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    Sharmen: I Gotta Go…Part17

    Story written on September 5, 2005 by CasperFanFirst.
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    Truths are told, Shane heads back to where it all began… and doesn’t come home.

    “You can stay here if you want to sweetheart, I don’t mind. Carmen? Carmen? Baby are you okay?” Shane bent her head, trying to look in Carmen’s eyes as she shook her shoulders very gently. She finally looked up into Shane’s eyes, she had no idea how long she had been standing in the doorway, or how long Shane had been shaking her. She looked very scared and upset but as she looked from Shane to her mother, she couldn’t decide what to do.

    “Baby? Maybe you want to stay here and talk to you mom, alone? Or come back home?” Shane asked with an even amount of emotion in both so it wouldn’t seem like she wanted one more than the other. Carmen didn’t seem to hear the words but she turned and walked off the porch in a lost way. She walked to the drivers side of Shane’s beater as Shane followed slowly behind, observing. Then she remembered she had to get in on the passengers side and turned around. Shane wrapped her arms around her shoulders and led her to the passenger’s side and shut the door soundly. She then walked to her side and got in, looking at Carmen before shutting the door.

    “Car? She’s going to be okay. She’s just shocked, we couldn’t have expected anything else right?” Carmen stared out the front window without speaking. She had never acted like this before and Shane was scared. “Baby, can you hear me? Your scaring me, C” Shane’s shaking hand fluttered to Carmen’s shoulder. She flinched but didn’t seem to be aware she was there.

    “Carmen!” Shane shook her shoulder after a minute of trying to coax her out of her silent state. Carmen stared out the windshield still. But now her eyes stared tearing. She had no life behind her eyes as tears streamed down her face and she made no attempt to wipe them away. Shane leaned in and kissed Carmen’s lips softly, then brushed the pads of her thumbs down Carmen’s cheek. “Baby please answer me, I’m scared.” Shane whispered quietly as Carmen stopped crying and blinked. She seemed to come back to herself and she looked at Shane apologetically.

    “I’m sorry. I just think, I think I need to go home and think, okay?” Carmen asked. Shane nodded and made no move to drive away. Instead she stared deep into Carmen’s eyes, checking to see if she was fully okay. Carmen leaned in and pecked Shane’s lips as she stared intently. “I’ll be okay I think. I just need to go home, alright baby? I need to get away from here for now.” Shane nodded again, kissed Carmen on the cheek, and put the truck in gear.

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    1. F#*%ing EXCELLENT! I loved it. For a minute there I thought Shane was going to a dealer. Its so typical and sweet of Shane to take matters into her own hands. Glad it worked out for them. Also liked how you wrote Mercedes, as a conflicted mother who loves her child but doesn’t understand her lifestyle. I could go on & on w/ praise but I’ll stop short by once again stating Great Job. Post soon

    9. I just discovered your story, and read all 17 parts over the past 3 days. I am so into this things its ridiculous, you are such an imaginative writer and you usually wrap things up at the end of each part so we don’t walk away with someone being totally pissed at someone else and we’re hanging on the edge, yet we still have that degree of wondering. I give you props for that, its a hard thing to do, and I look forward to more!

    11. Oh My God…. Can you believe I actually thought you were going to break them up again cuz if you would have that would have been like so messed up anyways this story is like so freakin’ cool the whole time I’ve been reading it, it has had me at the edge of my seat I totally love it. You are an amazing writer and should really continue this story till the end which I hope isn’t any time soon :P
      But please do continue your great work and if it’s not too much to ask update soon Please I’m dying to know what’s going to happen to them next :P

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