Tina Kennard…” her voice was so sensual that it brought goose bumps on her creamy white skin. Her hazel eyes shifted its focus from the brunette’s brown eyes to her cherry lips. Elizabeth was about to erase the distance between them to capture the blonde’s lips when suddenly they heard voices coming to their direction, they immediately disengaged themselves from each other
“Tina my darling daughter I’ve been looking all over for you why don’t you go inside and meet your other guests I’ll just walk Samuel and Elizabeth to their car since they have to leave early”
After hearing her father said that she felt her heart was crushed. She looked at Elizabeth and saw the same sad look in those dark brown eyes. Elizabeth’s father was in a hurry because he had to attend an important meeting that same evening. Tina reluctantly walked inside the house but before she went in she turned her back to give the brunette one last look but Elizabeth was already inside the car.
When she closed the door and look at the people who were tremendously enjoying the party for the first time in her young life the blonde felt an immense sadness like her heart was being torn apart as she wasn’t sure if she could ever see her again.
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“What’s with the sad look?”
Tina was snapped out of her thoughts when she heard a woman’s voice
“I beg your pardon?”
The woman had been sitting beside Tina the whole time she was lost in her thoughts just watching her.
“Whenever I see you here I always see that same sad look in your eyes”
Tina didn’t know why but she felt comfortable with the young lady sitting beside her. She gave her a good look and noticed that the woman was in her mid-twenties; her face was unfamiliar but friendly… yes definitely friendly
“Oh that’s nothing it was just an old memory. For an old woman like me sometimes memories just come to the surface you know” Tina explained as she continued feeding the birds.
“But this particular memory was bittersweet isn’t it?” the woman said while feeding the birds.
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Hi ladies! I know this is late but still I want to greet you all Belated Merry Christmas! I know some of you are waiting for a new chapter of Lover in the Dark, but forgive me I’ve been busy due to the holidays and can’t bring myself to write a new chapter. Please don’t think that I’ve forgotten you all so Instead I would like to repost an old Christmas story that I wrote 3 years ago and I guess not everyone was able to read it the first time so I want to post it again if that’s alright(; I was also inspired by my awesome fellow TiBette fan fiction writers and friends tibettenation1, Pie_Fair and robynTibetter so I thought why not add entertainment to all of you amazing ladies who haven’t read this (; BTW This is a 3- part short story and I also did little revisions and corrections as you know English is not my native language so I hope you enjoy even for the second time around and if you still see some mistakes just kindly disregard it (;
By the way just want to say the amazing and talented Pie_Fair has made me a sexy and i mean a sexy cover for Lover in the Dark and will show that once the new chapter is complete so please watch out for that.
Of course I remember this story, as the song says, it is unforgettable!
I loved it the first time I read it. Why wouldn’t I? A magical story of a 70 year old Tina with a beautiful young Bette and intertwined with the wonderful ‘Unforgettable’ song that I remember so well from my late teenage years. I loved reading it even more this Second Time Around, Thank You.
A belated Happy Christmas, phacey and a wish for a Healthy and Peaceful New year. I look forward to the next Chapter of Lover in the Dark not only for your storytelling but, now, for Pie’s sexy cover art!
Aww yeess this story that had me crying for days…i was so happy when they found each other after so long…and a grandma Tina you had to love it. How come this story has been posted a second and yet it just as beautiful, fantastic, amazing, awesome as before
Enjoyed it, thanks
oh, dear. :-)
thank you for the wonderful Christmas gift. I loved it. but I know it’s not surprising you. I love everything that you write. Thank you for sharing with us your wonderful talent. I’m looking forward to the sequel.
Merry Christmas, dear friend.
I do remember this story – but the ending was a little different – no? ! Hmmmm still great after all these years! ty
Hey hey! Thanks for the shoutout!
Really like the reminisce!
I totally understand, we all have other things to do in life so it’s difficult to keep posting on a regular basis. But don’t worry my friend, we’re patient…although we might not seem to be but we are.
Have a happy holiday and keep up the amazing work!
That was awesome and a little change there and is good to read this story again, love it, thanks my friend and Merry Christmas to you!
Beautiful story the second time reading it! I went back and read all your work this summer. When you have the time and energy to finish Lover in the Dark – we will be waiting patiently…well maybe not too patient! Thank you, my friend!
Ditto with mamadoc this story is truly amazing and totally captures my imagination. Thanks for sharing this again sweetie and will be anxiously waiting for new chapter of Lover. Happy holidays my dearest friend!
I’ve read it before but is as good if not better now. Thank you, you are a wonderful writer. Keep up the great work.
Thank you for this gift.
Merry Christmas !!
You are fantastic.
10 Stars.
Phacey it was really a good idea reposting this story. I enjoyed rereading it as much as I enjoyed reading it for the first time. But I like this better… with a quite different ending.
It’s a wonderful magical story. It makes me think that if I have a funny Fairy God Mother like Alice and if she would ask me, “If you will be given a chance to change something in your past will you do it?” then maybe I will consider it… changing something in my past.
By the way, Bette’s bestfriend Michelle, I like her name… it reminds me of a very good friend… someone sooooo dear to me.
Thanks a lot and please keep writing!
Great Story!!!!!!!!