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Shipwrecked!, Ch. 1
Alice, squinting through the pummeling rain, saw the useless radio in Helena’s hand. Glancing at the wires hanging off the instrument panel, she groaned.
Using all her strength, Tina pulled herself upright and stood up using the bench for support. “Life jackets!” she shouted, cupping her hands around her mouth.
Glancing behind her, and noticing with terror that the other side of the boat was nearly half underwater, Bette began grabbing at the pile of life jackets, finding as many as she could and passing them out.
“Weakest swimmers first,” Dana advised, grabbing a few more wayward vests.
Bette nodded, pulling Jenny toward her and hurriedly helping her strap into one. Working as quickly as possible, Dana was doing the same with Kit. Working together, the pair had gotten more than half the group safely into life jackets when another strong wave pushed the boat around once more, sweeping all of the vests but one overboard.
Quickly throwing herself atop the remaining life jacket, Bette turned back up to look at Dana. “Who gets it?”
Pushing her stringy, rain-soaked hair from her eyes, Dana glanced around to see that only herself, Bette, Shane, and Alice remained without vests.
“You take it,” Alice instructed, stumbling over to them to help Bette slip into the life jacket.
“All right, into the water!” Helena shouted above the howling wind, taking charge.
“One at a time!” Shane added, sloshing through knee-deep water toward the side of the boat.
“We’re barely afloat. We need to hurry,” Bette yelled into Shane’s ear.
Shane acknowledged her by merely nodding and taking her arm. “Into the water.”
Taking a deep breath, Bette made the tiny leap off what was left of the boat and into the freezing, wild ocean. She gasped as water splashed into her face, nearly choking her, grateful for the life jacket that kept her afloat. Coughing slightly, she looked back to the boat and held out her arms. “Next person!” she shouted.
Helping Tina to the railing, Dana shouted for her to be careful before sending her into the water. Gasping at the cold shock of the water, Tina grabbed for Bette, grateful to feel her warm arms around her. Giving Tina a kiss with shivering lips, she turned away determinedly, holding out her arms once more. “Next!”
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(51 votes, average: 3.29 out of 5)
OH SHIT! I cant wait to read more@!!!
This is great! I love action adventure. Please post soon… you left us hanging in suspense.
Land them on the same island as giligan! Alice could go out with Ginger to make Dana jelous.post soon =)
*CLAPS* Very well done, this is the originality I’ve been hoping for. Please, keep going you now have me intrigued
OMG!!! This is really exciting stuff. I love lots of drama and action! Hope they all get out of the water ok! Dana might realise how much Alice means to her now, thinkin that she may have lost her. Lovin it already so keep it up. Thanks.
OMG…no, you can’t stop here? Where will they end up? I need to know if the’re all going to be ok? Alice? Shane? I loved the way you portray the interactions between the gang. It brought me back to the feeling I had watching S1.
Very cool. I have missed your stories! This is super exciting! Glad to see you back. Post again soon :)
I’ve really missed your stories, so I am REALLY glad that you started a new one. Excellent start, and I can’t wait to see where you take us with it. You’re such a talented writer, and you really do bring back the good, fun season 1 feel to the girls! :-) (But I would love you even more if Danish worked it out!!)
Haha! Fox, you’re back too! How wonderful to ‘see’ you. As always, I expect the expected from your stories, one of the many reasons why it’s always such a thrill to read them. So who’s gonna die? :D No more hooky eh
About time you showed yourself back on here! It has been waaay too long. I’m loving The Lost Word, but since they’re on an island, having them run Baywatch-style wouldn’t hurt the next time someone drowns… Just a suggestion. Glad to see you back and writing again!
Wow… just, WOW!!!! That is such an awesome story! Actually, more than awesome!! I`m already addicted to it, loved it!!! Please continue soon!
holy crap! Something different and I enjoyed it. Hope you continue.
Awesome, keep going
hopefull u’re not gonna kill anyone, and we’re gonna get loads of B & T sex on the beach….shane & carmen too, BOT MORE B & T…..lol
Interesting and exciting new take on our girls from WeHo. Please continue
Just sit right back and you’ll hear a tale, a tale of a fateful trip.That started from this tropic port,aboard this tiny ship… Sorry wrong show. =) Very good story, I can’t wait to read what happens next.
Dang! Now there’s some drama for you on a Saturday morning!! Welcome back…sorry to hear you are going through some not so fun parts of life. Just try to remember…everything is temporary. Thanks!
Great start! but why Shane had to get hurt?? awww she is my favorite so please let her be ok :P I cant wait for next chapter :)
You came back with a big bang. hope all tthe girls are alright. The should have taken Helena ship. Alice thing want get her desposit back. thanks
I was totally amazed when I saw that you were back and so very excited! Your comeback has me hanging on the edge.. what a fantastic story line. You better not leave again… I’ll beg if I have to but it wouldn’t be pretty, lol. Please post again soon! Yay, Forefire’s back and is amazing as ever!
Wow, what an awesome story. Nothing like a little blood to attract the sharks.
Just read your fic again today. I know, I already left a comment, but this one is so beyond well-written! I love it so much and please … as a “Shipwrecked addict”, I need more!!! *smile*
Hey FF, Fabulous to have you back on the site and post such an unique and inticing story. A cross between Lost and Pirates of the Carribean comes to mind and nowt wrong with that in my book. Absolutely hysterical from Kit’s cell phnoe home run pitch to losing her hat. Alice replacing the lifeboat with a cooler. Too few lifejackets… Brilliant and I can’t wait to see what Chapter 2 brings. Thank you so much for coming back and adding this hilarity to my life. Your gratiful and Loyal Fan.
Loving the start of this, can’t wait to see where it goes so update soon please!!. little bit off topic but any chance of some more danish PWP?