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Shipwrecked!, Ch. 1
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Working together, Shane and Dana quickly got Jenny, Kit, and Helena safely into the water. The small group in the water had begun to drift away from the remains of the boat, despite their best efforts, and shouted for the others to hurry.
Carmen clung to Shane. “I don’t wanna go without you. You don’t even have a vest on.”
Shane kissed her forehead and smiled reassuringly. “I’ll be fine. Go with the group before they float too far away. I just want to make sure that Dana and Al get out of here safely, too. I’ll be right behind you, I promise.”
Looking slightly teary-eyed, Carmen obeyed, going into the sea and trying to get with the rest of the group.
Practically swimming now, Shane made her way over to Alice and Dana. “Come on, guys. This is it. We’d better go.”
Alice sighed. “You two go on. I’ll be there in a second.”
“Al,” Dana began to argue.
“Just go!” Alice argued sharply, turning away.
Shane and Dana quickly got into the water, struggling against the waves as they began to swim toward their floating group of friends, Dana quickly pulling a little farther away, as she was the stronger swimmer of the two.
Perching on the little bit of boat that was left, Alice put her head in her hands. “I didn’t mean for this to happen,” she mumbled aloud. Shaking her head, she looked around her. “Well, there goes my deposit on this stupid boat.”
Shane turned back to see Alice hadn’t got off the boat yet. “Come on, Al!” she screamed, nearly taking in a mouthful of seawater as she did so.
Hearing Shane’s voice, Dana turned around and shouted to Alice also. She could hear the group behind her all yelling at Alice to come on.
Standing shakily, her heart pounding, Alice surveyed the water around her. Okay, here goes nothing. Just as she stepped forward to enter the water, a wave threw the remains of the boat around, causing her to slip and fall face first in to the water, inhaling a large amount of salt water as she did so.
“Shit!” Shane cursed aloud, watching Alice go under and not seeing her come back up. She turned and began to swim back, fighting against the waves.
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OH SHIT! I cant wait to read more@!!!
This is great! I love action adventure. Please post soon… you left us hanging in suspense.
Land them on the same island as giligan! Alice could go out with Ginger to make Dana jelous.post soon =)
*CLAPS* Very well done, this is the originality I’ve been hoping for. Please, keep going you now have me intrigued
OMG!!! This is really exciting stuff. I love lots of drama and action! Hope they all get out of the water ok! Dana might realise how much Alice means to her now, thinkin that she may have lost her. Lovin it already so keep it up. Thanks.
OMG…no, you can’t stop here? Where will they end up? I need to know if the’re all going to be ok? Alice? Shane? I loved the way you portray the interactions between the gang. It brought me back to the feeling I had watching S1.
Very cool. I have missed your stories! This is super exciting! Glad to see you back. Post again soon :)
I’ve really missed your stories, so I am REALLY glad that you started a new one. Excellent start, and I can’t wait to see where you take us with it. You’re such a talented writer, and you really do bring back the good, fun season 1 feel to the girls! :-) (But I would love you even more if Danish worked it out!!)
Haha! Fox, you’re back too! How wonderful to ‘see’ you. As always, I expect the expected from your stories, one of the many reasons why it’s always such a thrill to read them. So who’s gonna die? :D No more hooky eh
About time you showed yourself back on here! It has been waaay too long. I’m loving The Lost Word, but since they’re on an island, having them run Baywatch-style wouldn’t hurt the next time someone drowns… Just a suggestion. Glad to see you back and writing again!
Wow… just, WOW!!!! That is such an awesome story! Actually, more than awesome!! I`m already addicted to it, loved it!!! Please continue soon!
holy crap! Something different and I enjoyed it. Hope you continue.
Awesome, keep going
hopefull u’re not gonna kill anyone, and we’re gonna get loads of B & T sex on the beach….shane & carmen too, BOT MORE B & T…..lol
Interesting and exciting new take on our girls from WeHo. Please continue
Just sit right back and you’ll hear a tale, a tale of a fateful trip.That started from this tropic port,aboard this tiny ship… Sorry wrong show. =) Very good story, I can’t wait to read what happens next.
Dang! Now there’s some drama for you on a Saturday morning!! Welcome back…sorry to hear you are going through some not so fun parts of life. Just try to remember…everything is temporary. Thanks!
Great start! but why Shane had to get hurt?? awww she is my favorite so please let her be ok :P I cant wait for next chapter :)
You came back with a big bang. hope all tthe girls are alright. The should have taken Helena ship. Alice thing want get her desposit back. thanks
I was totally amazed when I saw that you were back and so very excited! Your comeback has me hanging on the edge.. what a fantastic story line. You better not leave again… I’ll beg if I have to but it wouldn’t be pretty, lol. Please post again soon! Yay, Forefire’s back and is amazing as ever!
Wow, what an awesome story. Nothing like a little blood to attract the sharks.
Just read your fic again today. I know, I already left a comment, but this one is so beyond well-written! I love it so much and please … as a “Shipwrecked addict”, I need more!!! *smile*
Hey FF, Fabulous to have you back on the site and post such an unique and inticing story. A cross between Lost and Pirates of the Carribean comes to mind and nowt wrong with that in my book. Absolutely hysterical from Kit’s cell phnoe home run pitch to losing her hat. Alice replacing the lifeboat with a cooler. Too few lifejackets… Brilliant and I can’t wait to see what Chapter 2 brings. Thank you so much for coming back and adding this hilarity to my life. Your gratiful and Loyal Fan.
Loving the start of this, can’t wait to see where it goes so update soon please!!. little bit off topic but any chance of some more danish PWP?