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Sensory Overload
“No, nothings wrong. In fact, everything seems to be just right.”
Then, she smiles and I melt once again. I smile back and wrap my arms around her and pull her in against me.
“It’s ok T. I’ve got you and I don’t plan on letting go.”
She tilts her head up and whispers in my ear, “will you kiss me babe?”
Sense #5:Taste
Taste is the sensory impression of food or other substances on the tongue. It is the sensation produced when a substance in the mouth reacts chemically with taste receptor cells located on taste buds. The chemical substance responsible for the taste is freed in the mouth and comes into contact with a nerve cell. It activates the cell by changing specific proteins in the wall of the sensory cell. This change causes the sensory cell to transmit messenger substances, which in turn activate further nerve cells. These nerve cells then pass information for a particular perception of flavor on to the brain.
Like I said, up to this moment we had been very reserved in the physical aspect of our budding relationship. I have done my absolute best to be patient and chivalrous and let her lead in her own timing. So far we managed a few innocent hugs, lots of hand holding, chaste kisses, and then last night’s introduction of “sleeping” together.
I pull back and come face to face with her once again. I’m guessing by the way she’s looking at me that she’s expecting this to be anything but chaste! I raise my brows as if to say ‘are you sure?‘She gives a silent nod.
I cup her cheeks gently with my palms and start to lean in. Everything is happening in slow motion. I’m trying desperately to calm the pounding in my chest and the ringing in my ears. I have been dreaming of this moment for 2 months. Our lips brush against each other barely touching. I want more. She wants more. I can feel the rising in her chest. I know she wants this as much as I do. I push in. After our lips have agreed to the merger, I glide my tongue slowly over her bottom lip requesting access. Access granted.
Sweet serendipity!
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(20 votes, average: 4.85 out of 5)
Absolutely loved it. Had me laughing. Thanks
This was so good, it made me smile the whole time.
You have a unique way to tell your story and i absolute love the way you wrote about Bette’s insights.
It was very funny.
Now look at you, RR, you are 2 funny! You’ve done it again! Toldya’ you’d write page turner updates. Tko’d by Tina?….naw…more like ‘pussywhipped’ my dear. I can imagine your “NC17” posts…now that’s gonna be worth waiting for! Hope you keep posting and soon…you had me lmfao the whole time I was reading…made my day! You’re a great writer, keep up the great work! Enjoy your weekend…
Very intriguing,very detailed and entertaining, well researched and I love every minute of it, this should definitely keep going ready for next chapter…
Yes I agree we need another chapter pretty please by the way this was so good pps.
fantastic! Loved all the details of this story.
Bette and Tina love.
I was also dry mouth, reading the thoughts of Bette.
You’re a great writer.
Congratulations!
anxious for a new chapter…
You have the ability to make me actually laugh, not just when I am reading it, but later as I recall the story. That is something to cherish. Please continue with this story.
Thanks everyone for all the positive feedback!
It’s such an incredible feeling to know that something I created can make so many people happy. :)
Bless you all for taking the time to read! More to come, I promise. Please be patient with me though.
Agree wholeheartedly with all the Comments! Made me LOL but also I retained a smile on my face and a warm feeling in the region of my heart. Love this couple together and in love! Great writing please do more!
Thanks! I love Bette like this in their relationship. By that I mean unsure of herself! Too cute! PPS
Love it,please continue writing.
I really liked it. I love your sense of humor. as I read the story, through a smile on my face, I loved the detailed description of Bette.
I really love the way you write your story.
I look forward to the next chapter.
Brilliant. The “major Tom” bit made me laugh like a maniac for some reason. (and now that song is stuck in my head, lol)
Very enjoyable glad there will be more to come. A fun read for sure.
Great story and funny. Can’t wait for the next post. Maybe some nc17, hint hint. Thanks
Lovely tale! So emotional and yet funny. I wish we could see this story of yours going forward. Thank you!
Loved it!! Thank you
Great story loved it..