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Secret Love chapter 10
ALICE’S HOUSE 8:00 PM
Shane knocks on Alice’s front door. Alice walks to door and opens.
” Hey! Shane! Come in!” Alice take Shane’s coat and hangs it in the closet next to Tina’s. Alice give a hug to Shane.
Shane never felt that comfortable since the whole come back thing and emotional struggle she has. She starts crying directly in Alice’s arms.
Tina gets her head of the kitchen to see what’s going on. She sees Shane in a terrible mood. And she goes to them. And says : ” Shane! I never saw you this unhappy! What’s going on?”
” I’m a little bit confuse”
” A little bit? You’re crying like a baby! Tell us what’s on your mind!”
As Alice, Shane and Tina walk back to the kitchen, Shane is crying
” I don’t know what to do! (sniff)”
Tina puts her hand on Shane’s shoulder and pulls a chair. Shane sits down.
Alice says : ” Do you want to start from the beginning?”
So Shane explains to Alice and Tina what’s the deal, what’s the situation That since the love of her life is back in town, she’s confused and don’t know what to do She also explain everything that has been said between them
As Shane was telling her story, Alice prepared the plates and put them on the table Everyone was terribly hungry so no one had to beg to make them eat
Shane : ” So I don’t know how to react, what to do with all this?”
Tina : ” You should think of what’s best for you and nevermind the rest.”
Alice : ” And you should take some time for you, please yourself, relax, take a walk”
Tina : ” You should focus on you and only you, I mean determine you goals, what you want as a future”
Alice : ” You should stay calm and examine all options and do a pros and cons list of all this”
Tina : ” Because now, it’s all in your head and nothing came out of there Putting everything down on a piece of paper will certainly help you to see clearer.”
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I hope you see this as the constructive comment it is intended to be.
I realize that Meg is your character, and since it was taking so long (10 chapters) for the mystery person to be revealed, I started loosing my zest to see if anything new had been posted.
Yes, you reeled me in and I remained glued here, but IMO, the mystery would have carried more weight and made the suspense worth it, IF the mystery person had been someone we were familiar with…..unless there’s a Meg floating around that I am unaware of.
Somehow, I feel that the fizzle is gone.