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Secret Love chapter 10
Shane : ” So you’re saying to clear my head before taking any decisions?”
Alice : ” That’s what we’re saying.”
Shane : ” Maybe I should talk to my girlfriend about all this, she’s the closest person”
Tina interrupts : ” NO! Bad idea! Do you really want to get hurt again? Don’t say anything to her.
Alice : ” Tina’s right!”
Tina : ” I know that you want to be honest with her but it ain’t the best thing to do, you’ll hurt her more than it’s going to hurt you And anyway, she probably knows that something is going on, she ain’t stupid you know!”
Shane : ” She knows, she asked And I said that I was tired and overwhelmed by a lot of things, like work, lack of sleep, not having the time to eat properly Those kinds of things.”
Alice : ” The line between in playing in someone’s back and being honest topped with a little white lie is very slim.”
Shane : ” Actually, my girlfriend don’t know that I I kinda
Tina : ” You?”
Alice : ” hummm? Slept with Meg?”
Shane : ” Uh! Uh! I know it was a bad idea, but I felt so good with her! Since she’s back! She’s not the Meg I used to know! She’s a different person now! She was standing there, she made me come in her house, I was soaking wet and you know, she offered me to stay over, to dry my clothes and so on! I know I shouldn’t have done it But now, frankly, it’s too *****’ late! Plus I loved the experience, once again!”
Tina : ” You needed her to be close and that’s it! But does your girlfriend knows anything about this?”
Shane : ” You nuts? No! Of course not! I didn’t say anything and I’m counting on you to stay quiet about this in front of her.”
Tina : ” No words will come out!”
Alice : ” Promise!”
Alice gets up and take away the empty plates and useless utensils. Puts everything in the kitchen sink and comes back to the diner table and sits down.
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I hope you see this as the constructive comment it is intended to be.
I realize that Meg is your character, and since it was taking so long (10 chapters) for the mystery person to be revealed, I started loosing my zest to see if anything new had been posted.
Yes, you reeled me in and I remained glued here, but IMO, the mystery would have carried more weight and made the suspense worth it, IF the mystery person had been someone we were familiar with…..unless there’s a Meg floating around that I am unaware of.
Somehow, I feel that the fizzle is gone.