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Secret Love chapter 10
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” Let me speak with Bette and I’ll call you back. Okay?”
” Sure. Talk to you soon!”
“Bye.”
Tina hangs up the phone and talks to Bette about Alice’s invitation. Unfortunately, Bette has a meeting with a very important person concerning the upcoming presentation at the museum Talk about some details and conclude the contract.
Tina picks up the phone and calls Alice.
” Hello?”
” Hey! Alice it’s Tina, count Bette out because she has an important meeting tonight and she doesn’t know at what time she’ll be done. But you can certainly count me in”
” Perfect, so be here at around 7:30 or 8:00 PM. Is that good with you?”
“Fine with me! See you later!”
“Later, bye!”
Alice hangs up the phone, and starts wondering what to prepare for diner She picks up the phone again and calls Shane.
” Hi!”
” Shane? It’s Alice, I was wondering what to prepare for diner tonight any suggestions?”
” No suggestions at all, because your food is always way better than mine.”
” Thanks you’re sweet, but it doesn’t help me out with my dilemma!
” Alice, I really don’t have a clue! Did you invited Tina and Bette?”
” Bette has a meeting, but Tina’s coming.”
” Cool, so see ya then!”
Alice doesn’t even have the time to talk back that Shane has already hung up. And Alice decides to prepare something simple but tasty Time is ticking
ALICE’S PLACE 7:30 PM
Tina knocks on Alice’s door, with a bottle of wine in her hands
Alice opens up.
” Hello sweets! How are you? ” Tina enters and Alice gives her a hug. Alice closes the front door, grabs Tina’s coat and hangs it in the closet, than, she takes the bottle of red wine and puts it on the kitchen counter. Everything is ready, the food (it smells good), the table is set (and it’s perfectly done), music is playing (Ry Cooder). Everything suggests that it’s going to be a nice evening.
Alice asks Tina to open a bottle of wine. Tina executes herself They’re talking while Alice is doing the last minute preparation for diner.
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I hope you see this as the constructive comment it is intended to be.
I realize that Meg is your character, and since it was taking so long (10 chapters) for the mystery person to be revealed, I started loosing my zest to see if anything new had been posted.
Yes, you reeled me in and I remained glued here, but IMO, the mystery would have carried more weight and made the suspense worth it, IF the mystery person had been someone we were familiar with…..unless there’s a Meg floating around that I am unaware of.
Somehow, I feel that the fizzle is gone.