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Sharmen: I Gotta Go…Part17
Alice almost spilt her coffee but Dana shushed her and stopped the tipping, forgotten cup, without tearing her eyes away from the two. Bette cleared her throat, obviously she thought it was none of their business and they should go on pretending they hadn’t been watching them, but the others didn’t agree.
“How bout we fix that? I’ll be right back,” Shane said as she took the napkin and muffin from Carmen and put in on the table, then got up to get her a plain muffin with extra butter. Carmen looked around helplessly, oblivious to the fact that her friends had see everything. She bit her lip and looked closed to tears as she fought with herself inside. She shook her head and grabbed her purse, attempting to make a quick getaway but everyone else had had enough.
“Car?” Drew asked softly and Carmen’s head snapped around as she stood up, as if noticing for the first time that she was even there. Her eyes went wide as she looked at her friends faces and saw that they had seen everything. She cursed herself for wearing her emotions on her sleeve.
“What?” She was going to act stupid and wait for a reply but she knew she probably wouldn’t like the one that was coming so she smile brightly and snorted, “I’m fine! Sheesh, just cramps that time of the month. Uhm bye,” she had been backing away as she spoke and she turned on her heel quickly and made attempt to run for it but instead dove behind a plant as Shane came around the corner, then waited till she was behind her peripheral vision and snuck out, making a beeline for the door. Everyone could see this, but Shane could only see their faces as she stood their stupidly with the new muffin.
Bette went to stand up at the same time as Drew, Drew looked at Bette who nodded and shot out the door after Carmen, all before Shane even had a chance to blink.
“What?” No answer. “Hey where’s Carmen?” No answer. “Bathroom?” No answer. “Okay, ***** whatever.” She turned around and followed their gaze as she sat down but there was no one there.
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(74 votes, average: 3.55 out of 5)
F#*%ing EXCELLENT! I loved it. For a minute there I thought Shane was going to a dealer. Its so typical and sweet of Shane to take matters into her own hands. Glad it worked out for them. Also liked how you wrote Mercedes, as a conflicted mother who loves her child but doesn’t understand her lifestyle. I could go on & on w/ praise but I’ll stop short by once again stating Great Job. Post soon
great chapter, so many ups and downs. great stuff
I love this story. Thanks for keeping it real…. I’m excited for the next chapter already.
Post again soon. Great story. Can’t get enough of carmen and shane.
I’ve been hooked on this story from chapter one,it’s great.Post more soon please.
another amazing chapter…i love this story!! please post soon.
I’ve just read your story as always. It’s greatest post. You rock!
you got me worried awhile! for a moment i thought they were over =)
I just discovered your story, and read all 17 parts over the past 3 days. I am so into this things its ridiculous, you are such an imaginative writer and you usually wrap things up at the end of each part so we don’t walk away with someone being totally pissed at someone else and we’re hanging on the edge, yet we still have that degree of wondering. I give you props for that, its a hard thing to do, and I look forward to more!
amazing!!! this was awesome, really!!! good job!
Oh My God…. Can you believe I actually thought you were going to break them up again cuz if you would have that would have been like so messed up anyways this story is like so freakin’ cool the whole time I’ve been reading it, it has had me at the edge of my seat I totally love it. You are an amazing writer and should really continue this story till the end which I hope isn’t any time soon :P
But please do continue your great work and if it’s not too much to ask update soon Please I’m dying to know what’s going to happen to them next :P
Great, Amazing story. When is the next chapter?