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Shipwrecked!, Ch. 1
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“Okay, Kit, what is it?” Bette demanded. “No, I’m not talking to you this time! Just hold on a moment.” Pulling the earpiece out of her ear, she looked at her sister. “Okay, what is it?”
“You’d better get your skinny ass off that phone and start paying attention to Tina over there before someone else does,” Kit warned, pointing to Tina, who had her head tipped back with happy laughter at something Helena had said.
Bette’s eyes narrowed as Helena laid a seemingly friendly hand on Tina’s arm, and anger quickly flashed across her features, before disappearing. “I’ll deal with that in a moment, Kit.”
“No, you’ll handle it right now,” Kit argued, suddenly snatching the phone from Bette and turning toward the rail, using all her might to toss the cell phone out into the open water, where it landed with a small splash.
Her eyes widening in horror, Bette yelled, “Kit! What the hell did you do that for?”
“You’re too busy on the phone to pay attention to your woman over there, and we all know how you can be when you get distracted,” Kit told her, hands on her hips.
Bette sighed and rubbed her face. “I appreciate your concern, but that was my new phone. And I just got my job back, so I’ve been trying as hard as I can to keep it this time.”
Kit shook her head. “Working your ass to death won’t make your life any better. Now get over there and enjoy yourself. Spend time with Tina. Go.” She made shooing motions at her sister, watching in satisfaction as Bette let out a small sigh but went to interrupt Helena and Tina’s conversation and pull the surprised blonde aside.
Pleased with her self, Kit turned away, only to have her hat fly off her head in the wind. Letting out a small shriek, she turned and watched it whip across the surface of the water until it disappeared from sight.
“Hope you don’t expect us to go back for it,” Dana joked, witnessing the scene.
Kit turned, laughing in spite of her self. “That damn hat was new.”
Meanwhile, Alice had spread a map out across the steering wheel and was peering at it with deep concentration, her glasses pulled down low on her nose and she studied the map intently. Turning her head slightly to consult another map, she shook her head to herself and quickly folded both maps up.
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OH SHIT! I cant wait to read more@!!!
This is great! I love action adventure. Please post soon… you left us hanging in suspense.
Land them on the same island as giligan! Alice could go out with Ginger to make Dana jelous.post soon =)
*CLAPS* Very well done, this is the originality I’ve been hoping for. Please, keep going you now have me intrigued
OMG!!! This is really exciting stuff. I love lots of drama and action! Hope they all get out of the water ok! Dana might realise how much Alice means to her now, thinkin that she may have lost her. Lovin it already so keep it up. Thanks.
OMG…no, you can’t stop here? Where will they end up? I need to know if the’re all going to be ok? Alice? Shane? I loved the way you portray the interactions between the gang. It brought me back to the feeling I had watching S1.
Very cool. I have missed your stories! This is super exciting! Glad to see you back. Post again soon :)
I’ve really missed your stories, so I am REALLY glad that you started a new one. Excellent start, and I can’t wait to see where you take us with it. You’re such a talented writer, and you really do bring back the good, fun season 1 feel to the girls! :-) (But I would love you even more if Danish worked it out!!)
Haha! Fox, you’re back too! How wonderful to ‘see’ you. As always, I expect the expected from your stories, one of the many reasons why it’s always such a thrill to read them. So who’s gonna die? :D No more hooky eh
About time you showed yourself back on here! It has been waaay too long. I’m loving The Lost Word, but since they’re on an island, having them run Baywatch-style wouldn’t hurt the next time someone drowns… Just a suggestion. Glad to see you back and writing again!
Wow… just, WOW!!!! That is such an awesome story! Actually, more than awesome!! I`m already addicted to it, loved it!!! Please continue soon!
holy crap! Something different and I enjoyed it. Hope you continue.
Awesome, keep going
hopefull u’re not gonna kill anyone, and we’re gonna get loads of B & T sex on the beach….shane & carmen too, BOT MORE B & T…..lol
Interesting and exciting new take on our girls from WeHo. Please continue
Just sit right back and you’ll hear a tale, a tale of a fateful trip.That started from this tropic port,aboard this tiny ship… Sorry wrong show. =) Very good story, I can’t wait to read what happens next.
Dang! Now there’s some drama for you on a Saturday morning!! Welcome back…sorry to hear you are going through some not so fun parts of life. Just try to remember…everything is temporary. Thanks!
Great start! but why Shane had to get hurt?? awww she is my favorite so please let her be ok :P I cant wait for next chapter :)
You came back with a big bang. hope all tthe girls are alright. The should have taken Helena ship. Alice thing want get her desposit back. thanks
I was totally amazed when I saw that you were back and so very excited! Your comeback has me hanging on the edge.. what a fantastic story line. You better not leave again… I’ll beg if I have to but it wouldn’t be pretty, lol. Please post again soon! Yay, Forefire’s back and is amazing as ever!
Wow, what an awesome story. Nothing like a little blood to attract the sharks.
Just read your fic again today. I know, I already left a comment, but this one is so beyond well-written! I love it so much and please … as a “Shipwrecked addict”, I need more!!! *smile*
Hey FF, Fabulous to have you back on the site and post such an unique and inticing story. A cross between Lost and Pirates of the Carribean comes to mind and nowt wrong with that in my book. Absolutely hysterical from Kit’s cell phnoe home run pitch to losing her hat. Alice replacing the lifeboat with a cooler. Too few lifejackets… Brilliant and I can’t wait to see what Chapter 2 brings. Thank you so much for coming back and adding this hilarity to my life. Your gratiful and Loyal Fan.
Loving the start of this, can’t wait to see where it goes so update soon please!!. little bit off topic but any chance of some more danish PWP?