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Second Chance
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“MOTHER?!!!” Tina asked bewildered
“Well who else do you expect? And why are you looking at me that way? Anyway never mind I want you to take a shower now and pick up your dress at Celine’s”
Tina who was still confused at what’s happening just looked at her mother “Dress, what dress?”
Lucille Kennard was surprised at her daughter’s question
“I can’t believe you just asked me that question! Don’t you remember that dress is for your 18th birthday…”
The moment she heard her mother said that her mind travelled back to that unusual yet friendly encounter at the park. Tina just stared at her mother as the voice of the woman echoed in her head
‘If you will be given a chance to change something in your past will you do it?’
Lucille was now becoming puzzled by her daughter’s behavior and when she didn’t get any response she touched Tina’s forehead “Sweetheart are you alright? Is there something wrong with you?” Lucille asked worry was evident on her face.
Tina wasn’t sure whether ‘the thing’ happening to her was just a dream or something supernatural but whatever it was she’s thankful that she was given another opportunity to be with her family once again. She gave her mother a smile then hugged her tightly
“Don’t worry I’m okay… I love you mom and I’ve missed you soooo much…”
Lucille made a small laugh, she didn’t know what had gotten into her daughter but she was extra affectionate this morning “Oh I love you too sweetie but we see each other every day so how come that you missed me?”
Tina pulled away but her arms were still around her mother’s waist “Don’t mind me mom maybe I’m just overwhelmed at the thought of being 18”
“I know that you don’t want a big party but your father and I only want the best for our children and of course we want our little girl to have a great time on her 18th birthday!”
“I know and I’m very grateful and speaking of dad I’ll just go down and see him okay?” before Lucille could answer Tina was already sprinting her way thru the hallway down to the kitchen.
Gerard Kennard was the town sheriff and he would normally start his day sitting in the kitchen reading the newspapers with a cup of black coffee on the side. He smiled when he felt hands covering his eyes
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Hi ladies! I know this is late but still I want to greet you all Belated Merry Christmas! I know some of you are waiting for a new chapter of Lover in the Dark, but forgive me I’ve been busy due to the holidays and can’t bring myself to write a new chapter. Please don’t think that I’ve forgotten you all so Instead I would like to repost an old Christmas story that I wrote 3 years ago and I guess not everyone was able to read it the first time so I want to post it again if that’s alright(; I was also inspired by my awesome fellow TiBette fan fiction writers and friends tibettenation1, Pie_Fair and robynTibetter so I thought why not add entertainment to all of you amazing ladies who haven’t read this (; BTW This is a 3- part short story and I also did little revisions and corrections as you know English is not my native language so I hope you enjoy even for the second time around and if you still see some mistakes just kindly disregard it (;
By the way just want to say the amazing and talented Pie_Fair has made me a sexy and i mean a sexy cover for Lover in the Dark and will show that once the new chapter is complete so please watch out for that.
Of course I remember this story, as the song says, it is unforgettable!
I loved it the first time I read it. Why wouldn’t I? A magical story of a 70 year old Tina with a beautiful young Bette and intertwined with the wonderful ‘Unforgettable’ song that I remember so well from my late teenage years. I loved reading it even more this Second Time Around, Thank You.
A belated Happy Christmas, phacey and a wish for a Healthy and Peaceful New year. I look forward to the next Chapter of Lover in the Dark not only for your storytelling but, now, for Pie’s sexy cover art!
Aww yeess this story that had me crying for days…i was so happy when they found each other after so long…and a grandma Tina you had to love it. How come this story has been posted a second and yet it just as beautiful, fantastic, amazing, awesome as before
Enjoyed it, thanks
oh, dear. :-)
thank you for the wonderful Christmas gift. I loved it. but I know it’s not surprising you. I love everything that you write. Thank you for sharing with us your wonderful talent. I’m looking forward to the sequel.
Merry Christmas, dear friend.
I do remember this story – but the ending was a little different – no? ! Hmmmm still great after all these years! ty
Hey hey! Thanks for the shoutout!
Really like the reminisce!
I totally understand, we all have other things to do in life so it’s difficult to keep posting on a regular basis. But don’t worry my friend, we’re patient…although we might not seem to be but we are.
Have a happy holiday and keep up the amazing work!
That was awesome and a little change there and is good to read this story again, love it, thanks my friend and Merry Christmas to you!
Beautiful story the second time reading it! I went back and read all your work this summer. When you have the time and energy to finish Lover in the Dark – we will be waiting patiently…well maybe not too patient! Thank you, my friend!
Ditto with mamadoc this story is truly amazing and totally captures my imagination. Thanks for sharing this again sweetie and will be anxiously waiting for new chapter of Lover. Happy holidays my dearest friend!
I’ve read it before but is as good if not better now. Thank you, you are a wonderful writer. Keep up the great work.
Thank you for this gift.
Merry Christmas !!
You are fantastic.
10 Stars.
Phacey it was really a good idea reposting this story. I enjoyed rereading it as much as I enjoyed reading it for the first time. But I like this better… with a quite different ending.
It’s a wonderful magical story. It makes me think that if I have a funny Fairy God Mother like Alice and if she would ask me, “If you will be given a chance to change something in your past will you do it?” then maybe I will consider it… changing something in my past.
By the way, Bette’s bestfriend Michelle, I like her name… it reminds me of a very good friend… someone sooooo dear to me.
Thanks a lot and please keep writing!
Great Story!!!!!!!!