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Seemingly Lost Chptr. 16
“Of course.”
“So why didn’t you stop Tina from dissolving into a submissive woman?”
“Because Tina said she was happy. She said that’s what she wanted, I never wanted her to be unhappy.”
“But an alcoholic might say the same thing.”
“Oh come on those are two totally different situations.”
“Is it really? You see your friend becoming someone else, someone they wouldn’t be if this toxic person or thing wasn’t in their lives. It is the same thing, Justine seems to be just as bad as alcohol turning Tina inward and acquiescent. The only thing that’s different is the effects.”
“What the fuck is your major going to be, psychology?”
“Just call me Dr. Raine.”
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Bette pulled the car to a stop in front of the house. Sure enough everything looked just as she remembered, the quintessential plantation style house of the South. Older model Chevy with the hood up in the front off to the side, a tire swing hanging from a large oak tree. The big white pillars seemed taller and bit more imposing as she sat in her car trying to get her mind around what she was about to do. She was still sitting in the seat when a loud bag proceeding a short shriek pulled her from her thoughts.
“If you don’t turn off them lights you’re gonna blind me.”
Startled by the voice she quickly reached to turn off the lights, turning on the wipers and spraying cleaner in the process. After a few attempts the lights faded, she couldn’t believe Tina was standing in front of her. Not at all looking surprised by her presence. She looked harder and sure enough there was Tina coming down the stairs, her hair was loose and had fallen forward covering some of her face and her cowboy boots were loud on the old hollow steps. Her walk was steady and from Bette’s point of view it seemed almost hesitant. She approached the car and looked at Bette for the first time in weeks, the sight of her alone drew a slight tingle in the small of her back and butterflies in her stomach, suddenly she didn’t know what to say to her friend. The only thing that came to mind was, “Momma said you’d better get in here before all of the cake is gone.”
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So good to see a post of this story… Hope you won’t post again soon ’cause i’m big fan of this fic
Yes!! So glad to see you & this story back..looking forward to the next one when we’ll have B&T’s talk “in the light of day” :)
I am so happy to see this story back. I’m glad Tina’ family is sympathetic to Bette’ plight. She knows she hurt Tina badly, but she was trying to save her from an even greater hurt. I hope they get to talk without a lot of yelling. I really love this story and hope you continue to write it to the and I can’t wait to read the next chapter even sporadic posts are better than none at all. Keep writing please.
glad to see you back…hopefully B&T can sort it out, it’s about time for them consider their feelings for each other
Woah I totally forgot about this story! Glad your back:) PPS
What a nice surprise. I love this story. PPS
Glad to see this post. been missed Hope that Bette and Tina will be able to solve what is going on between them. Post soon.
welcome back!!! good thing i have you under favorite authors..lol ;)
Glad that you are back. At least they are in the same house. Hopefully they will air out all of their issues soon.
That was good and let see they talk!
I was thinking about this story last night before I went to bed. Glad you are back, Netta. pps
doing my little happy dance seeing that u posted, can’t wait for more!!!!
I had to rush back and look for the first chapter. You’re name alteration confused me a bit but I got it after a while. I love this story and how you’ve written it. My heart can feel the emotions written on every chapter. Thanks for posting and PPS
Glad to see your post!!! I do hope Bette and Tina sit down and really talk. Thank you Please post when you can.