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Second Chance
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“Happy birthday and Merry Christmas sweetheart” Tina had always adored her father for he was an epitome of a dignified and a well-respected man. Tina kissed him on the cheek then sat on the chair opposite him
“Thanks dad and Merry Christmas to you too!” she stared at Gerard and smiled, he’s exactly that same as she remembered. Even though she still couldn’t believe that she was back to being 18 again and now sitting opposite her father she couldn’t deny the fact that she was enjoying every moment she was given again to spend with her parents.
“You know what dad? You really are a handsome man!”
Hearing his youngest and only daughter said that made him laugh so loud that the sound reverberate the entire house but he also knew whenever his children wanted something from him
“Alright what do you want this time?” he asked while reading through the newspaper
“Uhmm mom wants me to go to Celine’s to get my dress for the party… so I’m wondering if I can borrow Eleanor?” Tina bit her lip she had been wanting to drive her dad’s super cool car but her dad won’t let her and now she’s hoping that since it’s her birthday that her father will finally allow her.
Gerard’s heart swelled with pride as he looked at his daughter and he thought his baby girl had really grown into a beautiful young woman. He placed his hand inside his right pocket to get the car key then placed it on top of the table
“There you go”
“Oh thanks dad! You’re the best!” Tina stood up and was about to march out of the kitchen when she remembered to ask him about ‘the guests’
“Dad is your friend from Philly will come to the party tonight?”
Gerard who had resumed scanning the newspapers just a few seconds ago stopped then turned his gaze to his daughter “Yes he will and he will bring his daughter, Elizabeth”
Tina who had been holding her breath while waiting for her father’s response felt her heart rate increased at the sound of her name… Elizabeth
“Hey how did you know that I invited them?” Gerard didn’t remember telling it to any of his children but his wife, Lucille
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Hi ladies! I know this is late but still I want to greet you all Belated Merry Christmas! I know some of you are waiting for a new chapter of Lover in the Dark, but forgive me I’ve been busy due to the holidays and can’t bring myself to write a new chapter. Please don’t think that I’ve forgotten you all so Instead I would like to repost an old Christmas story that I wrote 3 years ago and I guess not everyone was able to read it the first time so I want to post it again if that’s alright(; I was also inspired by my awesome fellow TiBette fan fiction writers and friends tibettenation1, Pie_Fair and robynTibetter so I thought why not add entertainment to all of you amazing ladies who haven’t read this (; BTW This is a 3- part short story and I also did little revisions and corrections as you know English is not my native language so I hope you enjoy even for the second time around and if you still see some mistakes just kindly disregard it (;
By the way just want to say the amazing and talented Pie_Fair has made me a sexy and i mean a sexy cover for Lover in the Dark and will show that once the new chapter is complete so please watch out for that.
Of course I remember this story, as the song says, it is unforgettable!
I loved it the first time I read it. Why wouldn’t I? A magical story of a 70 year old Tina with a beautiful young Bette and intertwined with the wonderful ‘Unforgettable’ song that I remember so well from my late teenage years. I loved reading it even more this Second Time Around, Thank You.
A belated Happy Christmas, phacey and a wish for a Healthy and Peaceful New year. I look forward to the next Chapter of Lover in the Dark not only for your storytelling but, now, for Pie’s sexy cover art!
Aww yeess this story that had me crying for days…i was so happy when they found each other after so long…and a grandma Tina you had to love it. How come this story has been posted a second and yet it just as beautiful, fantastic, amazing, awesome as before
Enjoyed it, thanks
oh, dear. :-)
thank you for the wonderful Christmas gift. I loved it. but I know it’s not surprising you. I love everything that you write. Thank you for sharing with us your wonderful talent. I’m looking forward to the sequel.
Merry Christmas, dear friend.
I do remember this story – but the ending was a little different – no? ! Hmmmm still great after all these years! ty
Hey hey! Thanks for the shoutout!
Really like the reminisce!
I totally understand, we all have other things to do in life so it’s difficult to keep posting on a regular basis. But don’t worry my friend, we’re patient…although we might not seem to be but we are.
Have a happy holiday and keep up the amazing work!
That was awesome and a little change there and is good to read this story again, love it, thanks my friend and Merry Christmas to you!
Beautiful story the second time reading it! I went back and read all your work this summer. When you have the time and energy to finish Lover in the Dark – we will be waiting patiently…well maybe not too patient! Thank you, my friend!
Ditto with mamadoc this story is truly amazing and totally captures my imagination. Thanks for sharing this again sweetie and will be anxiously waiting for new chapter of Lover. Happy holidays my dearest friend!
I’ve read it before but is as good if not better now. Thank you, you are a wonderful writer. Keep up the great work.
Thank you for this gift.
Merry Christmas !!
You are fantastic.
10 Stars.
Phacey it was really a good idea reposting this story. I enjoyed rereading it as much as I enjoyed reading it for the first time. But I like this better… with a quite different ending.
It’s a wonderful magical story. It makes me think that if I have a funny Fairy God Mother like Alice and if she would ask me, “If you will be given a chance to change something in your past will you do it?” then maybe I will consider it… changing something in my past.
By the way, Bette’s bestfriend Michelle, I like her name… it reminds me of a very good friend… someone sooooo dear to me.
Thanks a lot and please keep writing!
Great Story!!!!!!!!