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    Sharmen: I Gotta Go…Part17

    “Where are you? I just fell asleep on the couch and I woke up and you were gone,” the voice dropped to an almost inaudible sound. “I miss you.”

    Shane cringed and shut her eyes as she heart began hurting. That thread above her belly button was pulled tighter and she felt the unbearable need to turn around and drive right back into the arms of her red-eyed lover.

    “I’m out. I needed to do something, no big deal,” Shane’s voice dropped here also as she purred the words comfortingly, “I’m sorry you woke up and I wasn’t there. I’ll never let it happen again.” Carmen’s voice laughed softly and Shane bit her lip, her eyes welling with tears. “Never.” She repeated and Carmen immediately stopped laughing, she knew Shane was serious. And Shane never made a serious promise that she didn’t keep.

    “I love you,” Carmen said softly, rubbing her cheek into the phone and closing her eyes, picturing Shane with her instead.

    “I l- I got to go Carmen- bye,” Shane sounded distant as the phone snapped shut quickly in her ear. Carmen pulled the phone back and looked at it shocked, almost wanting the phone to give her the answers to the questions pounding in her head. She held the phone in front of her, without turning it off, half listening, as if hoping for her voice to come back again, muffled as she held the phone away. But it didn’t happen so Carmen hung it up, biting her lip nervously as she always did and raking a hand through her hair as it fell back into place almost immediately.

    Chapter 41

    Carmen sat down with her muffin, picking the carrots out thoughtfully. She’d drive her slender fingers into the top and grope for the orange vegetable, then pinch it between her fingers and pull it out, put it on her napkin, and start again. She didn’t hear the bell ring. She didn’t see anyone sit beside her. She didn’t see the small army of women that followed in her wake and sat down around the small wicker table. She was far away- thinking.

    A warm hand slid around her neck and a kiss was planted behind her ear lobe. She shiver and looked up into the intruders face. Her girlfriend. She pulled her head away and sat back into the cushions, her eyes lifting up lazily as she noticed everyone was there, all talking and laughing. She avoided looking at Shane because she knew she was probably looking back at her.

    Comments

    1. F#*%ing EXCELLENT! I loved it. For a minute there I thought Shane was going to a dealer. Its so typical and sweet of Shane to take matters into her own hands. Glad it worked out for them. Also liked how you wrote Mercedes, as a conflicted mother who loves her child but doesn’t understand her lifestyle. I could go on & on w/ praise but I’ll stop short by once again stating Great Job. Post soon

    2. I just discovered your story, and read all 17 parts over the past 3 days. I am so into this things its ridiculous, you are such an imaginative writer and you usually wrap things up at the end of each part so we don’t walk away with someone being totally pissed at someone else and we’re hanging on the edge, yet we still have that degree of wondering. I give you props for that, its a hard thing to do, and I look forward to more!

    3. Oh My God…. Can you believe I actually thought you were going to break them up again cuz if you would have that would have been like so messed up anyways this story is like so freakin’ cool the whole time I’ve been reading it, it has had me at the edge of my seat I totally love it. You are an amazing writer and should really continue this story till the end which I hope isn’t any time soon :P
      But please do continue your great work and if it’s not too much to ask update soon Please I’m dying to know what’s going to happen to them next :P

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