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    Sharmen: I Gotta Go…Part17

    Story written on September 5, 2005 by CasperFanFirst.
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    Truths are told, Shane heads back to where it all began… and doesn’t come home.

    She hadn’t come home last night. At all. Carmen didn’t know whether to be livid, or accusing or distant so she opted for all of the above. But mostly she was just scared. Scared because she was so confused, scared because she didn’t know what to do about her mother, scared because she didn’t know what was going on with Shane, scared because she didn’t have the strength to ask, and scared because Shane knew all this and still wasn’t acting like her normal, protective, caring self. She could have bawled right there but instead she bit her lip on the inside until she drew blood and blinked fiercely at her muffin.

    Shane watched her out of the corner of her eye. They sat on opposite ends of the couch and everyone noticed. Shane didn’t know what to do, how to go about this. She was thinking too hard about trying to do all the right things, that she was doing all the wrong things.

    She shuffled her bum down the couch until she was right beside Carmen. For some reason it felt awkward and Carmen turned her body away from Shane slightly, as she was already pressed up against the arm of the couch.

    “I-” Shane stopped and couldn’t help but smile to herself. “What are you doing?” She asked with laughter in her voice. Carmen looked up with fire in her eyes. She had decided the way she wanted to react. Livid. But one look in Shane’s eyes

    She looked in the direction of her gaze. She was still pulling the carrots out of her carrot muffin and she hadn’t even noticed. She looked up at Shane and gave her an almost smile, then remembered and looked away sheepishly.

    “I bought a carrot muffin.” Shane realized that’s all she was going to say and smiled wider at her girlfriends cuteness.

    “And”

    “And I decided I don’t want a carrot muffin,” Carmen said softly and looked away again. Shane smiled and leaned in towards Carmen, one hand on her knee, one on the back of the couch. She nestled her nose behind Carmen’s ear and chuckled hoarsely. Shane didn’t see the pained look her girlfriend issued as she greedily enjoyed the moment but hated herself for doing so but though Shane didn’t see it, everyone else did.

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    1. F#*%ing EXCELLENT! I loved it. For a minute there I thought Shane was going to a dealer. Its so typical and sweet of Shane to take matters into her own hands. Glad it worked out for them. Also liked how you wrote Mercedes, as a conflicted mother who loves her child but doesn’t understand her lifestyle. I could go on & on w/ praise but I’ll stop short by once again stating Great Job. Post soon

    9. I just discovered your story, and read all 17 parts over the past 3 days. I am so into this things its ridiculous, you are such an imaginative writer and you usually wrap things up at the end of each part so we don’t walk away with someone being totally pissed at someone else and we’re hanging on the edge, yet we still have that degree of wondering. I give you props for that, its a hard thing to do, and I look forward to more!

    11. Oh My God…. Can you believe I actually thought you were going to break them up again cuz if you would have that would have been like so messed up anyways this story is like so freakin’ cool the whole time I’ve been reading it, it has had me at the edge of my seat I totally love it. You are an amazing writer and should really continue this story till the end which I hope isn’t any time soon :P
      But please do continue your great work and if it’s not too much to ask update soon Please I’m dying to know what’s going to happen to them next :P

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